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17 May 2023

• 14:0014:00, 17 May 2023 diff hist +5 Adhesive Added “them” after “binds” Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:5813:58, 17 May 2023 diff hist −14 Adhesive “binds together” is redundant. Removed “together” Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 April 2023

• 05:2405:24, 30 April 2023 diff hist +56 Chattanooga Times Free Press →Competition and agreement: https://www.nytimes.com/1970/02/25/archives/the-chattanooga-post-closes-after-us-files-antitrust-suit.html

22 November 2022

• 15:2815:28, 22 November 2022 diff hist −1 Steve Sloan →Early life: Sloan attended Bradley County High , not Bradley Central. Bradley County High was later renamed Bradley Central Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 October 2022

• 05:3505:35, 3 October 2022 diff hist +1 Jahmyr Gibbs →Early life and high school: Comma after Georgia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1605:16, 3 October 2022 diff hist −10 Bruce Arians →Playing career: Changed “passing attempts” to “passes”. A passing attempt doesn’t exist. If you’re releasing the ball from your hand in forward motion, it’s a pass, regardless whether its completed. If you are prevented from trying to throw a pass it’s a sack or a tackle. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 September 2022

• 04:5204:52, 11 September 2022 diff hist −5 KBO League Removed “back” in “ dates back to the …”. If it dates to the 90s, it’s back, and redundant. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:5004:50, 11 September 2022 diff hist −4 KBO League Removed “out” from “out of 40 …. “ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2022

• 03:0103:01, 22 August 2022 diff hist +4 Jarrett Guarantano →Early life and high school: Changed college to high school Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:0003:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1 Jarrett Guarantano →Early life and high school: Comma after New Jersey Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 August 2022

• 00:1300:13, 7 August 2022 diff hist +1 Dylan Moses →High school career: Comma after Florida Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:1300:13, 7 August 2022 diff hist +1 Dylan Moses →High school career: Comma after Louisiana Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 August 2022

• 02:5402:54, 1 August 2022 diff hist −8 Jeff Francoeur →Personal life: His future wife was not named Francouer. Removed that. Added comma after Georgia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 July 2022

• 14:2114:21, 31 July 2022 diff hist −17 Orange Mound, Memphis Tightened up run on sentences Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:1914:19, 31 July 2022 diff hist −15 Orange Mound, Memphis Revied extraneous words Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:1814:18, 31 July 2022 diff hist −10 Orange Mound, Memphis Removed unnecessary commas Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 July 2022

• 04:3804:38, 24 July 2022 diff hist −5 FanDuel Sports Network →Beginnings: “Dating back to the 80s… is redundant. One can’t date forward to the 80s. Removed “back”. Now reads “dating to the 89s …” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 July 2022

• 06:0206:02, 17 July 2022 diff hist +1 Bryan Harvey →Career: Comma after first North Carolina. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 July 2022

• 03:2103:21, 16 July 2022 diff hist 0 Codification (law) →Civil law jurisdictions: Fixed subject-verb disagreement. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 July 2022

• 05:2005:20, 10 July 2022 diff hist +6 Gary Bender Changed KS to Kansas and added the appropriate comma Tag: Visual edit
• 03:1203:12, 10 July 2022 diff hist +5 Gary Bender →Early career: Spelled KS Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 July 2022

• 01:5101:51, 8 July 2022 diff hist +1 Kathi McDonald →Biography: Comma after Washington Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4901:49, 8 July 2022 diff hist +1 Kathi McDonald →Biography: Comma after Washington Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 July 2022

• 03:5103:51, 3 July 2022 diff hist +2 Rick Cerone →Retirement: Comma after West Palm and after Florida Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:5003:50, 3 July 2022 diff hist +1 Rick Cerone →Retirement: Comma after New Jersey Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:4903:49, 3 July 2022 diff hist +1 Rick Cerone →Retirement: Comma after New Jersey Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 June 2022

• 13:4413:44, 5 June 2022 diff hist +1 Natalie Morales (journalist) →Personal life: Comma after California Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 June 2022

• 03:0403:04, 3 June 2022 diff hist −1 Dan Mullen →Lake Oconee Academy: Deleted extraneous comma after AD Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 May 2022

• 12:0112:01, 31 May 2022 diff hist +1 Spencer Tracy Added s to Award Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:0112:01, 31 May 2022 diff hist −3 Spencer Tracy Changed “consecutive” to “straight”. To write “two consecutive” means four not two because consecutive comprises two elements. To write two consecutive would mean four. It’s one of the most misused words in English. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 May 2022

• 02:4702:47, 29 May 2022 diff hist 0 Designated for assignment →Place the player on waivers: Placed “only” in proper sentence structure to its object: “only once…” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 May 2022

• 04:4804:48, 26 May 2022 diff hist −16 Tyler Herro →High school career: Removed redundancy in percentages/percentage. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 May 2022

• 14:5014:50, 23 May 2022 diff hist +3 Justin Thomas →Controversy: Noun-pronoun disagreement with sponsors and Thomas. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 May 2022

• 18:5818:58, 18 May 2022 diff hist +2 Austin Riley →Personal life: Played instead of play Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit