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A user with 77 edits. Account created on 17 September 2024.
27 November 2024
- 18:0618:06, 27 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Things Fall Apart →Publication history: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit App section source
- 18:0018:00, 27 November 2024 diff hist −13 m Mbaise →History: Fixed grammar current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit App section source
26 November 2024
- 19:3619:36, 26 November 2024 diff hist +6 m Igbo culture In Paragraph 2 and 3, under the subtitle "Apprenticeship", I added "like" and also changed "After" to "after" respectively for a proper grammatical structure and accuracy. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 17:2117:21, 26 November 2024 diff hist +7 Igbo nationalism In "Colonial" under "Preservation and Revival of Igbo Culture" I added "of" to the fourth sentence for a proper flow of sentence, added "as" in a sentence under "Post-Colonial" for clarity, added "s" to "Igbo" and corrected the name "Major General Yakabu Gowon" to "Major General Yakubu Gowon" which is the correct name. current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1414:14, 26 November 2024 diff hist −12 Charleswood, Winnipeg No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:5502:55, 26 November 2024 diff hist −3 m Shafqat Baloch I capitalised the first letter of "indian" and also replaced "anti tank" to "anti-tank" in paragraph 5 for grammatical correctness. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:1202:12, 26 November 2024 diff hist +8 m Clint Robinson (canoeist) I added "who was" at the beginning of paragraph 6 for clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 00:4600:46, 26 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Alexander Morrison (headmaster) I added "," at the opening sentence of paragraph 6 after "In November 1876" for better sentence flow. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
25 November 2024
- 15:5415:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist +7 Trelleborg (company) I rephrased "Later, the company's focused rubber products" with "Later, the company focused on rubber products" for better sentence flow and clarity. I also added "that" to the first line of paragraph 6, for a better comprehension. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 05:3705:37, 25 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Gavin O'Brien No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 05:3205:32, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Niepołomice Forest I capitalized "western" and replaced "transversed" with "transverse". Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 05:1305:13, 25 November 2024 diff hist +10 m Polytestosterone phloretin phosphate No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 04:5704:57, 25 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Rita Paulsen I made minor changes Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:4704:47, 25 November 2024 diff hist +19 m Nedu Wazobia I changed "nick" by adding "name" to make it a noun and hereby grammatically fit into the sentence, replaced "His" with "He", capitalized "english" because it is a noun and therefore should start with capital letter. I attached the definition of alter-ego beside it for a faster understanding and capitalized "c-section" because it is a noun. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:1704:17, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Gerry Kissell I changed the placement of the date from "19 May 1964" to "May 19, 1964". Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:5503:55, 25 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Isaya Mwita Charles I added "th" and "st" to a date on two different occasions Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:4603:46, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1 Code injection I replaced "unsanitised" with "unsensitized" to give more meaning to the sentence. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:2303:23, 25 November 2024 diff hist −14 m ETG Designers and Consultants I made some adjustments to the spellings of some words Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:0803:08, 25 November 2024 diff hist 0 Ahmed Belbachir Haskouri I made minor changes Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:2602:26, 25 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Stiphodon atropurpureus I changed a spelling of a word Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 00:1600:16, 25 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Mike Rutzen I spaced words joined together and added spacings after a punctuation mark to bring about clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
24 November 2024
- 23:4323:43, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 Information lifecycle management No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 23:3223:32, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Mona de Grenoble I added a punctuation mark after a date Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 23:2123:21, 24 November 2024 diff hist +15 Louis Claude Noisette I added a punctuation mark at the end of "Nois" because it is an abbreviation of the name "Noisette", added the meaning of infantryman for a quicker understanding and I changed the spelling of "honour" to "honor". