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## Integrations providing your to-dos
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But wait! There is more besides local to-do lists and shopping lists.
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Now we have a to-do entity, we can also start using it with other integrations
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Now that we have a to-do entity, we can also start using it with other integrations
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that, for example, can get your to-do lists from an external service.
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As of this release, you can bring in your [Todoist] and [Google Tasks]
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<img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-11/conditional-card-per-user.png' alt='Screenshot showing the configuration dialog of the conditional card, which now allows you to set which users to show the card at.'>
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The screenshot above shows how the card is only shown when the user is
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The screenshot above shows how the card is only shown when the user
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who is logged in is Frenck. It is hidden for all other users.
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### Numeric state condition <!-- omit in toc -->
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Similar to the state condition, the numeric state condition allows you to show
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or hide cards based on the state of a entity, only this time, based on its
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or hide cards based on the state of an entity, only this time, based on its
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numeric value. Useful if you want to show or hide cards based on temperature,
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humidity, or any other numeric entity.
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<img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-11/conditional-card-numeric-state.png' alt='Screenshot showing the configuration dialog of the conditional card, which you can now configure an numeric condition on when to show the card.'>
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<img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-11/conditional-card-numeric-state.png' alt='Screenshot showing the configuration dialog of the conditional card, on which you can now configure a numeric condition when to show the card.'>
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In the screenshot above, this thermostat card will only be shown on the dashboard
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be freely adopted and implemented by any hardware creator, no matter how big
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or small. Improv Wi-Fi is also supported by [ESPHome](https://esphome.io/components/esp32_improv#improv-via-ble).
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Nice job on this one [@emonemery]!
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Nice job on this one [@emontnemery]!
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[@emontnemery]: https://github.com/emontnemery
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But not anymore! Thanks to [@karwosts], you can now also configure your
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<img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-11/script-fields.png' alt='Screenshot showing the scripts fields in the UI while editting a script in the script editor.'>
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<img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-11/script-fields.png' alt='Screenshot showing the scripts fields in the UI while editing a script in the script editor.'>
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[Tami4 Edge / Edge+]: /integrations/tami4
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[To-do list]: /integrations/todo
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This release also has a new virtual integration. Virtual integrations are stubs that are handled by other (existing) integrations to help with findability. The following virtual integration has been added:
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This release also has a new virtual integration. Virtual integrations are stubs that are handled by other (existing) integrations to help with findability. The following virtual integrations have been added:
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- **[Cribl]**, provided by [Splunk]
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([@gjohansson-ST] - [#100867]) ([documentation](/integrations/homekit))
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([@gjohansson-ST] - [#100867]) ([documentation](/integrations/demo))
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[@gjohansson-ST]: https://github.com/gjohansson-ST
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[#100867]: https://github.com/home-assistant/core/pull/100867

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