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The Rise of Stalin

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The rise of Stalin, was the start and end of many of Russias most important events.

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What was the state of Russia prior to Stalin coming
to power?

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Russia prior to Stalin coming to power.

Box1 / EV1: Bolshevik Revolution and Nicholas II

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Peasant farmers complained about the economic gulf
between themselves and the landowners, who kept
most of the crop money. The peasants... regarded
anyone who did not work as a parasite, and they
threatened a violent peasants revolt unless the
landowners handed the land over to them. The czar
of Russia, Nicholas II, ... a member of the ruling
Romanov family, autocratically ruled the nation. He
rejected the peasants demands and threatened violence
of his own if their protests persisted. Many students,
Stalin included, supported the peasants, while the
priests supported the czar.
The vast Russian Empire is thrown into turmoil in
March 1917 after Tsar Nicholas II abdicates and the
Imperial Government is replaced by a Provisional
Government led by moderate socialist Aleksandr
Fyodorovich Kerensky.

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The peasant farmers argued over the right of the land.
The czar of Russia, Nicholas II ignored the complaints of
the peasant farmers.
In March 1917, Nicholas II abdicates the previous gov.
and replaces it with another.

CITATION: James Barter/ PG 18-19 &

http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.html /
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In March 1917, Nicholas II, czar of Russia, abdicates the
imperial government to another. Meanwhile, the peasant
farmers argue for their right of the land, but Nicholas II
ignores the complaints of the peasant farmers * , which
causes complications.

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[The] peasants threatened a
revolt unless the landowners
handed the land over. (James
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The peasants threaten a
revolt unless the landowners
handed the land over
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In March 1917, Nicholas II, then, the current ruler of Russia, denounced himself from the throne to another ruler and new government. The
peasant farmers argued over their right of the land, but Nicholas II ignored their complaints. In retaliation [the] peasants threaten[ed] a
revolt unless the landowners hand[ed] the land over [to them]. (James Barter / 18-19), which caused complications.
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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Since Nicholas II abdicated himself from the throne, the Bolsheviks rose to power.
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By 15 March 1917, Tsar Nicholas II abdicated from
the Russian throne, World War I had been raging for
three years and the Russian people were tired and
demoralized. The Bolsheviks finally came to power
on 7 November 1917 but it was neither a smooth
transition nor a smooth ride once they were in power,
for when Russia withdrew from World War I in 1918,
the Bolsheviks had to fight a bitter civil war with the
White Army who were Tsarist sympathizers.
CITATION: Shelley Klein / PG 44-45

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The Bolsheviks come to power, though it was not very easy
White Army fought against them rising to power
Russian people were exhausted from World War I
Caused civil war
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*World War I had exhausted the Russian people and the
Bolsheviks struggle to obtain power. They found it
difficult to obtain power because of the civil war, and the
White Army fighting against them.

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The Bolsheviks came to
power on 7 November 1917.
(Shelley Klein / PG 44-45)

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The Bolsheviks [came] to power on 7 November 1917 (Shelley Klein / PG 44-45) and World War I had exhausted the Russian people. This
caused the Bolsheviks to struggle, as they tried to obtain power over Russia. They found it difficult to obtain power because of the civil war that
sprung after World War I. So, the Bolsheviks, fighting to maintain power, fought against the White Army.
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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How did Stalin move up through the ranks of the
communist party?

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Stalin moves up through the ranks of the communist party.

Box3 / EV1: Stalin becoming friends with Lenin

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The meeting with Lenin in Finland was Stalins first of
many strategic stepping-stones to assuming absolute
authority over the Soviet Union. Stalin arrived filled
with high expectations for making his mark on the party.
The meeting would introduce Stalin to the major figures
in the party he would work with a variety of tasks as he
rose from a minor participant to a major party force and
finally to the supreme leader of the Soviet Union.
In 1912, Lenin, then in exile in Switzerland, appointed
Joseph Stalin to serve on the first Central Committee of
the Bolshevik Party. Three years later, in November
1917, the Bolsheviks seized power in Russia. The Soviet
Union was founded in 1922, with Lenin as its first
leader. During these years, Stalin had continued to move
up the party ladder, and in 1922 he became secretary
general of the Central Committee of the Communist
Party, a role that enabled him to appoint his allies to
government jobs and grow a base of political support.

