User contributions for EdiOnjales

17 September 2024

• 00:4100:41, 17 September 2024 diff hist +153 List of nicknames of presidents of the United States →John F. Kennedy: fixed an error, changed to a more reputable source that has the correct information

16 September 2024

• 15:3815:38, 16 September 2024 diff hist −161 Old-fashioned doughnut neutral encyclopedic tone, typos, excessive wikilinks, etc. current

17 July 2024

• 00:2900:29, 17 July 2024 diff hist +931 Talk:When We Cease to Understand the World →Translation??: new section Tag: New topic

3 July 2024

• 18:0418:04, 3 July 2024 diff hist +8 m Killing of John O'Keefe →Medical and forensic experts: clarification
• 18:0218:02, 3 July 2024 diff hist +84 Killing of John O'Keefe →Witnesses from the following investigation: grammar, etc, & clarification
• 17:4717:47, 3 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Killing of John O'Keefe →Police and first responders: capitalization (brand name)
• 17:3517:35, 3 July 2024 diff hist −10 Killing of John O'Keefe →Witnesses from the Aruba Trip: sentence structure & clarification
• 17:1817:18, 3 July 2024 diff hist +10 m Killing of John O'Keefe →Others: clarification of wording
• 17:1617:16, 3 July 2024 diff hist +44 Killing of John O'Keefe →The Albert/McCabe family: grammar & clarification tags -- some parts are very unclear
• 14:2914:29, 3 July 2024 diff hist +11 m Killing of John O'Keefe →Background: grammar

27 April 2024

• 01:2301:23, 27 April 2024 diff hist −270 Which Brings Me to You →Plot: organization, brevity, encyclopedic tone, etc.

14 April 2024

• 04:1204:12, 14 April 2024 diff hist +318 Don't Worry, He Won't Get Far on Foot →Plot: organization, clarity, encyclopedic tone

23 March 2024

• 19:1719:17, 23 March 2024 diff hist −719 The Proposal (2009 film) →Plot: condensed and removed unnecessary details to reduce word count per WP:FILMPLOT

13 March 2024

• 20:1120:11, 13 March 2024 diff hist +6 The Longest Yard (1974 film) →Cast: character name clarification (It's what they mostly call him in the movie)

10 January 2024

• 18:5118:51, 10 January 2024 diff hist +41 The Proposal (2009 film) →Plot: accuracy, encyclopedic tone

27 December 2023

• 03:1703:17, 27 December 2023 diff hist −55 Cielito Lindo punctuation, spelling, grammar, etc, plus a few translation tweaks

26 December 2023

• 21:4821:48, 26 December 2023 diff hist +705 Adventure Time (1958 TV series) general cleanup, added citation tags (even more are probably needed, but these are the most important places in my opinion)

30 August 2023

• 04:0904:09, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1,069 Talk:Chiboust cream →Millefeuille cream: new section Tag: New topic

29 June 2023

• 21:2921:29, 29 June 2023 diff hist −4 m Shotgun Wedding (2022 film) →Casting: removed wikilink to the wrong person

19 May 2023

• 13:4413:44, 19 May 2023 diff hist +1,015 User talk:Deor →Thanks!: new section
• 13:2513:25, 19 May 2023 diff hist 0 m C. S. Lewis →Illness and death: grammar/clarification Tag: Reverted

26 April 2023

• 00:3400:34, 26 April 2023 diff hist +1,597 Talk:Irreversible binomial →Doubtful examples: question about irreversibility

20 March 2023

• 14:3414:34, 20 March 2023 diff hist +1,779 User talk:Lawrencekhoo →Flula Borg edit: new section Tag: New topic
• 14:2414:24, 20 March 2023 diff hist +12 Flula Borg Undid revision 1145433635 by Lawrencekhoo (talk) formatting error, confusing construction, inaccuracy Tag: Undo

3 March 2023

• 17:5217:52, 3 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Picture Pages →top: grammar

