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Perhaps you could work on the unsourced sections you are complaining about. [[User:Jtfolden|Jtfolden]] ([[User talk:Jtfolden|talk]]) 03:16, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
::: And yet you left the lead, where most readers get their information, almost entirely devoid of concreteclear descriptions of brutalism and its principles, or any usefulof sources?the Plushistorical theclaims historyyou sectionapparently isworked completelyso fullhard ofto unsourcedadd claims,into andthe thosearticle body? sourcedHistorical claims were almost entirely absent from the lead before I added them. That "Nybrutalism" was the inspiration for the Smithson's New Brutalism doesnt contradict the influence of, or connection to, Le Corbusier's phrase, which has nonetheless been widely used as a pithy and accurate summary of the movement's aims-a modification of phrase, rather than removal of this info, might have been more helpful. As it is, your version of the lead clarified '''nothing''' about the origins or meaning of the term.
:::"Recent edits have been for the worse." If you can support this claim with any sources or coherent arguments, that’s be great. If you could point out an element of the lede which is inaccurate or unduly repetitive, with sources to back up your perspective, I'd be grateful. Otherwise, I consider my edits a useful roadmap for how the rest of the article should be improved.
:::Also, the current picture of the Villa Göth is low quality—the landscaping is in disarray, covering part of the house, and the angle doesn’t emphasize what is unique about the structure—its geometric, boxy design. [[User:Gentlecollapse6|gentlecollapse6]] ([[User talk:Gentlecollapse6|talk]]) 20:34, 26 April 2020 (UTC)