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Stalin meets Lenin in Finland, to get absolute authority
Lenin goes into exile and appoints Stalin to serve in the
Bolshevik party

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Stalin works to become friends with Lenin when he meets
him in Finland, in working on obtaining absolute authority of
the Union. Later on, Lenin goes into exile and appoints
*Stalin to serve in the Bolshevik party.

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In 1912, Lenin, then in
exile in Switzerland,
appointed Joseph Stalin
to serve on the first Central
Committee of the Bolshevik
Party.
(www.history.com/topics/jos
eph-stalin / History)

CITATION: James Barter/ PG 24 and

www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / History
D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Stalin set up a meeting with Lenin so that he could join the party. This was one of his many steps he would take to use the party to his
advantage, and obtain absolute power, but first he needed to be-friend Lenin. When he met Lenin in Finland, they worked and discussed how
they could obtain absolute authority of the Soviet Union. Stalin joins and later on, appointed by Lenin, is asked to serve on the first Central
Committee of the Bolshevik party (www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / History).
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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After Stain has been accepted into the group, he begins to takes strategic steps to obtain power over the Bolshevik party.
Box4 / EV2: Stalin outmaneuvering his opponents
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Stalin was given a series of relatively minor positions
such as acting Inspector General of the Red Army and
Cabinet Minister for Nationalities Stalin made it his
duty to back Lenin in everything he said and did
Rather than push himself forward, Stalin preferred to
remain in the background and thus was quite happy
heading up the Orgburo (Organizational Bureau) whose
main concern was friends and political allies as he
could,nearly always choosing men who came from
humble backgrounds and who had little or no education
because these men were more easily manipulated.

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Stalin started out with minor positions
Stalin worked silently in the background as he worked up the
ladder
Used his positions as an advantage to make allies

CITATION: Shelley Klein / PG 45

When Stalin joined the party, he started out with relatively

minor positions *. He used them specifically so that he
could make allies and friends to support and work for him.
He worked his way up with smaller tasks to help him seem
less like a threat.

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Rather than push himself
forward, Stalin preferred to
remain[ed] in the
background
( Shelley Klein / PG 45)

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When Stalin joined the party, he started out with relatively minor positions, Rather than push himself forward[.] Stalin remain[ed] in the
background(Shelley Klein / PG 45) and planned his every move carefully. He used his positions specifically so that he could make allies and
friends to support and work for him. He worked his way up with smaller tasks to help him seem less like a threat.
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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How did Stalin solidify power and ultimately
become dictator?

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Stalin solidifies power and ultimately becomes dictator.

Box5 / EV1: Stalin takes charge

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Stalin takes charge of the whole party
administration when he is given the newly
created post of general secretary of the Central
Committee, a position that gives him control
over party appointments and allows him to
develop his power base. He will consolidate his
influence further by spying on his colleagues, a
tactic that will become a hallmark of his
dictatorship.
During these years, Stalin had continued to
move up the party ladder, and in 1922 he
became secretary general of the Central
Committee of the Communist Party, a role that
enabled him to appoint his allies to government
jobs and grow a base of political support.

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Stalin receives a new position that gives him control over the entire
party
He becomes secretary general of the Central Committee
Uses his new post to help him appoint himself allies and grow a base
of political support

CITATION:
http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.html \
moreorless (heroes & killers of the 20th Century)

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Stalin receives a new position as secretary general of the Central
Committee, that gives him control of all the parties appointments.
He uses his new post to help him appoint himself allies.*

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[Stalin becomes] secretary
general, [which enables]
him to [gain] political
support.
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u/killers/stalin.html \
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of the 20th Century)

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sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
When Stalin received a new position as secretary general of the Central Committee, it gave him control of all the parties appointments. He used
his new post to help him appoint himself allies and [enabled] him to [gain] political support.
(http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.html \ moreorless (heroes & killers of the 20th Century).
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

