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@[[User:Zefr|Zefr]]: Hi! Just following up on [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Diabetes&diff=prev&oldid=1137001212&diffmode=source your revert], would you mind explaining a bit about what was better in the previous version? <span style="background-color: #CEF0FD; padding: 2px 4px; border-radius: 6px;">[[User:ItsPugle|'''Tim''']]</span> ([[User_talk:ItsPugle|Talk]]) 07:31, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
:I would turn the question to you to ask that you describe what changes of yours made the article clearer. Your edit included a spelling error (..."conditions <u>e</u>ffecting" - "affecting") and a poorly-formed sentence ("There is no cure for most cases of diabetes, however some treatments exist." - incorrect use of ''however'' as a conjunction). Otherwise, I saw no clearer text or organization, indicating the previous version was better. [[User:Zefr|Zefr]] ([[User talk:Zefr|talk]]) 16:50, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
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