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1976 heart operation Cleveland OH

Why was the Shah's heart operation at the Cleveland Clinic not mentioned in the article? My father was in the clinic at the same time and we were constantly seeing the Iranian security. The article seems to be written with a bias toward the US hating and not helping the Shah. But he was cared for in one of the 3 best cardiac units in the world. I see definite anti encyclopedic bias in this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1702:41D0:4C30:14EB:8CE:239D:4D69 (talk) 09:54, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Why do you see bias, as opposed to no editor thought to put it in? If you have a reliable source by all means add it. Britmax (talk) 15:32, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Word is missing

The word “that” is missing from the sentence: “These reforms led to decades of sustained economic growth (that) would make Iran…” 37.159.12.246 (talk) 14:55, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Thanks for spotting that. Britmax (talk) 15:30, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Citations

Nothing seems to be cited for the entire 4th and 5th paragraphs. There is a 2 page citation for the 6th paragraph. An example: "The Shah initiated major investments in infrastructure, subsidies and land grants for peasant populations, profit sharing for industrial workers, construction of nuclear facilities, the nationalization of Iran’s natural resources, and literacy programs which were considered some of the most effective in the world."

Who considered them the most effective in the world? What investments were actually made? What natural resources were nationalized? What profit sharing and land grants were made available?

"Manufacturing of cars, appliances, and other goods in Iran increased substantially leading to the creation of a new industrialist class that was considered insulated from threats of foreign competition."

Who considered the industrialist class to be insulated from competition? Any source on car manufacturing happening in Iran at all?