17 February 2023

• 02:4102:41, 17 February 2023 diff hist −70 Because I Said So (film) →Plot: clarity, encyclopedic tone, improved sentence structure

6 February 2023

• 18:5018:50, 6 February 2023 diff hist −12 m Whatever the Case May Be →On the Island: improved wikilink and punctuation

2 February 2023

• 19:5119:51, 2 February 2023 diff hist −3 Tabula Rasa (Lost) →On the Island: slight changes for grammar, punctuation, clarity
• 18:4818:48, 2 February 2023 diff hist −1 m Charlie Pace →Prior to the crash: removed an errant comma
• 18:4718:47, 2 February 2023 diff hist −5 Charlie Pace →Prior to the crash: grammar

1 February 2023

• 20:4420:44, 1 February 2023 diff hist +229 Proserpina →top: "citation needed" tag, end of 2nd paragraph
• 20:3520:35, 1 February 2023 diff hist +4,195 Talk:Sententia →Wine and age: new section
• 20:3020:30, 1 February 2023 diff hist 0 Sententia →top: fixed erroneous source - see my note on the talk page

10 November 2022

• 22:4622:46, 10 November 2022 diff hist −301 The Munsters (2022 film) →Cast: less awkward/more concise phrasing; removed unnecessary details and a potentially offensive word

9 November 2022

• 22:4822:48, 9 November 2022 diff hist −16 m A Million Ways to Die in the West →Cast: grammar/conciseness; more consistent punctuation

3 September 2022

• 20:0420:04, 3 September 2022 diff hist +592 Talk:Michael Rispoli →Regarding the expansion needed tag: new section
• 19:5919:59, 3 September 2022 diff hist +23 m Michael Rispoli added help needed tag
• 19:5519:55, 3 September 2022 diff hist +3,430 Michael Rispoli removed repetition; separated some mixed film & tv credits; expanded filmography; added formatting

27 August 2022

• 01:0301:03, 27 August 2022 diff hist +11 The Big Fat Quiz of the Year →2021: more accurate/specific/useful wikilink

6 August 2022

• 22:1522:15, 6 August 2022 diff hist −43 m Damien Hirst →Personal life: removed duplicate tag

5 August 2022

• 16:5516:55, 5 August 2022 diff hist 0 m Heather Mills →Media image and criticism: spelling correction

27 July 2022

• 03:5403:54, 27 July 2022 diff hist +10 m Michael Patrick Thornton →Filmography: updated section heading upon discovering that the list here is very incomplete

20 July 2022

• 17:0817:08, 20 July 2022 diff hist +19 People Will Talk →Cast: added information

19 July 2022

• 16:4116:41, 19 July 2022 diff hist −1,257 Mr. Blandings Builds His Dream House →Promotion: removed a long list of cities that has nothing to do directly with the film or its promotion

17 July 2022

• 18:1518:15, 17 July 2022 diff hist −86 Roland Young Reverted good faith edits by 2603:6081:F05:7700:556F:48E7:C2A9:574D (talk): Undoing an apparently meaningless entry (I can't find any evidence of any of this information) Tags: Twinkle Undo

25 June 2022

• 03:4003:40, 25 June 2022 diff hist −48 m Ocean's Eleven →Plot: repaired wikilink

24 June 2022

• 20:1520:15, 24 June 2022 diff hist −1 m Dave (film) →Cameos: removed an errant line break
• 20:1420:14, 24 June 2022 diff hist +22 Dave (film) →Cameos: slightly rearranged to improve readability; one word change for a more accurate connotation

17 June 2022

• 00:4900:49, 17 June 2022 diff hist −2,880 Kenneth Tigar removed long lists of identical information that's covered in more readable form in the tables below

16 June 2022

• 17:5817:58, 16 June 2022 diff hist −47 Joan Murray (journalist) update from present to past tense due to her death; a few other random tweaks to improve readability and tighten the tone