User contributions for 67.169.127.166

2 May 2008

• 01:1001:10, 2 May 2008 diff hist +204 Talk:George Burns →POV?
• 01:0601:06, 2 May 2008 diff hist −3 George Burns Minor edit
• 01:0501:05, 2 May 2008 diff hist +7 George Burns Adds word "unique" which in this case seems literally true. Who else restarted their career at 79?

1 May 2008

• 20:4820:48, 1 May 2008 diff hist −10 Sharpie (marker) Removes trademark on brand names. These are not required by law, and suggest this article may be contrary to WP:CONFLICT guidelines.
• 19:4319:43, 1 May 2008 diff hist −48 Beryl Reid "nearly steals the show" is peacock language, contrary to WP:PEACOCK. Winning a BAFTA makes it sufficiently clear what a good job she did.
• 01:5301:53, 1 May 2008 diff hist +456 Talk:Cat-scratch disease More adverse cat scratch reactions

30 April 2008

• 22:0822:08, 30 April 2008 diff hist −344 Cheesecloth Removes vandalism. See discussion.
• 22:0622:06, 30 April 2008 diff hist +973 Talk:Cheesecloth Vandalism
• 21:5821:58, 30 April 2008 diff hist +29 Cheesecloth This appears to be a vandalism target. See discussion.
• 17:4317:43, 30 April 2008 diff hist −24 The Haunted Mansion Minor edit
• 17:4117:41, 30 April 2008 diff hist +146 The Haunted Mansion Text needs to read like an encyclopedia article, not a stream-of-consciousness personal essay. Peacock language should be reduced per WP:PEACOCK
• 17:2617:26, 30 April 2008 diff hist +95 Miguel Praia More citation requests.
• 17:2117:21, 30 April 2008 diff hist +64 Miguel Praia Needs citation and change in tone. Sentences such as these are not for an encyclopedia: "New year, new team and a new motorcycle to learn from."
• 17:1817:18, 30 April 2008 diff hist +263 Talk:Tim and Eric Awesome Show, Great Job! Question about tagging
• 17:1417:14, 30 April 2008 diff hist +25 H. F. M. Prescott Needs a specific citation to an article, not the whole encyclopedia.
• 17:1017:10, 30 April 2008 diff hist +29 Talk:Taos, New Mexico →Considerations for Taos editors
• 17:0217:02, 30 April 2008 diff hist +1,739 Talk:Taos, New Mexico Editors
• 16:4316:43, 30 April 2008 diff hist −190 Taos, New Mexico Some statements needing citations are needed. Wiki is an encyclopedia, not a tourism advertising site. Self-advertising is contrary to WP:CONFLICT. See discussion.
• 16:3416:34, 30 April 2008 diff hist +15 Bohol Island State University Article needs say more about the purpose, results, discoveries...anything...a list of names and when things were established is meaningless to a casual reader.
• 15:0715:07, 30 April 2008 diff hist −64 Clara Barton Award I was going to ask for a citation, but changed my mind. It's irrelevant who the youngest recipient was. What about the first one? The oldest one? The one who received it the soonest after joining?
• 15:0515:05, 30 April 2008 diff hist +11 Giovanni Marradi (musician) Wikification request.
• 14:5514:55, 30 April 2008 diff hist +154 Talk:Callus →Steak Knives?
• 14:5414:54, 30 April 2008 diff hist +25 Callus Citation needed.
• 14:5214:52, 30 April 2008 diff hist +1 Talk:Callosity Minor edit
• 14:5214:52, 30 April 2008 diff hist +288 Talk:Callosity Issues with callosity.
• 14:4814:48, 30 April 2008 diff hist +25 Four Worlds Citation needed.
• 14:3614:36, 30 April 2008 diff hist −3 Handle minor edit
• 14:3614:36, 30 April 2008 diff hist +229 Handle Adds a criterion of handle design.
• 14:3214:32, 30 April 2008 diff hist +192 Talk:Nellie Cornish Link to article for deletion broken
• 14:3014:30, 30 April 2008 diff hist +15 Nellie Cornish Questions notability. In Discussion, the link to discussion for deletion does not work.
• 14:2614:26, 30 April 2008 diff hist +50 It's All Relative Citations needed so readers can judge events for themselves.
• 14:2214:22, 30 April 2008 diff hist +15 Adelaide Clemens Seems like an extremely minor actress from information supplied.
• 14:1214:12, 30 April 2008 diff hist −139 Léon Nicole Removes vandalism by 98.221.171.219
• 13:4313:43, 30 April 2008 diff hist +25 Portable soup Citation request. Did the writers confound portable soup as a whole with spoiled portable soup?
• 13:3813:38, 30 April 2008 diff hist +39 Kurdish mythology Needs citations.
• 13:3313:33, 30 April 2008 diff hist −43 Hualapai Mountains Blatant advertising. Doesn't read anything like an encyclopedia article, and needs to be rewritten entirely.
• 13:2313:23, 30 April 2008 diff hist +66 Talk:Berth →Trains also have berths.
• 13:1813:18, 30 April 2008 diff hist +1,122 Talk:Berth →Trains also have berths.
• 13:0413:04, 30 April 2008 diff hist +33 Berth (moorings) Really needs sources. A good deal of this appears to be personal opinion.
• 12:4812:48, 30 April 2008 diff hist +148 Talk:Brown & Williamson →Biased much?
• 12:3812:38, 30 April 2008 diff hist +3 Talk:Brown & Williamson →Biased much?
• 12:3812:38, 30 April 2008 diff hist +892 Talk:Brown & Williamson →Biased much?
• 12:3012:30, 30 April 2008 diff hist +10 Brown & Williamson This article makes many strong statements, and really does need footnotes and references. Removes peacock "the highly respected".
• 12:2212:22, 30 April 2008 diff hist +448 Talk:Randy'L He-dow Teton Please clarify meaning of name.
• 12:2112:21, 30 April 2008 diff hist −64 Randy'L He-dow Teton I've reworked two sentences, which because the source link is broken, can't be determined NOT to violate copyright as they are.
• 12:0512:05, 30 April 2008 diff hist −44 Ibanez GIO Removes apparent joke / vandalism "Downshifter model not available in Australia". Correct me if I'm wrong. As a joke, it's pretty funny, tho.
• 11:4411:44, 30 April 2008 diff hist +123 Japan Sinks Adds parody movie link.
• 11:3411:34, 30 April 2008 diff hist +4 Guy Delage Minor edit
• 11:3111:31, 30 April 2008 diff hist −5 Guy Delage Minor edit.
• 11:2811:28, 30 April 2008 diff hist +754 Guy Delage Changes inadvertent wording mistake. Adds the reasons for doubt from the cited reference.