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Q: Please correct my mistakes.

There are many ways to find new music.
Nowadays most people prefer to search new songs on the internet. However. there are also many other variants.
For example you can hear a good song on the radio, catch someones rington on the cell phone or melody in the local grocery store. Without doubts the most efficient way to discover some new music is to check YouTube, Spotify and other platforms where you can find appeling to you songs. It's very convenient to search artists and genres over there. If you have a busy schedule or just don't want to activly search music on the internet there is another option for you. Instead of listening to the radio you are used to just swith to another radio wave. Doing so could help you heard some new tones from time to time. I think that new music could be find everywhere. I believe that regardless of methods we use to discover it the most important is how we feel while listening it.




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Corrections are..

“Nowadays, most” (added a coma)

“However, there” (added a coma)

“For example, you” (added a coma)

“Someone’s ringtone”* (added an apostrophe to indicate the fact that this “someone” owns/has the ringtone and also changed rington to ringtone, as it’s the correct way to spell it)

“There’s no doubt that the most” (made it sound more natural)

Replacing the “and” with an “or” in “YouTube, Spotify, and other platforms” sounds a bit more natural and correct. I could be wrong though.

Replace “where you can find appeling to you songs” with “where you can find songs that are appealing to you”, as it is much more grammatically correct and natural. I also changed “appeling” to “appealing,” as it’s the correct spelling for the word.

“Activly” is incorrect, so instead of “activly,” say “actively.” You can search it up for clarity if you’d like.

“internet, there is another” (I added a coma)

“Doing so could help you come across some new tunes from time to time” (changed some spelling and grammatical errors and also made it sound more natural)

“In my opinion, new music could be found anywhere, and that regardless of the methods we use to discover it, the most important aspect of music is how we feel while listening to it.” (Corrected grammatical errors and made it sound a bit better grade-level wise. You can use “I think” too, but it doesn’t sound as good imo. Also, I connected sentences, made it sound more natural, added vocabulary, changed words, and added comas, etc.)

I hope this helps

Some of these corrections are based off of how I would write them, but have a good day 😁
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Last weekend I mostly ordered travel gear online. I have compiled a list of things that I believe are necessary for a multi-day hike. Buying online may seem pretty easy because you don't have to go anywhere, but there are some tricks. It is difficult to estimate the quality of the product based on the photos alone. Although videos could give you a better perception, still there are many doubts before choosing a product that is not expensive and has high quality.
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