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236 pages, Paperback
First published June 10, 2011
Rourk looked insulted. "I would never do anything to harm your daughter's honor."This boy is still in his teens, yet he talks like an elderly man. And why is he insulted that her parents' are concerned that he's gonna do something? Chill dude.
The dark elf glared back at him. "I want nothing from her. I just happened to notice another elf and wanted to read her mind."Ummm yeah, that's just a really bad excuse and an even more awkward way of phrasing it.
"What do you think son?"Thaddeus is a twelve year old, and he talks uncomfortably like a much older man. Though it is mentioned by Thaddeus himself that he doesn't often feel like he's twelve, this doesn't make his dialogue acceptable. Do you see what I mean about the awkward dialogue yet?
"I think it's an impressive sight." Thaddeus paused, and then said, "I'm slightly nervous to tell you the truth."
In the mirror, Keegan saw Donald behind her; he was so cute with his orange hair. He happened to look up at the same time, and she met his blue eyes in the mirror. She smiled at him, but he couldn't see.The switch of omnipresent voice between characters was at points, not bad, but it could be extremely awkward sometimes. There was also
Donald turned away from Keegan. Why does she have to be an elf?
Sometimes they even thought Keegan had cheated because she finished so much faster than the others -- and she didn't have to write out all the work to get the correct answer. She planned to sleep well tonight. She knew she'd ace the test, easy.The author often tried to make the characters too relatable. It made it hard to read because I was stuck on the fact that high school boys are doing things like this:
She laughed when she saw Spencer run up behind Donald and smack the back of his head. Donald took off chasing him down the hall. It was nice to see things were back to normal.I have gone to high school and I rarely see things like this occurring.