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<span class="wikied-assignment" style="font-size:85%;">— Assignment last updated by [[User:Sachi.sb|Sachi.sb]] ([[User talk:Sachi.sb|talk]]) 18:29, 1 April 2024 (UTC)</span>
==Feedback==
This entry about the Phanaeus vindex, or the rainbow scarab, does a great job at providing detailed information about the rainbow scarab’s food sources, life history, mating, and development information. The prose of this entry is also very clear and understandable. The entry also does a great job at providing citations at the end of each paragraph. Although for some larger paragraphs, like the second paragraph in the Mating section, it could help clarify where the information is referenced to by including the citation in the middle of the paragraph as well. Some things to consider for further improvement is including information about the beetle’s habitat, geogrpachi range, and its interaction with humans. The lead section can also be lengthend. Usually for an entry of this length, it is nice to include a lead section of around 3 paragraphs to let readers know what this entry will cover.
Here are some edits I made:
*Added hyperlinks to certain terms to better integrate this article into Wikipedia.
*Added an image of the beetle to increase the media content.
*Added citations to larger paragraphs with only one citation at the end to help readers understand where the information is from.
*Italicized species name where it wasn’t italicized.
[[User:Justinxuje|Justinxuje]] ([[User talk:Justinxuje|talk]]) 20:25, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
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