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:Ahin should be the only focus of the article, not the group's history or anything concerning them. The only exception would be mentioning that she debuted with them. Considering Paul's long and extensive career as a solo artist and The Beatles aren't just like any other group, the comparison you made is not even reasonable. You could certainly improve the group article, especially with those sources. Adding what you wrote to the group article would mean heavily modifying the wording to conform to our guidelines, [[WP:EPSTYLE]]. As your draft stands, it will not be accepted as the wording is still a problem. [[User:Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#00BFFF; font-family:Bold script">''Btspurplegalaxy''</b>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#50C878">🗩</b>]]&nbsp;[[Special:Contribs/Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#9D9E9E">🖉</b>]] 20:13, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
 
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== About Updating Chaeyoung's Page ==
 
I recieved your message about properly citing sources. I've never updated anything on Wiki before. I followed the links you provided and tried my best! Please let me know if it needs to be changed more. I'm doing my best to learn properly! Thank You! [[Special:Contributions/2601:3CA:C203:52F0:35B3:925F:959F:CF8D|2601:3CA:C203:52F0:35B3:925F:959F:CF8D]] ([[User talk:2601:3CA:C203:52F0:35B3:925F:959F:CF8D|talk]]) 19:16, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
 
:I added a source for you. [[User:Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#00BFFF; font-family:Bold script">''Btspurplegalaxy''</b>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#50C878">🗩</b>]]&nbsp;[[Special:Contribs/Btspurplegalaxy|<b style="color:#9D9E9E">🖉</b>]] 03:44, 22 August 2022 (UTC)