[symfony#1909] Minor tweaks for refactoring away from "we" language

weaverryan · weaverryan · commit 2a26b5237508 · 2012-11-09T15:28:57.000-06:00
diff --git a/cookbook/routing/redirect_in_config.rst b/cookbook/routing/redirect_in_config.rst
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ How to configure a redirect to another route without a custom controller
 This guide explains how to configure a redirect from one route to another
 without using a custom controller.
 
-Let's assume that there is no useful default controller for the ``/`` path of
-your application and you want to redirect theses requests to ``/app``.
+Assume that there is no useful default controller for the ``/`` path of
+your application and you want to redirect these requests to ``/app``.
 
 Your configuration will look like this:
 
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@ Your configuration will look like this:
             path: /app
             permanent: true
 
-Your ``AppBundle`` is registered to handle all requests under ``/app``.
-
-You configure a route for the ``/`` path and let :class:`Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Controller\\RedirectController`
-handle it. This controller is built-in and offers two methods for redirecting request:
-
-* ``redirect`` redirects to another *route*. You must provide the ``route``
-  parameter with the *name* of the route you want to redirect to.
+In this example, you configure a route for the ``/`` path and let :class:`Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Controller\\RedirectController`
+handle it. This controller comes standard with Symfony and offers two actions
+for redirecting request:
 
 * ``urlRedirect`` redirects to another *path*. You must provide the ``path``
   parameter containing the path of the resource you want to redirect to.
 
-The ``permanent`` switch tells both methods to issue a 301 HTTP status code.
+* ``redirect`` (not shown here) redirects to another *route*. You must provide the ``route``
+  parameter with the *name* of the route you want to redirect to.
+
+The ``permanent`` switch tells both methods to issue a 301 HTTP status code
+instead of the default ``302`` status code.
diff --git a/cookbook/symfony1.rst b/cookbook/symfony1.rst
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ As you'll see, many tasks are tackled in a slightly different way. You'll
 come to appreciate these minor differences as they promote stable, predictable,
 testable and decoupled code in your Symfony2 applications.
 
-So, sit back and relax as your taken from "then" to "now".
+So, sit back and relax as you travel from "then" to "now".
 
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