doc: PG 16 relnotes, improve desc. of pg_log_standby_snapshot()

bmomjian · bmomjian · commit 4123455a9e54 · 2023-05-22T10:21:20.000-04:00
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
@@ -1306,7 +1306,7 @@ Allow logical decoding on standbys (Bertrand Drouvot, Andres Freund, Amit Khande
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 Snapshot WAL records are required for logical slot creation but cannot be created on standbys.
-The new function pg_log_standby_snapshot() creates such records, which speeds logical slot creation on standbys.
+To avoid delays, the new function pg_log_standby_snapshot() allows creation of such records.
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