doc: PG 10 release notes updates

bmomjian · bmomjian · commit cdd5bcad5ea6 · 2017-04-25T11:17:14.000-04:00
Reported-by: Michael Paquier, Felix Gerzaguet
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-10.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-10.sgml
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ Add full text search support for <type>JSON</> and <type>JSONB</> (Dmitry Dolgov
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-This is accessed via <function>ts_headline()</> and to_tsvector. RIGHT SECTION?
+This is accessed via <function>ts_headline()</> and <function>to_tsvector</>. RIGHT SECTION?
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@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ Paquier, Heikki Linnakangas)
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-This proves better security than the existing 'md5' negotiation and
+This proves better security than the existing <literal>md5</> negotiation and
 storage method.
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@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
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 Add <acronym>GUC</> <xref linkend="guc-wal-consistency-checking"> to add details to <acronym>WAL</> that can be
-sanity-checked on the standby (Kuntal Ghosh, Michael Paquier, Robert
+sanity-checked on the standby (Kuntal Ghosh, Robert
 Haas)
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@@ -1389,8 +1389,8 @@ Add specification of a Log Sequence Number (<acronym>LSN</>) stopping point in
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-Previously only specification of the stop name, time, and xid were
-supported.
+Previously only specification of the stop name, time, timeline, xid,
+and immediate were supported.
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@@ -1440,7 +1440,8 @@ Author: Simon Riggs <simon@2ndQuadrant.com>
 2017-04-04 [728bd991c] Speedup 2PC recovery by skipping two phase state files i
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-Speed up two-phase commit recovery performance (Simon Riggs)
+Speed up two-phase commit recovery performance (Stas Kelvich, Nikhil
+Sontakke, Michael Paquier)
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@@ -2467,35 +2468,35 @@ It is called <option>--options</>.
 
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 <!--
-Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
-2017-03-23 [eccfef81e] ICU support
+Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
+2016-08-15 [ca9112a42] Stamp HEAD as 10devel.
 -->
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-Allow the <link linkend="configure"><acronym>ICU</></> library to optionally be used for collation support (Peter
-Eisentraut)
+New major version numbering (Peter Eisentraut, Tom Lane)
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-The <acronym>ICU</> library has versioning that allows detection of collation
-changes between versions.  It is enabled via configure option
-<option>--with-icu</>.  The default still uses the operating system's native
-collation library.
+Major versions will now increase just the first number, and minor
+releases will increase just the second number.  A third number will no
+longer be used in Postgres version numbers.
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 </listitem>
 
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 <!--
-Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-2016-08-15 [ca9112a42] Stamp HEAD as 10devel.
+Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
+2017-03-23 [eccfef81e] ICU support
 -->
 <para>
-New major version numbering (Peter Eisentraut, Tom Lane)
+Allow the <link linkend="configure"><acronym>ICU</></> library to optionally be used for collation support (Peter
+Eisentraut)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Major versions will now increase just the first number, and minor
-releases will increase just the second number.  A third number will no
-longer be used in Postgres version numbers.
+The <acronym>ICU</> library has versioning that allows detection of collation
+changes between versions.  It is enabled via configure option
+<option>--with-icu</>.  The default still uses the operating system's native
+collation library.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2777,7 +2778,7 @@ Author: Heikki Linnakangas <heikki.linnakangas@iki.fi>
 2016-09-29 [6e654546f] Don't bother to lock bufmgr partitions in pg_buffercache
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-Allow <link linkend="pgbuffercache"><application>pg_buffercache</></> to run without fewer locks (Ivan Kartyshov)
+Allow <link linkend="pgbuffercache"><application>pg_buffercache</></> to run with fewer locks (Ivan Kartyshov)
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