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A user with 102 edits. Account created on 17 September 2024.
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28 November 2024

  • 10:5210:52, 28 November 2024 diff hist +15 m Charlotte Gilbertson In the third Paragraph, I replaced "WWII" with "World War II (WWII)" for easy comprehension. current Tag: Visual edit
  • 09:2009:20, 28 November 2024 diff hist +1,726 N User:Olamide Sharon ←Created page with ' Exercise for Obesity Obesity is a complex health condition characterized by excessive body fat, which can increase the risk of various chronic diseases. Regular exercise is a crucial component of obesity management and treatment. Benefits of Exercise for Obesity 1. Weight Loss: Exercise helps burn calories and reduce body fat. 2. Improved Insulin Sensitivity: Regular physical activity enhances the body's ability to use insulin, reducing the risk of deve...' current

26 November 2024

  • 06:2306:23, 26 November 2024 diff hist +200 Guinness World Records I refined the paragraph for clarity and flow by rewording certain phrases, such as changing "known from 1955 until 1999 as The Guinness Book of Records" to "known as The Guinness Book of Records v from its inception in 1955 until 1999." "Created the concept" was replaced with "conceived the idea" for a natural tone. Book titles were italicized for proper formatting, improving the paragraph's precision and presentation. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
  • 05:4905:49, 26 November 2024 diff hist −22 George Weah The editor’s revisions enhance the clarity and flow of the paragraph. The removal of “first” smooths the sentence, while specifying that Weah, not the team, was the top scorer in the 1994–95 UEFA Champions League provides greater accuracy. The rewording of the Premier League section improves readability, and specifying “with Chelsea” instead of “at the former” clarifies the reference. These changes refine the text without altering the intended meaning. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
  • 05:2205:22, 26 November 2024 diff hist +7 James Garrison (architect) The editor’s revisions aimed to enhance clarity, precision, and readability. "Extensive" was chosen over "much" to better describe the scale of mining, while "sparked" replaced "led to" for a more dynamic tone. "Deepened" was preferred over "an even greater understanding" for conciseness. The phrase "where he researched" improved sentence flow, and "instilled" was used instead of "conveyed" to emphasize the lasting influence of Garrison’s mentors on his progressive architectural ethos. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
  • 04:3304:33, 26 November 2024 diff hist −5 Nedu Wazobia Nedu Wazobia, born in Kaduna, Nigeria, studied accounting at Madonna University in Anambra State. He participated in the National Youth Service Corps (NYSC) program, working as an on-air personality in Jigawa. After returning to Abuja as a site manager, he found the role unfulfilling. He later moved to Lagos to pursue his dream of becoming a broadcaster and entertainer. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
  • 04:1804:18, 26 November 2024 diff hist +3 Fitness to dive Diver certification agencies set fitness-to-dive standards required for certification after training. Some rely on divers to self-assess fitness, while others require medical evaluations by practitioners based on specific criteria. Adapted from professional diving standards, these criteria are consistent across agencies but often relaxed for recreational diving, balancing safety, accessibility, and standardization in the certification process. current Tag: Visual edit
  • 01:5501:55, 26 November 2024 diff hist +27 Jollof rice The paragraph discusses the competition between Nigeria and Ghana over whose version of Jollof rice is superior, a rivalry that has become known as the "Jollof Wars." The competition is framed as a friendly contest between West African countries, particularly Nigeria and Ghana, with the rivalry evolving in the 2010s. The edits made aim to clarify the subject, streamline the phrasing, and enhance readability, making the ideas more concise and direct. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
  • 00:1000:10, 26 November 2024 diff hist −2 2011 International Rules Series I added "." to the sixth paragraph to the sentence Tag: Visual edit

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