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27 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 23, 2013
As of now, you are an animal. There will be no speech, no clothes and no conscious will of your own. Ponies are no longer seen as human and your sole purpose in life will be to please your owner. You would do well to remember that.WARNING: This book is not meant for squeamish readers!
She was Jenny, she was not a filly, she was not a pony and she was certainly not going to be an animal for someone's entertainment.Jenny is a lazy spoiled heiress shipped off to an equestrian school by her father. She thought she would be spending the week perfecting her riding skills, but she was oh so very mistaken.
It wasn't a secret that he preferred it when the trainees played hardball. Give him obstinate, unruly, rude, sarcastic, narcissistic or greedy any day. They were a lot more fun to tame than the 'Miss Goody Two Shoes' variety. Jenny was definitely not going to fall under the latter category and that was so much better, She already had him smiling.Oh yes, Master Mark, the proper Englishman who strolls into Jenny's personal nightmare looking like a god in riding clothes *fans self* I definitely need to see more of Master Mark. I be he has delightful plans for Miss Jenny!
“As of now, you are an animal. There will be no speech, no clothes and no conscious will of your own.”
“One of the things that all pony girls and boys have in common is that their asses are rarely left unplugged. That’s why you’ll need a ‘breaking in’ session.”
'There, there, horsie,' said Hetty, who had watched Jenny's attempted protest with amusement. 'Most of the fillies around here would kill for a few minutes of Master Mark's time. Give him a few hours and I'm sure you'll be drooling at the mouth along with the rest of them.'
That was exactly what Jenny was afraid of.
'I thought you were going to prove a tough little filly to tame and yet here we have a purring pussycat.'
The Riding School is book one of an in-progress work called Pony Tales. This short e-book introduces Jenny, the spoiled and ambition-less daughter of a very wealthy Englishman. Presumably to give her one very serious wake-up call, Jenny’s father has paid a great deal of money to forcibly enroll her in an intensive training course for human ponies at Albrecht Stables.
One can only speculate what sort of naughty discipline and humiliation she will endure in the following books, but this portion of Pony Tales is limited to a span of several hours during which she is prepped and outfitted for the first phase of her training. At the hands of the riding school’s staff Jenny experiences forced bondage while having each of her body cavities measured and pleasured, and suffers the humiliation of being brought to orgasm against her will in front of virtual strangers.
While this is a fun, sexy and well written read, it is annoying that it just stops before anything substantive happens. Realistically, The Riding School is chapter one of a book of indeterminate length; calling it book one is disingenuous. I am not a fan of serialized books in general, but this is ridiculous.
Why not wait until all or most of the book is written before publishing any of it? If readers like it well enough to want book two, then they can go buy it without waiting around for the author to crank out the next installment. It’s kind of hard to follow a story if too much time has passed since finishing the first installment. You may need to re-read or skim what you've already read just to keep it all straight. With that in mind, I would recommend waiting until a couple more “books” in the series have been released before purchasing this one.