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 22:0422:04, 24 November 2024 diff hist +258 Mass media in Nigeria Firstly, I added, "to be" in paragraph 1, for grammatical accuracy. Secondly, I added the word "OUTSPOKEN AND AIRING OUT" to paragraph 11 for conciseness. Furthermore, I replaced "being" with "was an" to enhance clarity. I further added "s" in Abacha to show possessive noun, making it "Abacha's Dictatorship"- this is done to show that the action belongs to the noun (Abacha). I added "democracy and civilian rule" to rightly replace the words before. I also gave the meaning of "Fatwa" Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 20:5820:58, 24 November 2024 diff hist +54 Ayo Ayoola-Amale Firstly, I added "Nigeria" to show the country" Kano' is located. Secondly I added " different African Countries in paragraph 7, since the author has worked for more than one African Countries Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 20:1720:17, 24 November 2024 diff hist +5 Apache Cassandra I did some series of change in paragraph 1; the following are the changes I did in this article. I changed the preposition from "at" to "on and "on" to in" in a different case, for grammar accuracy. And in paragraph eight (8), I changed all the "KEYSPACE" to "KEY SPACE" Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:3819:38, 24 November 2024 diff hist +77 Gamal Hamdan I added "born and died" in the preamble, alongside the date of birth and death. I also added "Egypt" after Cairo university to show the nation in-which Cairo is located. I elucidates the meaning of "magnum opus" which means "most popular or appraised work" . Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:1119:11, 24 November 2024 diff hist +404 Financial domination In the first paragraph, line 1, I added "financial domination" for clarity. In paragraph 2, I also added "submissive and dominance" for clarity and precision. In paragraph three, I explain why money slaves (financial submissives) have low self-esteem. In the paragraph before the RECEPTION, I added some words like, benefactor, oppressing, superiority, for better understanding. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 17:1917:19, 24 November 2024 diff hist +2 Independence Day (Nigeria) I added ''st'' to ''1'' making it 1st Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 17:0717:07, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4 Open access No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 16:2516:25, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 Business activity monitoring I used "these" in place of "this" because it a pronoun that is used to refer to plural objects that is close to the speaker. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 16:0516:05, 24 November 2024 diff hist −13 m COVID-19 pandemic in Hubei No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:4915:49, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2 MEDINA I removed punctuation marks wrongly placed Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:3015:30, 24 November 2024 diff hist −48 Flat IP I organized formats under Benefits of Flat IP Architecture, Drawbacks and Challenges, Use Cases of Flat IP architecture, and Key Considerations for Mobile Networks using numbers before each point made for easy location of points and to guard against ambiguity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:0315:03, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Nigeria Customs Service I removed wrong punctuation marks from the article under the Organizational Structure heading and inputted the correct ones and made other changes Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1614:16, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 Oliver Townend I replaced aged" with "at age" Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 13:5113:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 m MetaLab, Ltd. I added a comma on two different occasions after a date at the beginning of a new sentence and added "th" after a day on a date. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 13:2113:21, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Butere No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:4111:41, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 Assiniboine Park Zoo I replaced 5 years old with 5 years of age Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:1911:19, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Lere Oyewumi I replaced the word abrupt with immediate and fledgling with upcoming, galvanized with aroused and articulate with connected. This is to ensure simplicity and utmost clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 10:3510:35, 24 November 2024 diff hist +22 Oyo Empire I created a link in "metropolitan". Tag: Visual edit
- 10:2010:20, 24 November 2024 diff hist +26 Ifẹ In the second paragraph, I created a link in "primordial". I capitalized the first letter of the word "Ife" and placed an Italy on it. I did a space adjustment; the right placement of the punctuation mark "." Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5709:57, 24 November 2024 diff hist +20 Yoruba people In the first paragraph, I created a link in "Ethnologue." In the eleventh paragraph, I developed a link in "Archaeologically." I capitalized the first letter "o" in "oba" to "Oba" because it is a person's title and cannot begin with a small letter. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:3309:33, 24 November 2024 diff hist +26 Culture of Africa In paragraph two, I added "music" as one of Africa's numerous ethnic nationalities. I also created a link in "Westernized". Tag: Visual edit
- 08:5308:53, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1 Martin Welz No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 08:3308:33, 24 November 2024 diff hist −11 Education in Africa I added "-" between "pre" and "colonial", capitalized the first letters in "Universal Primary Education" and replaced "ingenuity" with "creativity", and "deracinating" with "uprooting" for simplicity and clarity Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:5007:50, 24 November 2024 diff hist +13 m Guru (Ghanaian rapper) I inputted the proper spacing where required and added "th" to the date. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:1107:11, 24 November 2024 diff hist +12 m Shoe4Africa Childrens Hospital I inputted the synonym of "flagship" which is "largest" in a bracket beside it in the article for a better understanding and I added "th" to the day on a date in the article Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:3906:39, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Sankomota I replaced "frontman" with "lead singer" Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit