User contributions for Dale101usa

6 September 2013

• 00:1400:14, 6 September 2013 diff hist −3 List of National Medal of Science laureates →Engineering Sciences: John Prausnitz without the "N" is the person who was intended. NOTE: When the name appears RED, that means that a mistake has been made, with high likelihood!

5 September 2013

• 22:0122:01, 5 September 2013 diff hist −1 Sheppey Crossing No edit summary
• 22:0022:00, 5 September 2013 diff hist +120 Sheppey Crossing According to the International System of Units (the S.I.) there SHALL be a blank between a number and its unit. E.g. 400 W.
• 16:1116:11, 5 September 2013 diff hist +17 Russian Navy In English, the single-digit numbers zero through nine are spelled out as words in text. This might be different in Russian, but this article is in English.
• 15:4915:49, 5 September 2013 diff hist 0 Cefuroxime →Side effects: "widely-stated" is hyphenated. On the other hand "crossallegic" doesn't need a hyphen.
• 15:4715:47, 5 September 2013 diff hist +4 Cefuroxime →Side effects: "well-tolerated", as an adjective, is hyphenated in English.
• 15:4515:45, 5 September 2013 diff hist +64 Cefuroxime Patent "rights" to produce this drug are now irrelevent in the United States since its patent expired after the usual 17 years. There was no need to even mention "rights" to this drug.
• 15:3915:39, 5 September 2013 diff hist +143 Cefuroxime "In US" is completely wrong English. Proper use is "In the United States", with the word "the" being necessary, just as in "the U.K.", "the U.A.E.", "the U.S.S.R.", and so forth.
• 15:2915:29, 5 September 2013 diff hist +52 Cefuroxime When used as an adjective, "second-generation" is hyphenated in English
• 15:2415:24, 5 September 2013 diff hist −4 Cefuroxime The phrase "as and..." was included, and that does not make much sense
• 02:3402:34, 5 September 2013 diff hist +11 Heinlein No edit summary
• 02:3302:33, 5 September 2013 diff hist +44 Heinlein No edit summary
• 02:2802:28, 5 September 2013 diff hist +15 Heinlein No edit summary
• 02:2402:24, 5 September 2013 diff hist +55 Heinlein No edit summary

3 September 2013

• 23:4023:40, 3 September 2013 diff hist +13 Orange, New South Wales →Media
• 23:3823:38, 3 September 2013 diff hist +25 Orange, New South Wales health services and education are NOT industries. They are services. There is a clear distinction between and industry and a service.
• 19:5719:57, 3 September 2013 diff hist +8 Airship No edit summary
• 19:4819:48, 3 September 2013 diff hist −25 Airship No edit summary
• 19:4619:46, 3 September 2013 diff hist −35 Airship No edit summary
• 18:1018:10, 3 September 2013 diff hist +15 Airship semirigid, nonpressurized, nonrigid, birdlike, etc., are NOT hyphenated. Also "zeppelin" is a common noun in aviation, not a proper noun
• 15:1315:13, 3 September 2013 diff hist −6 AGM-84H/K SLAM-ER No edit summary
• 15:1215:12, 3 September 2013 diff hist +11 AGM-84H/K SLAM-ER Antiship is one word, it does not need a hyphen, just as antiaircraft, antimissile, antitank, and antisubmarine.
• 15:0715:07, 3 September 2013 diff hist −42 AGM-84H/K SLAM-ER There is no kind of word as "Superhornet". It has ALWAYS been the "Super Hornet". Official names must be used, and American English.
• 15:0215:02, 3 September 2013 diff hist +198 AGM-84H/K SLAM-ER "prelaunch" and "postlaunch" are correct, and I corrected numerous other such mistakes. This article MUST be written in American English.
• 14:4814:48, 3 September 2013 diff hist +13 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile No edit summary
• 14:4614:46, 3 September 2013 diff hist +25 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile "datalink" is one word, not hyphenated, as always. Also, this is an AMERICAN weapon, and American terminology must be used throughout.
• 14:4214:42, 3 September 2013 diff hist −33 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile Using "over-the-horizon" and "standoff" in the same sentence is a shocking redundancy because either one implies the other.
• 14:3914:39, 3 September 2013 diff hist −7 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile No edit summary
• 14:3714:37, 3 September 2013 diff hist +59 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile "datalink" is not hyphenated, and it never has been in general use. Correcting numerous other problems of this kind.
• 14:2414:24, 3 September 2013 diff hist +6 AGM-84E Standoff Land Attack Missile When used as adjectives "high-explosive" and "high-value". On the other hand, antiship is not hyphenated, and neither are antitank, antiaircraft, and antisubmarine.

1 September 2013

• 18:3618:36, 1 September 2013 diff hist +43 Delaware Memorial Bridge →War Memorial
• 18:3418:34, 1 September 2013 diff hist +11 Delaware Memorial Bridge →The first span
• 18:3318:33, 1 September 2013 diff hist +262 Delaware Memorial Bridge No edit summary

30 August 2013

• 22:4622:46, 30 August 2013 diff hist +204 San Antonio-class amphibious transport dock Adding useful wikilinks such as flight deck and hangar deck and correcting many writing problems, including excessive jargon.
• 00:5600:56, 30 August 2013 diff hist −23 Adrienne Barbeau No edit summary

29 August 2013

• 00:1000:10, 29 August 2013 diff hist +39 Flexagon No edit summary
• 00:0200:02, 29 August 2013 diff hist +3 Flexagon In the United States, U.S.A. is written with the periods, and these events happened in New Jersey.

28 August 2013

• 21:5221:52, 28 August 2013 diff hist +33 Pioneer 10 No edit summary
• 21:4921:49, 28 August 2013 diff hist −5 Pioneer 10 →Lost official mission film: According to the S.I., there is always a BLANK between the number and the unit. E.g. 125 watts
• 21:4821:48, 28 August 2013 diff hist −21 Pioneer 10 →Lost official mission Documentary Film recovered
• 21:4721:47, 28 August 2013 diff hist +25 Pioneer 10 →Lost official mission Documentary Film recovered: According to the
• 21:4421:44, 28 August 2013 diff hist +15 Pioneer 10 No edit summary
• 21:4221:42, 28 August 2013 diff hist −11 Pioneer 10 No edit summary
• 21:4021:40, 28 August 2013 diff hist +133 Pioneer 10 "ARC" is unsuitable because that means the Atlantic Richfield Company and other things!
• 02:4602:46, 28 August 2013 diff hist +4 Platonic solid "un-spherical" is not a word, but "nonspherical" IS. Also, "unspherical" would not be hyphenated even if it were a word.

27 August 2013

• 03:5903:59, 27 August 2013 diff hist +5 Tamlyn Tomita →TV appearances
• 03:5803:58, 27 August 2013 diff hist +9 Tamlyn Tomita →TV appearances
• 03:5403:54, 27 August 2013 diff hist +13 Tamlyn Tomita →Early life: People are born or live ON islands and not in them. E.g. Nicole Kidman was born on Oahu and not in it, and some people are born on Greenland.

25 August 2013

• 20:3920:39, 25 August 2013 diff hist −4 WoodmenLife →Mergers
• 20:3820:38, 25 August 2013 diff hist +7 WoodmenLife →Programs