User contributions for James Arboghast

27 September 2019

• 06:5206:52, 27 September 2019 diff hist −153 General Motors streetcar conspiracy →Early years: removed "conspiracy theorists connect. . ." contributor has had since 4 years since 2015 to provide source. Unsourced content cannot remain in WP indefinitely.

16 September 2019

• 18:3618:36, 16 September 2019 diff hist −232 Adrian Edmondson →1990s: removed unsourced statement with cite req dated 2012. Contributor has had 7 years to provide source. Unsourced content cannot stay in WP forever.
• 01:0601:06, 16 September 2019 diff hist −29 Jack Hues →Post-Wang Chung era (1991–present): remove pointless unnecessary commas; remove unwarranted semicolon --- only use semicolon when following content directly follows on
• 00:5800:58, 16 September 2019 diff hist −51 Jack Hues →Wang Chung era (1977–1991): "met up" ? They met. Nobody meets up. Numerous other wordsmithing fixes.
• 00:5300:53, 16 September 2019 diff hist −13 Jack Hues →Early life: get rid of tokenistic linguistic expressions "would then". He did. You're talking in the past tense.

14 September 2019

• 09:1909:19, 14 September 2019 diff hist −9 m The Lorax (film) →Production: replace "which was" with comma. That was redundant, repetitive expression.
• 09:1709:17, 14 September 2019 diff hist −1 m The Lorax (film) →Production: replace "titular" with "Lorax". Please avoid using amateur movie review buzzwords, eg: titular, eponymous, garnered, etcetera.

11 September 2019

• 14:4114:41, 11 September 2019 diff hist +935 Talk:Philip K. Dick →Personal Philosophy
• 14:2714:27, 11 September 2019 diff hist +282 Talk:Philip K. Dick →"Non-notable"
• 14:2014:20, 11 September 2019 diff hist +3 m Talk:Philip K. Dick →Personal Philosophy: correct typos
• 14:1814:18, 11 September 2019 diff hist −2 m Talk:Philip K. Dick →Personal Philosophy: correct typos
• 14:1714:17, 11 September 2019 diff hist +991 Talk:Philip K. Dick →Personal Philosophy

31 August 2019

• 06:3006:30, 31 August 2019 diff hist +22 Five Points, Manhattan Undid revision 912980881 by 67.11.51.191 (talk) That is not "bad content". Your edit amounts to vandalism. Kindly cease and desist. Tag: Undo
• 03:4803:48, 31 August 2019 diff hist +1 m John-Michael Howson →Reporter: missing period
• 03:4603:46, 31 August 2019 diff hist −124 John-Michael Howson →Reporter: removed statement re professional respect from Hollywood --- contributor has had 6 years since November 2013 to provide reliable reference.

25 August 2019

• 04:1804:18, 25 August 2019 diff hist +38 Wall of Voodoo cite request ---who said that?
• 04:1704:17, 25 August 2019 diff hist +38 Wall of Voodoo dite request --- who said Wall of Voodoo were New Wave? I disagree; they do not fit into any convenient genre box. Their musical style was unique and can only be classified "Wall of Voodoo".

22 August 2019

• 03:5103:51, 22 August 2019 diff hist +61 Abbott and Costello Meet Frankenstein →Production: added citation requests
• 02:3002:30, 22 August 2019 diff hist −223 Benny Hill →The Benny Hill Show: removed sentence with citation request posted November 2011 --- contributor has had 8 years to provide inline source; uncourced content cannot remain in WP indefinitely

17 August 2019

• 01:0001:00, 17 August 2019 diff hist −1 m Lunar pareidolia replace "most famous" > "best-known"

12 August 2019

• 05:3605:36, 12 August 2019 diff hist −87 m Richard Benjamin removed topic drift reference to Peter O'Toole; article subject is Richard Benjamin

7 August 2019

• 00:1400:14, 7 August 2019 diff hist +10 The Chiodo Brothers Word-smithed for clarit. In WP articles we do not use abbreviations such as "bros." or "etc"; we spell out the entire word(s). "Claymation" wikilinked.

5 August 2019

• 14:1914:19, 5 August 2019 diff hist −17 m Patriot Games (film) keep it simple, please
• 14:1814:18, 5 August 2019 diff hist −23 m Patriot Games (film) removed "is the lone holdover," completely unnecessary expression

4 August 2019

• 13:4813:48, 4 August 2019 diff hist −4 m Carrie Fisher →Early life: clarity
• 07:0407:04, 4 August 2019 diff hist +12 m Hunting Hitler detail
• 02:4702:47, 4 August 2019 diff hist −18 Dave Edmunds →Rockpile and other collaborations: word-smithe for clarity and simplicity. Removed "albeit just barely," because 1 week at #1 is not"just barely".

19 July 2019

• 04:1404:14, 19 July 2019 diff hist +9 m Bedknobs and Broomsticks →Plot: add "children"

11 July 2019

• 01:5901:59, 11 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Australian Elizabethan Theatre Trust →Founding: wordsmithed for clarity

5 July 2019

• 09:1109:11, 5 July 2019 diff hist −1 m Kray twins →Nightclub owners: accepted > adopted

4 July 2019

• 07:1207:12, 4 July 2019 diff hist +51 William Quantrill citation request

3 July 2019

• 07:3307:33, 3 July 2019 diff hist +9 Swordfish photos of swordfish show the bill is indeed flat and long, but iit is also pointed, as the Taxonomy and etymology para describes
• 07:2807:28, 3 July 2019 diff hist +282 Talk:Swordfish →Plagarism

1 July 2019

• 07:5407:54, 1 July 2019 diff hist +22 m Julia Zemiro →Acting: "many" is a weasel word, should not be in WP
• 02:2302:23, 1 July 2019 diff hist −53 Squid →Description: Replace "have been modified" with "evolved"; replace "The foot has been transformed into a" with "A". This article is loaded with redundant and / or incorrect expression.
• 02:1502:15, 1 July 2019 diff hist +12 m Squid wikilink "octopuses"

30 June 2019

• 03:0103:01, 30 June 2019 diff hist +3 Grant Shaud →Career: That sentence really needed that comma; but "assumed" ? Aw c'mon, gimme a break. That is incompetent writing as only wikipedians produce.
• 02:5002:50, 30 June 2019 diff hist +6 m Faith Ford →Early life: clarity

28 June 2019

• 15:2815:28, 28 June 2019 diff hist −62 m Victorian gold rush →Overview: remove excess text
• 15:2715:27, 28 June 2019 diff hist +4 m Victorian gold rush →Overview: italicize super text
• 15:2515:25, 28 June 2019 diff hist +85 Victorian gold rush wordsmithed for clarity and accuracy

25 June 2019

• 14:3514:35, 25 June 2019 diff hist −44 Hermit crab Wordsmithed for clarity and brevity. Also, to keep things simple.

23 June 2019

• 07:1707:17, 23 June 2019 diff hist −1,308 McLibel case →Court of Appeal: removed statement pending cite req november 2012; also statements re carcinogen and matter for parliament cite req 2012

22 June 2019

• 05:0505:05, 22 June 2019 diff hist +4 m Private's Progress →Plot: add "the"
• 05:0005:00, 22 June 2019 diff hist +7 m Private's Progress →Plot: clarify

21 June 2019

• 09:2109:21, 21 June 2019 diff hist 0 m Sabines →Language: add hyphen to hyphenate term
• 09:0709:07, 21 June 2019 diff hist +6 High roller No, wrong wrong wrong, click the link to Australian Dollar and there it is designated AUD$, not A$. Let's get it right and not have WP contradicting itself.

19 June 2019

• 12:0612:06, 19 June 2019 diff hist −3 m MC 900 Ft. Jesus →Career: correct minor stray "in"

15 June 2019

• 12:1812:18, 15 June 2019 diff hist −162 Philip K. Dick →Style and works: removed reference to Jung in the Exegesis --- contributor has had 12 years since 2007 to add source. 12 years is way too long. Unsubstantiated content cannot stay in WP indefinitely.

14 June 2019

• 23:0023:00, 14 June 2019 diff hist −9 m Razor gang →Background: removed "existing"' of course the concentration existed, that much is self-implicit