Fixes for release notes

dmpgpro · dmpgpro · commit b8956c23ca5f · 2017-02-14T17:59:13.000+03:00
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-pro-9.6.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-pro-9.6.sgml
@@ -29,8 +29,9 @@
           <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Improved algorithm to automatically select a TCP-port for the case
-          of parallel installation of different versions of the product.</para>
+        <para>Improved the algorithm of automatic TCP-port selection for the case
+          of parallel installation of different versions of the product on
+          Windows systems.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -52,10 +53,10 @@
       should run <literal>pgpro_upgrade</literal> script provided in this
       distribution.
     </para>
-    <para>Before running script, you should stop postgres service. Script
-      should be run as user, owning the database (typically postgres) and
-      PGDATA environment variable should be set to the directory where
-      database resides.
+    <para>Before running the script, you should stop postgres service.
+      Script should be run on behalf of the user owning the database
+      (typically postgres) and PGDATA environment variable should be
+      set to the directory where database resides.
     </para>
   </sect2>
 </sect1>
