Updating some of the changes to use of second person

richardmiller-zz · richardmiller-zz · commit f51faaf481f7 · 2012-11-26T11:57:54.000Z
diff --git a/book/http_cache.rst b/book/http_cache.rst
@@ -550,8 +550,7 @@ would return. An ``ETag`` is like a fingerprint and is used to quickly compare
 if two different versions of a resource are equivalent. Like fingerprints,
 each ``ETag`` must be unique across all representations of the same resource.
 
-As an example here is a simple implementation that generates the ETag as
-the md5 of the content::
+To see a simple implementation, generate the ETag as the md5 of the content::
 
     public function indexAction()
     {
diff --git a/book/page_creation.rst b/book/page_creation.rst
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ to keep your application organized as it grows in users and complexity.
 The "Hello Symfony!" Page
 -------------------------
 
-To begin with, a spin off of the classic "Hello World!" application. When
+Start by building a spin-off of the classic "Hello World!" application. When
 you're finished, the user will be able to get a personal greeting (e.g. "Hello Symfony")
 by going to the following URL:
 
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ controller, and ``index.html.twig`` the template:
 
         Hello <?php echo $view->escape($name) ?>!
 
-Stepping through the Twig template line-by-line:
+Step through the Twig template line-by-line:
 
 * *line 2*: The ``extends`` token defines a parent template. The template
   explicitly defines a layout file inside of which it will be placed.
diff --git a/book/propel.rst b/book/propel.rst
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ Your database has been updated, you can continue to write your application.
 Saving Related Objects
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Now, for the code in action. Imagine you're inside a controller::
+Now, try the code in action. Imagine you're inside a controller::
 
     // ...
     use Acme\StoreBundle\Model\Category;
diff --git a/book/security.rst b/book/security.rst
@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@ perform a certain action.
 .. image:: /images/book/security_authentication_authorization.png
    :align: center
 
-Since the best way to learn is to see an example, we'll dive right in.
+Since the best way to learn is to see an example, start by securing your
+application with HTTP Basic authentication.
 
 .. note::
 
diff --git a/book/service_container.rst b/book/service_container.rst
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ in its constructor, which is easily configurable. As you'll see, the real
 power of the container is realized when you need to create a service that
 depends on one or more other services in the container.
 
-Starting with an example, suppose you have a new service, ``NewsletterManager``,
+As an example, suppose you have a new service, ``NewsletterManager``,
 that helps to manage the preparation and delivery of an email message to
 a collection of addresses. Of course the ``my_mailer`` service is already
 really good at delivering email messages, so you'll use it inside ``NewsletterManager``
diff --git a/book/templating.rst b/book/templating.rst
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ route:
         return $collection;
 
 In this case, you need to specify both the route name (``article_show``) and
-a value for the ``{slug}`` parameter. Using this route,     let's revisit the
+a value for the ``{slug}`` parameter. Using this route, revisit the
 ``recentList`` template from the previous section and link to the articles
 correctly:
 

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@@ -550,8 +550,7 @@ would return. An ``ETag`` is like a fingerprint and is used to quickly compare
`550`	`550`	`if two different versions of a resource are equivalent. Like fingerprints,`
`551`	`551`	each ``ETag`` must be unique across all representations of the same resource.
`552`	`552`
`553`		`-As an example here is a simple implementation that generates the ETag as`
`554`		`-the md5 of the content::`
	`553`	`+To see a simple implementation, generate the ETag as the md5 of the content::`
`555`	`554`
`556`	`555`	`public function indexAction()`
`557`	`556`	`{`