gr3 Writepath Learnpror Narrative

Rubric for Narrative WritingGrade 3
Grade 1
(1 point)
Grade 2
1.5 pts
Grade 3
(2 points)
2.5 pts
Grade 4
(3 points)
3.5 pts
(4 points)
Score
Structure
Overall
The writer wrote about when

she did something.
Midlevel
The writer wrote about one

time he did something.
Midlevel
The writer told the story bit

by bit.
Midlevel
The writer wrote the important

part of an event bit by bit and
took out unimportant parts.
Lead
The writer tried to make a

beginning for his story.
Midlevel
The writer thought about how

to write a good beginning and
chose a way to start her story.
She chose the action, talk, or
setting that would make a
good beginning.
Midlevel
The writer wrote a beginning

in which he helped readers
know who the characters were
and what the setting was in
his story.
Midlevel
The writer wrote a beginning

in which she showed what was
happening and where, getting
readers into the world of the
story.
Transitions
The writer put her pages in

order. She used words such as
and and then, so.
Midlevel
The writer told the story in

order by using words such as
when, then, and after.
Midlevel
The writer told her story in

order by using phrases such as
a little later and after that.
Midlevel
The writer showed how much

time went by with words and
phrases that mark time such
as just then and suddenly (to
show when things happened
quickly) or after a while and
a little later (to show when a
little time passed).
Ending
The writer found a way to end

his story.
Midlevel
The writer chose the action,

talk, or feeling that would
make a good ending.
Midlevel
The writer chose the action,

talk, or feeling that would
make a good ending and
worked to write it well.
Midlevel
The writer wrote an ending

that connected to the
beginning or the middle of the
story.
The writer used action,
dialogue, or feeling to bring
her story to a close.
Organization
The writer wrote her story

across three or more pages.
Midlevel
The writer wrote a lot of lines

on a page and wrote across a
lot of pages.
Midlevel
The writer used paragraphs

and skipped lines to separate
what happened first from what
happened later (and finally) in
her story.
Midlevel
The writer used paragraphs to

separate the different parts or
times of the story or to show
when a new character was
speaking.
Total
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Grade 1
(1 point)
Grade 2
1.5 pts
Grade 3
(2 points)
2.5 pts
Grade 4
(3 points)
3.5 pts
(4 points)
Score
Development
Elaboration*
The writer put the picture from

his mind onto the page. He
had details in pictures and
words.
Midlevel
The writer tried to bring her

characters to life with details,
talk, and actions.
Midlevel
The writer worked to show

what happened to (and in) his
characters.
Midlevel
The writer added more to the

heart of her story, including not
only actions and dialogue but
also thought and feelings.
(x2)
Description*
The writer used labels and

words to give details.
Midlevel
The writer chose strong words

that would help readers picture
his story.
Midlevel
The writer not only told her

story, but also wrote it in ways
that got readers to picture
what was happening and that
brought her story to life.
Midlevel
The writer showed why

characters did what they did by
including their thinking.
(x 2)
The writer made some parts

of the story go quickly, some
slowly.
The writer included precise
and sometimes sensory
details and used figurative
language (simile, metaphor,
personification) to bring his
story to life.
The writer used a storytelling
voice and conveyed the
emotion or tone of his story
through description, phrases,
dialogue, and thoughts.
Total
Language Conventions
Spelling
The writer used all he knew

about words and chunks of
words (at, op, it, etc.) to help
him spell.
The writer spelled all the word
wall words right and used the
word wall to help him spell
other words.
Midlevel
To spell a word, the writer

used what she knew about
spelling patterns (tion, er, ly,
etc.).
The writer spelled all of the
word wall words correctly and
used the word wall to help her
figure out how to spell other
words.
Midlevel
The writer used what he knew

about spelling patterns to help
him spell and edit before he
wrote his final draft.
The writer got help from others
to check his spelling and
punctuation before he wrote
his final draft.
Midlevel
The writer used what she

knew about word families and
spelling rules to help her spell
and edit. She used the word
wall and dictionaries when
needed.
* Elaboration and Description are double-weighted categories: Whatever score a student would get in these categories is worth double the amount of points. For example, if a student exceeds expectations in Elaboration, then that student would receive 8 points instead of 4 points. If a
student meets standards in Elaboration, then that student would receive 6 points instead of 3 points.
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Grade 1
Punctuation
Grade 2
Grade 3
Grade 4
(1 point)
1.5 pts
(2 points)
2.5 pts
(3 points)
3.5 pts
(4 points)
The writer ended sentences

with punctuation.
Midlevel
The writer used quotation

marks to show what characters
said.
Midlevel
The writer punctuated dialogue

correctly with commas and
quotation marks.
Midlevel
When writing long, complex

sentences, the writer used
commas to make them clear
and correct.
The writer used a capital letter

for names.
The writer used commas in
dates and lists.
When the writer used words

such as cant and dont, he
used the apostrophe.
While writing, the writer used

punctuation at the end of
every sentence.
Score
The writer wrote in ways that

helped readers read with
expression, reading some parts
quickly, some slowly, some
parts in one sort of voice and
others in another.
Total
Scoring Guide
In each row, circle the descriptor in the column that matches the student work. Scores in the categories of Elaboration
and Description are worth double the point value (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, or 8 instead of 1, 1.5, 2, 2.5, 3, 3.5, or 4).
Total the number of points and then track students progress by seeing when the total points increase.
Total score: ________
If you want to translate this score into a grade, you can use the provided table to score each student on a scale from
14.
Number of Points
111
11.516.5
1722
22.527.5
2833
33.538.5
3944
Scaled Score
1
1.5
2
2.5
3
3.5
4
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Rubric for Narrative WritingGrade 3

The writer wrote about when

The writer wrote about one

The writer told the story bit

The writer wrote the important

The writer tried to make a

The writer thought about how

The writer wrote a beginning

The writer wrote a beginning

The writer put her pages in

The writer told the story in

The writer told her story in

The writer showed how much

The writer found a way to end

The writer chose the action,

The writer chose the action,

The writer wrote an ending

The writer wrote her story

The writer wrote a lot of lines

The writer used paragraphs

The writer used paragraphs to

The writer put the picture from

The writer tried to bring her

The writer worked to show

The writer added more to the

The writer used labels and

The writer chose strong words

The writer not only told her

The writer showed why

The writer made some parts

The writer used all he knew

To spell a word, the writer

The writer used what he knew

The writer used what she

The writer ended sentences

The writer used quotation

The writer punctuated dialogue

When writing long, complex

The writer used a capital letter

When the writer used words

While writing, the writer used

The writer wrote in ways that

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