Update Teams text

garethx · web-flow · commit b4287121726e · 2020-03-13T13:06:33.000Z
diff --git a/packages/homepage/content/docs/2-teams.md b/packages/homepage/content/docs/2-teams.md
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 title: Teams
 authors: ['CompuIves']
 description:
-  A team makes it easier to collaborate on sandboxes with others. As a team you
-  share the ownership of the sandboxes in that team, every sandbox automatically
+  A team makes it easier to collaborate on sandboxes with others. In a team you
+  share ownership of the sandboxes and every sandbox automatically
   has a live session open.
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@@ -13,34 +13,34 @@ You can create and manage teams from the dashboard.
 
 ![Create Team](./images/team-create.png)
 
-As soon as you've created a team you will be greeted with the team overview.
+As soon as you've created a team you will be shown the team overview.
 
 ![Team Overview](./images/team-overview.png)
 
 ## Inviting Team Members
 
 There's no limit on how many team members a team can have. You can invite others
-by entering their username in the bottom left corner. Others will get a
-notification (the bell icon in the header) when they are invited to a new team.
+by entering their username in the bottom left corner. They will get a
+notification (the bell icon in the header) in CodeSandbox when they are invited to a new team.
 From there they can accept or refuse the invitation.
 
 ![Team Notifications](./images/team-invite.png)
 
 ## Sharing Sandboxes
 
-As a team you have a sidebar item called "Our Sandboxes" with directories, just
+On the dashboard, a team has a sidebar item called "Our Sandboxes" with directories, just
 like your personal sandboxes. You can create new sandboxes directly from here,
-or you can drag your own sandboxes from 'My Sandboxes' to 'Our Sandboxes'. All
-sandboxes in a team can be seen and edited by all team members. We still keep
-track of who originally created the sandbox though, this means that only the
-original creator of the sandbox can actually delete it.
+or drag your own sandboxes from 'My Sandboxes' to 'Our Sandboxes'. All
+sandboxes in a team can be seen and edited by all team members. We keep
+track of who originally created the sandbox though, and only the
+original creator of the sandbox can delete it.
 
 ![Team Sandboxes](./images/team-sandboxes.png)
 
 ## Collaborating on Sandboxes
 
 Whenever you open a team sandbox, you also automatically open a live session.
 Other team members will join this live session if they open the sandbox as well.
-You can still share the live session with others.
+You can still invite other people who aren't members of the team to the live session.
 
 ![A Team Live Session](./images/team-live.png)
