Clean up wording, example

Colin Robertson · Colin Robertson · commit b982fb25e847 · 2018-05-14T11:12:09.000-07:00
diff --git a/docs/error-messages/compiler-errors-1/compiler-error-c2482.md b/docs/error-messages/compiler-errors-1/compiler-error-c2482.md
@@ -16,16 +16,18 @@ ms.workload: ["cplusplus"]
 
 >'*identifier*' : dynamic initialization of 'thread' data not allowed in managed/WinRT code
 
-In managed or WinRT code, variables declared by using the [__declspec(thread)](../../cpp/thread.md) storage class modifier attribute or the [thread_local](../../cpp/storage-classes-cpp.md#thread_local) storage class specifier cannot be initialized with an expression that requires run-time evaluation. A static expression is required to initialize `__declspec(thread)` or `thread_local` data.
+## Remarks
+
+In managed or WinRT code, variables declared by using the [__declspec(thread)](../../cpp/thread.md) storage class modifier attribute or the [thread_local](../../cpp/storage-classes-cpp.md#thread_local) storage class specifier cannot be initialized with an expression that requires run-time evaluation. A static expression is required to initialize `__declspec(thread)` or `thread_local` data in these runtime environments.
 
 ## Example
 
-The following sample generates C2482 in managed (**/clr**) and and WinRT (**/ZW**) code:
+The following sample generates C2482 in managed (**/clr**) and in WinRT (**/ZW**) code:
 
 ```cpp
 // C2482.cpp
-// For managed example, compile with: /EHsc /c /clr C2482.cpp
-// For WinRT example, compile with: /EHsc /c /ZW C2482.cpp
+// For managed example, compile with: cl /EHsc /c /clr C2482.cpp
+// For WinRT example, compile with: cl /EHsc /c /ZW C2482.cpp
 #define Thread __declspec( thread )
 Thread int tls_i1 = tls_i1;   // C2482
 
