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:Even if the business about smallpox is worth mentioning, placing a whole paragraph devoted to it in the lead is questionable (which, per [[WP:LEAD]], is supposed to a summary of the rest of the article). If it is to be retained, it should be properly integrated into the chronology of the article body. ''[[User:Magicpiano|<span style="background-color:khaki;color:firebrick;">Magic</span>]]''[[User_talk:Magicpiano|♪piano]] 19:02, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
::the sources cited are not reliable secondary sources. Geoffrey Zubay is a biochemist with no experience with the historiography; he does not cite ANY primary or secondary historical sources. (see his resume at [http://www.columbia.edu/cu/biology/faculty/zubay/GLZubay-CV.pdf resume online] that shows 160+ articles, with zero on history. Given the huge scholarly literature on 1776, that does not pass muster when wikipedia demands "reliable secondary sources." Furthermore the text added to this article does not even follow its poor sources--it adds all sorts of exaggerations (three people with smallpox left Boston; the supposed text says "thousands"; the refugees were all kept in isolation far from the American troops and
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