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Various minor improvements to the SGML documentation: fix some incorrect
SGML markup, add a "deprecated features" section to the 8.0 release notes, untabify release.sgml and runtime.sgml, and make some other minor improvements.
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‎doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml

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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml,v 1.7 2004/07/31 23:04:54 tgl Exp $ -->
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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml,v 1.8 2004/08/24 00:06:50 neilc Exp $ -->
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<appendix id="errcodes-appendix">
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<title><productname>PostgreSQL</productname> Error Codes</title>
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<entry>Class 58</entry>
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<entry>System Error (errors external to PostgreSQL itself)</entry>
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<entry>System Error (errors external to <productname>PostgreSQL</> itself)</entry>
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‎doc/src/sgml/problems.sgml

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<sect1 id="bug-reporting">
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<productname>PostgreSQL</productname> more reliable because even the utmost
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<productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
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will work on every platform under every circumstance.
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encountered in an older release of <productname>PostgreSQL</>
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has already been fixed. We can only provide limited support for
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sites using older releases of PostgreSQL; if you require more
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than we can provide, consider acquiring a commercial support
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sites using older releases of <productname>PostgreSQL</>; if you
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require more than we can provide, consider acquiring a
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commercial support contract.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_index.sgml

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<literal>ALTER INDEX</> is a PostgreSQL extension.
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<command>ALTER INDEX</> is a <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
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extension.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_sequence.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/create_tablespace.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/release_savepoint.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/rollback_to.sgml

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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/select_into.sgml

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