Try to produce something easier to understand.

greg0ire · greg0ire · commit 128333eefce7 · 2012-10-16T22:23:57.000+02:00
diff --git a/cookbook/security/form_login.rst b/cookbook/security/form_login.rst
@@ -105,10 +105,11 @@ Redirecting after Success
 You can change where the login form redirects after a successful login using
 the various config options. By default the form will redirect to the URL the
 user requested (i.e. the URL which triggered the login form being shown).
-For example, if the user requested ``http://www.example.com/admin/post/18/edit``
-then after he/she will eventually be sent back to ``http://www.example.com/admin/post/18/edit`` 
-after successfully logging in. This is done by storing the requested URL
-in the session. If no URL is present in the session (perhaps the user went
+For example, if the user requested ``http://www.example.com/admin/post/18/edit``,
+then after he/she successfully logs in, he/she will eventually be sent back to
+``http://www.example.com/admin/post/18/edit``.
+This is done by storing the requested URL in the session.
+If no URL is present in the session (perhaps the user went
 directly to the login page), then the user is redirected to the default page,
 which is  ``/`` (i.e. the homepage) by default. You can change this behavior
 in several ways.
