Update deploy text

garethx · web-flow · commit 3e01c36e301b · 2020-03-13T16:37:52.000Z
diff --git a/packages/homepage/content/docs/3-deployment.md b/packages/homepage/content/docs/3-deployment.md
@@ -1,23 +1,24 @@
 ---
 title: Deploying your Sandbox
 authors: ['arthurdenner', 'CompuIves']
-description: It's possible to deploy your app directly from CodeSandbox
+description: Deploy your app to production from CodeSandbox
 ---
 
-## What Sandboxes Can be Deployed?
+## Deploying a Sandbox
 
-To deploy your app, you need to own the sandbox, so you'll have to fork a
-sandbox you don’t own.
+It's possible to deploy your app directly from CodeSandbox through one of our integrated services. To deploy your app, you need to own the sandbox.
+
+![Deployment Sidebar](./images/deployment-sidebar.png)
 
 ## ZEIT
 
-To deploy to [Now](https://zeit.co/now), access the Preferences menu and select
-the Integrations tab. Log into your ZEIT account and it’s all set.
+To deploy to ZEIT's [Now](https://zeit.co/now), access the Preferences menu and select
+the Integrations tab, then log into your ZEIT account.
 
 ### Deploying
 
-Go to any of your sandboxes, click on the Deployment menu (the rocket icon in
-the sidebar) and click on "Now". You'll need to sign in to
+Go to any of your sandboxes, click on the Deployment menu, which is the rocket icon in
+left-hand activity bar in the editor. Select "Now". You'll need to sign in to
 [Now](https://zeit.co/now) when you're deploying for the first time. After
 you've signed in, you will be able to click "Deploy Now". It will deploy the
 sandbox and give you a URL.
@@ -33,9 +34,7 @@ With [Netlify](https://netlify.com) you don't even need to connect to your
 account. This means you can create deployments to share and use even if you
 don't have a [Netlify](https://netlify.com) account.
 
-Some templates are better than others, but as of now, we have a number of
-templates that support [Netlify](https://netlify.com) deployments:
-
+Not all templates on CodeSandbox support [Netlify](https://netlify.com) deployments. It's hidden as an option where it's not supported, but the following templates do:
 - React
 - Vue
 - Preact
@@ -47,12 +46,10 @@ templates that support [Netlify](https://netlify.com) deployments:
 - Typescript Variants of React and Parcel
 - Gatsby
 
-We will work on making more templates available in the future.
-
 ### Deploying
 
 Go to any of your sandboxes that are supported, click on the Deployment menu
-(the rocket icon in the sidebar) and click on "[Netlify](https://netlify.com)".
+(the rocket icon in the  activity bar in the editor) and click on "[Netlify](https://netlify.com)".
 Click the "Deploy" button to start a new deploy. As the sandbox builds, you can
 view the logs of the build to see if something went wrong. When the build
 finishes, you'll get a link to the deployed site. You can also claim the site to
@@ -61,9 +58,5 @@ add it to your Netlify dashboard.
 ### More Features
 
 You don't need to sign in, so if you want to add a sandbox deployment to your
-account you can click the "Claim Site" button and the deployed sandbox will be
+account you need to click the "Claim Site" button and the deployed sandbox will be
 added to your Netlify account.
-
-## UI
-
-![Deployment Sidebar](./images/deployment-sidebar.png)
