Talk:Titan Quest: Immortal Throne/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

I'll do this one. I expect to get it done within a day or two.--IDVtalk 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead/infobox

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  • Intervals for the publishers should use – rather than -.
  • While fine to list in prose under a "release" heading, in the infobox we generally only list release dates for major English-speaking regions+region of the developer/publisher, so the Japanese release date should probably be removed.

Gameplay

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  • You should write NPCs as "non-playable characters" on the first mention.
  • I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it be "the player character attacks enemies highlighted with the mouse"? To me, "by the mouse" makes it sound like the mouse has a will of its own and isn't controlled by the player.
  • The main addition is a new Mastery titled Dream Mastery: available to new players, - sorry, what do you mean by "available to new players"?
  • The image is hard to read - I only see a brown field with colorful splodges on it. Could you perhaps specify what I'm looking at? If the player is shown (I can't tell - I haven't played the game), you could mention their location on screen, etc.

Plot

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  • , is launching an attack on the living world now the more powerful Olympians - should be "now that the more powerful Olympians"

Development and release

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Reception

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Comments

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@ProtoDrake: This article is pretty good, and just needs some minor fixes. I'm placing this   On hold for a week; if everything is done by then, I'll pass the article.--IDVtalk 13:15, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

I've done my best to address the issues raised. --ProtoDrake (talk) 13:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, that was quick! Congratulations, Titan Quest: Immortal Throne is now a   Good Article.--IDVtalk 14:36, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply