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== Jewish '''q'''uestion or Jewish '''Q'''uestion? ==

{{Re|Beyond My Ken}} is there a reason why this article uses inconsistent capitalization for this phrase? ---&nbsp;[[User talk:Coffeeandcrumbs|<span style="color:#CC2200">Coffee</span>]]<nowiki/>and[[Special:Contributions/Coffeeandcrumbs|<span style="color:#663366">crumbs</span>]] 09:01, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
:N one's gotten around to making the usage consistent, I imagine. [[User:Beyond My Ken|Beyond My Ken]] ([[User talk:Beyond My Ken|talk]]) 10:18, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
::I think it should be capitalized as a proper noun, but I’ve seen sources go both ways and there’s the argument about distinguishing the concept (q) from the book (Q). This should be consistent across the site; might be worth bringing up at a WikiProject or MOS. <span style="white-space:nowrap;">– [[User:Levivich|Leviv]]<span style="display:inline-block;position:relative;transform:rotate(45deg);bottom:-.57em;">[[User Talk:Levivich|ich]]</span></span> 13:55, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
:::I first I believed it should not be. But I have changed my mind since. It should indeed be capitalized. But we need some consistency across several articles: [[Final Solution]], [[Adolf Hitler]], and [[Hermann Göring]]. The worst offender is the article on the [[Jewish question]] which you will note is decapped in the article title. When updating the [[WP:OTD|OTD]] for today, I had difficulty deciding whether of not to capitalize "Question". The problem is that the version in German is "''Endlösung der Judenfrage''" (Final Solution of the Jewish [Q/q]uestion). If you think about it hard it is clear the Solution should be capitalized but I can't be as sure about [Q/q]uestion because it is not clear why ''Judenfrage'' was capitalized. Was because ''Jude'' is always capitalized? Or would ''frage'' be capitalized when translated? FYI, here is the 2006 discussion where capitalization of Final Solution was decided: [[Talk:Final Solution/Archive 1#Requested move]]. '''I think the best solution is to have a move discussion at [[Talk:Jewish question]].''' ---&nbsp;[[User talk:Coffeeandcrumbs|<span style="color:#CC2200">Coffee</span>]]<nowiki/>and[[Special:Contributions/Coffeeandcrumbs|<span style="color:#663366">crumbs</span>]] 17:04, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
::::In German, all nouns are capitalized, not just proper nouns. So don't go by what you see on de.wiki. We have to make our own decision for this wiki. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]]&nbsp;<span style="color:red">🍁</span>&nbsp;([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 01:54, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
:::::Diannaa is correct. German language nouns, even common nouns, are always capitalized. [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 23:42, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
*Obviously having an RM discussion at [[Jewish question]] would be best, but I do think that the during the late 19th and early 20th century, the subject had been so thoroughtly reified that it was usual for it to be capitalized. It wasn't as if people were saying "I have a question about the Jews", it was "What are we going to do about the Jewish Question?", meaning "What are we going to do about the Jews?" -- and later "How are we going to get rid of the Jews?" The very act of asking the "What are we gong to do about the Jewish Question?" '''''assumed''''' the existence of a problem that had to be solved. I have no doubt that German-speakers having been a large component of that discussion influenced that capitalization, but, still, the thing is '''''the Jewish Question''''', not "the Jewish question". [[User:Beyond My Ken|Beyond My Ken]] ([[User talk:Beyond My Ken|talk]]) 00:42, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
:*Since no one else seems inclined to, I've started an RM [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Jewish_question#Requested_move_2_August_2019 here]. [[User:Beyond My Ken|Beyond My Ken]] ([[User talk:Beyond My Ken|talk]]) 00:55, 2 August 2019 (UTC)

== Error in SS rank chronology ==

The article says he was appointed Untersturmführer on 14 July 1931. The Wikipedia [[Untersturmführer]] article states that the was first created in 1934. (It is described as "the first commissioned SS officer rank, equivalent to a second lieutenant in other military organizations".) Either that article or this article is incorrect, as he couldn't have had the rank in 1931 if it wasn't established until 1934.


== Him being a me-109E fighter pilot and being awarded the silver Combat Flight Badge, which normally were awarded after 60 combat missions? ==
I know nothing about Nazi paramilitary, which is why I am hesitant to research and resolve this inconsistency myself. Someone should, as it has bearing on the content that follows, about whether subject's induction to the SS was pre- or post-1933. Pre-1933 induction was apparently considered an indicator of Nazi true believer authenticity.--[[User:FeralOink|FeralOink]] ([[User talk:FeralOink|talk]]) 05:07, 27 October 2019 (UTC)
:The rank does not appear in the cited source, so I have removed it. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]]&nbsp;<span style="color:red">🍁</span>&nbsp;([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 12:31, 27 October 2019 (UTC)
::Good catch, FeralOink; it was not correct and as Diannaa said, not in the RS cited source. The fact is, Heydrich was promoted in Dec. 1931 to [[Sturmbannführer]] (major) as a wedding present by Himmler. Gerwarth, p. 58.


No mention of this besides his awards. Below was copied and pasted from this link here: https://www.historynet.com/reinhard-heydrich-a-devil-with-many-faces/
== Removal of alternative viewpoint, for discussion here ==


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I deleted this passage:


NOTBOND007 <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:NotBond007|NotBond007]] ([[User talk:NotBond007#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/NotBond007|contribs]]) 00:33, 8 March 2022 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:<nowiki>Historian Donald Bloxham avows that for all the discussion over perpetrators in the Final Solution, Heydrich "barely spared a hateful thought for the Jews" and instead concentrated his efforts on the scale of his "supranational task".{{sfn|Bloxham|2009|p=228}}</nowiki>
:Sorry but we can't host that much non-free content here. Interested persons can click on the link.— [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 01:04, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
:There is some content on this in ''Hitler's Hangman: The Life of Heydrich''. I can fetch it from the library tomorrow.— [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 01:07, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
:I have added some content in the "Service record" section. Where data (dates in particular) disagrees between Gerwarth and the website, I went with Gerwarth. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 00:27, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
::Thank you! [[User:NotBond007|NotBond007]] ([[User talk:NotBond007|talk]]) 01:05, 9 May 2022 (UTC)


== Echoing Nazi theories of Hyperinflation ==
[[Donald Bloxham]] is apparently a professor of modern history and has a BLP of his own. The statement about Heydrich, particularly given the vast preponderance of evidence presented in this article alone, indicates that Heydrich had many, many hateful thoughts for the Jews. Is it a misquote of Bloxham? If not, hmmm, well, I guess we could return it to the article. It speaks most eloquently about why scholars do not necessarily draw correct conclusions, without any editorializing needed.


The article til just now adopted a Nazi talking point that the treaty of Versailles caused the hyperinflation in Germany when real historical research has shown a murkier and less clear cause. The wiki should not adopt Nazi talking points. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Wideeyedraven|Wideeyedraven]] ([[User talk:Wideeyedraven#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Wideeyedraven|contribs]]) 20:48, 10 March 2022 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
Please replace the passage if you (editors who read this) are certain of the accuracy of the quote, and believe it belongs in the article as an "alternative viewpoint".--[[User:FeralOink|FeralOink]] ([[User talk:FeralOink|talk]]) 00:16, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
:The source book notes the reparations required under the Treaty as well as Germany's enormous and unrepayable war debt. So I am going to amend the prose slightly to include that. Further discussion of the complexities of the hyperinflation would be better suited to inclusion at [[Hyperinflation in the Weimar Republic]]. Make sure you cite your sources. Thanks, — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 01:06, 11 March 2022 (UTC)


== Heydrich's Kriegsmarine rank ==
:I would prefer that my removal of the passage above never be returned to the article.--[[User:FeralOink|FeralOink]] ([[User talk:FeralOink|talk]]) 05:38, 30 October 2019 (UTC)


Under Naval Career is written: "He was promoted on 1 July 1928 to the rank of sub-lieutenant (Oberleutnant zur See)". Sub-lieutenant is not the same as an Oberleutnant. An Oberleutnant ("zur See" or on land) is the HIGHEST rank of lieutenant, and a sub-lieutenant is BELOW the rank of lieutenant.
== Grave Opened ==
Can someone please make the correction for me? I do not understand Wikipedia, and I don't want to damage anything. When you make the correctio, be careful of Oberstleutnant because that is a Lieutenant-Colonel and much higher in rank. You can reach me under fkarno@hotmail.com [[Special:Contributions/87.115.253.157|87.115.253.157]] ([[User talk:87.115.253.157|talk]]) 00:04, 20 February 2023 (UTC)


:I have corrected the rank to first lieutenant to agree with the source, which is visible at present via Google Books. Also I removed some content that does not appear to be supported by the citation. Thanks for the correction. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 02:26, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
BBC report his grave was opened - so someone knows where it is. Is this noteworthy enough for inclusion and if so where on the page?
::Thanks. I don’t know where the additional editorial content came from. Cheers, [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 02:28, 20 February 2023 (UTC)


== Sepsis ==
"Grave of top Nazi leader Reinhard Heydrich opened in Berlin"


Something of a mystery surrounds the direct cause of his death. Sepsis cannot stand as anything but what the inadequate autopsy caused, but that has been frequently challenged.
https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-50806873
<blockquote>Sudden postoperative cardiovascular collapse and coma suggest either a cerebral embolism or severe brain ischemia following a massive pulmonary embolism with acute cor pulmonale and impaired cardiac output.20 The embolus may have been a large fat particle or a blood clot, since both materials were found in the right ventricle and in the pulmonary artery. In the absence of examination of the brain and of a search for evidence of pulmonary embolus, deep vein thromboses, and foramen ovale, an accurate diagnosis is impossible. However, sudden cardiovascular collapse and coma occurring several days after surgery in a young, previously healthy patient without long bone fractures suggests a pulmonary embolism with acute cor pulmonale and brain anoxia The cause of his death has remained obscure. Massive pulmonary embolus with acute cor pulmonale and cerebral anoxia is a reasonable assumption . .The cause of his death has remained obscure. Massive pulmonary embolus with acute cor pulmonale and cerebral anoxia is a reasonable assumption p.6</blockquote>


Weisz and Albury think a factor of negligence may have played a role. I have put their suggestion in a footnote. [[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 08:41, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
[[User:David Crayford|'''David Crayford''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:David Crayford|<span style="color:red;">&#9742;</span>]] 15:01, 16 December 2019 (UTC)


:The new version is much better, with a more balanced and comprehensive view. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 13:02, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
== New Infobox Image ==
::It is better, but in the prime text (not the footnote) it only states, "has been challenged". It does not state by who; so, it is vague and ambiguous. [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 18:07, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
{{reply to|Antique Rose}} I am starting this section to propose that the present infobox image be replaced with the following picture. As mentioned during my previous attempt to edit replace the picture, Heydrich was a mid-level bureaucrat in the Nazi regime, not a head of state or internationally renowned political thinker. Therefore, I see no reason why his infobox picture has to be nearly as large as the one used for [[Franklin Delano Roosevelt|FDR's]] main page. Its vastly disproportionate to his historical significance. [[User:Emiya1980|Emiya1980]] ([[User talk:Emiya1980|talk]]) 06:20, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[[File:Bundesarchiv Bild 146-1969-054-16, Reinhard Heydrich (cropped).jpg|thumb|Proposed new image for Heydrich article.]]
:::It's too complex a story to be other than hinted at in the Heydrich bio. Some of the details are given on [[The Assassination of Reinhard Heydrich]]h main article. The two main points are the quarrel between Hitler's physician [[Theodor Morell]], who had a vested interest in the new drug (whose value had been ascertained as possible because American soldiers had it as part of their standard baggage), and ostensible resistance by the doctor directly in charge. This was well know but Weisz and Albury suggest there may have been an ideological objection or even a motive to allow Heydrich to die, as was the case in 1938 regarding suspicions that proper medical care had been withheld from [[Ernst vom Rath]], so that his death could provide a warrant for [[Kristallnacht]]. Interested readers can see the Heydrich assassination article, and of course click on the sources and read them if they want to follow the paper trail, and perhaps even improvve the coverage there. I'm too busy offline.[[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 19:42, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
:First, there is no rule as to making a main photograph of an article’s subject different sizes based on some subjective scale. The original photograph is better resolution. I will not get into his role in the Nazi regime as it’s not relevant here, but he certainly was more than a mid-level bureaucrat. I do not see a good reason for it to be changed. [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 13:58, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
:::I have added the names of the specific people who made these statements, and worded it a bit more neutrally so it doesn't come across as a conspiracy theory. See what you think. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 01:39, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
:{{reply to|Kierzek}} The size of an image is relevant when considered within the context of how it is likely to be used in an encyclopedic context. As noted in [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Images|Wikipedia's guidelines for using images in the lead]], "''Lead images should be natural and appropriate representations of the topic....{which} should not only illustrate the topic specifically, but also be the type of image used for similar purposes in high-quality reference works.'' The size of an image used for a historical figure can and does convey to readers the importance of their role in the events they took part (for good or ill). Towards this end, it does not make sense for a man who played a supporting role in the Nazi regime to have a significantly larger image than the one used for Hitler himself. To otherwise do so would compromise its effectiveness as a visual aid to readers. Furthermore, aside from the cropping, the new image is virtually identical to the previous one. How can its resolution be characterized as better or worse? [[User:Emiya1980|Emiya1980]] ([[User talk:Emiya1980|talk]]) 18:40, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
::::Nishidan, it’s not enough that readers might go to another article for clarification or a book for possible further detail, especially for a GA rated article. With due respect, it needs more; to be clear and attribution stated therein. Otherwise, it’s vague and appears in Wikipedia’s voice. Diannaa, your copy edit clarifies the addition and gives attribution. Thank you. Cheers, [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 03:00, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

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Him being a me-109E fighter pilot and being awarded the silver Combat Flight Badge, which normally were awarded after 60 combat missions?

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No mention of this besides his awards. Below was copied and pasted from this link here: https://www.historynet.com/reinhard-heydrich-a-devil-with-many-faces/

(Redacted)

NOTBOND007 — Preceding unsigned comment added by NotBond007 (talkcontribs) 00:33, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry but we can't host that much non-free content here. Interested persons can click on the link.— Diannaa (talk) 01:04, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
There is some content on this in Hitler's Hangman: The Life of Heydrich. I can fetch it from the library tomorrow.— Diannaa (talk) 01:07, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have added some content in the "Service record" section. Where data (dates in particular) disagrees between Gerwarth and the website, I went with Gerwarth. — Diannaa (talk) 00:27, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! NotBond007 (talk) 01:05, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Echoing Nazi theories of Hyperinflation

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The article til just now adopted a Nazi talking point that the treaty of Versailles caused the hyperinflation in Germany when real historical research has shown a murkier and less clear cause. The wiki should not adopt Nazi talking points. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wideeyedraven (talkcontribs) 20:48, 10 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The source book notes the reparations required under the Treaty as well as Germany's enormous and unrepayable war debt. So I am going to amend the prose slightly to include that. Further discussion of the complexities of the hyperinflation would be better suited to inclusion at Hyperinflation in the Weimar Republic. Make sure you cite your sources. Thanks, — Diannaa (talk) 01:06, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Heydrich's Kriegsmarine rank

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Under Naval Career is written: "He was promoted on 1 July 1928 to the rank of sub-lieutenant (Oberleutnant zur See)". Sub-lieutenant is not the same as an Oberleutnant. An Oberleutnant ("zur See" or on land) is the HIGHEST rank of lieutenant, and a sub-lieutenant is BELOW the rank of lieutenant. Can someone please make the correction for me? I do not understand Wikipedia, and I don't want to damage anything. When you make the correctio, be careful of Oberstleutnant because that is a Lieutenant-Colonel and much higher in rank. You can reach me under fkarno@hotmail.com 87.115.253.157 (talk) 00:04, 20 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have corrected the rank to first lieutenant to agree with the source, which is visible at present via Google Books. Also I removed some content that does not appear to be supported by the citation. Thanks for the correction. — Diannaa (talk) 02:26, 20 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I don’t know where the additional editorial content came from. Cheers, Kierzek (talk) 02:28, 20 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sepsis

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Something of a mystery surrounds the direct cause of his death. Sepsis cannot stand as anything but what the inadequate autopsy caused, but that has been frequently challenged.

Sudden postoperative cardiovascular collapse and coma suggest either a cerebral embolism or severe brain ischemia following a massive pulmonary embolism with acute cor pulmonale and impaired cardiac output.20 The embolus may have been a large fat particle or a blood clot, since both materials were found in the right ventricle and in the pulmonary artery. In the absence of examination of the brain and of a search for evidence of pulmonary embolus, deep vein thromboses, and foramen ovale, an accurate diagnosis is impossible. However, sudden cardiovascular collapse and coma occurring several days after surgery in a young, previously healthy patient without long bone fractures suggests a pulmonary embolism with acute cor pulmonale and brain anoxia The cause of his death has remained obscure. Massive pulmonary embolus with acute cor pulmonale and cerebral anoxia is a reasonable assumption . .The cause of his death has remained obscure. Massive pulmonary embolus with acute cor pulmonale and cerebral anoxia is a reasonable assumption p.6

Weisz and Albury think a factor of negligence may have played a role. I have put their suggestion in a footnote. Nishidani (talk) 08:41, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The new version is much better, with a more balanced and comprehensive view. — Diannaa (talk) 13:02, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It is better, but in the prime text (not the footnote) it only states, "has been challenged". It does not state by who; so, it is vague and ambiguous. Kierzek (talk) 18:07, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's too complex a story to be other than hinted at in the Heydrich bio. Some of the details are given on The Assassination of Reinhard Heydrichh main article. The two main points are the quarrel between Hitler's physician Theodor Morell, who had a vested interest in the new drug (whose value had been ascertained as possible because American soldiers had it as part of their standard baggage), and ostensible resistance by the doctor directly in charge. This was well know but Weisz and Albury suggest there may have been an ideological objection or even a motive to allow Heydrich to die, as was the case in 1938 regarding suspicions that proper medical care had been withheld from Ernst vom Rath, so that his death could provide a warrant for Kristallnacht. Interested readers can see the Heydrich assassination article, and of course click on the sources and read them if they want to follow the paper trail, and perhaps even improvve the coverage there. I'm too busy offline.Nishidani (talk) 19:42, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I have added the names of the specific people who made these statements, and worded it a bit more neutrally so it doesn't come across as a conspiracy theory. See what you think. — Diannaa (talk) 01:39, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Nishidan, it’s not enough that readers might go to another article for clarification or a book for possible further detail, especially for a GA rated article. With due respect, it needs more; to be clear and attribution stated therein. Otherwise, it’s vague and appears in Wikipedia’s voice. Diannaa, your copy edit clarifies the addition and gives attribution. Thank you. Cheers, Kierzek (talk) 03:00, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]