Because of his new role in the party, Stalin could take charge and used this step in his plan to obtain power.
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"Stalin remains as general secretary when Lenin
died on 21 January 1924."
By the time Lenin died, Stalin was the
undisputed master of the Soviet Union. Stalin
consolidated his power by murdering or secretly
discrediting his rivals so that there was no one
who could challenge his authority. Stalin
proceeded to dismantle the NEP and eliminate
his opposition. He ordered a series of purges
from the late 1920s through the 1930s that
resulted in the deaths of as many as a million
Soviet citizens (some ten million were arrested).
Opponents of the regime were often sent to labor
camps (known as gulags) in remote areas such
as Siberia. The survival chance rates in gulags
were very low.
CITATION:
http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.html /
moreorless (heroes & killers of the 20th Century)
& Toms Lanford / PG 31

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Lenin dies
Stalin obtains great power in the Soviet Union
Stalin murders his opponents by murdering them or sending them
to the gulags
No one could challenge his authority
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After Lenin dies, Stalin obtains great power within the Soviet
Union. Many of Stalins opponents attempted to become dictator,
but he defended his place by murdering or sending them to gulags.
His actions made him so feared and powerful, that no one could
challenge his authority. *

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Stalin was the undisputed
master of the Soviet Union.
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sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
After Lenin dies, Stalin obtains great power within the Soviet Union. Many of Stalins opponents attempted to become dictator, but he defended
his place by murdering or sending them to gulags. His actions made him so feared and powerful, that no one could challenge his authority,
making Stalin the undisputed master of the Soviet Union. (Toms Lanford / PG 31).
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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Stalins Maintenance of Power

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After Stalin has finally obtained power, he ensures that no man can takeover, by setting new laws,
making government changes and improving the economy.

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How did Stalin improve Russia?

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Stalin improves Russia.

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The state takes control of the economy,
introducing a program of rapid industrialisation
and agrarian consolidation and setting unrealistic
goals for development.
Soon after assuming power, Stalin replaced
Lenin's New Economic Policy (NEP) of the
1920s, which allowed for some privatization,
with Communist Party guided Five-Year Plans in
1928 ...the Soviet Union made significant
progress from its former status as a
predominantly peasant society to the status of a
major world power by the end of the 1930s.

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A little while after Stalin took over the Soviet Union, he began to
change the economy, by introducing rapid industrialization.
Some of the changes were negative and caused death, because the
people were starving due to lack of land and food.
Soviet Union made great progress and took the peasant society
and improved it, changing it to a major world power

CITATION:
http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.html /
moreorless (heroes & killers of the 20th Century)
& http://www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin /
History

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*After Stalin took over the Soviet Union, he introduced a new
type of economy, by forcing rapid industrialization. The sudden
change, caused devastating effects, such as death and starvation.
This happened because the rapid industrialization took away land
for farming; and, therefore caused starvation and death. Despite
these things, the Soviet Union made great progress and took the
peasant society and improved it, making them a major world
power.

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Soon after assuming power,
Stalin replaced Lenins New
Economic Policy which
allowed for some
privatization.
(http://www.history.com/topics/
joseph-stalin / History)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Stalin replaced Lenins New Economic Policy which allowed for some privatization. (http://www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / History).
After Stalin took over the Soviet Union, he introduced a new type of economy, by forcing rapid industrialization. The sudden change, caused
devastating effects, such as death and starvation. This happened because the rapid industrialization took away land for farming; and, therefore
caused starvation and death. Despite these things, the Soviet Union made great progress and took the peasant society and improved it, making
them a major world power.
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Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

F Transition Sentence
After he changed the economy, he began to work to improve industrialization by taking over the economies agriculture.
Box8/EV2: Agriculture
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Starting in the late 1920s, Joseph Stalin
launched a series of five-year plans intended to
transform the Soviet Union from a peasant
society into an industrial superpower. His
development plan was centered on government
control of the economy and included the forced
collectivization of Soviet agriculture, in which
the government took control of farms. Millions
of farmers refused to cooperate with Stalins
orders and were shot or exiled as punishment.
The forced collectivization also led to
widespread famine across the Soviet Union that
killed millions.
Stalin forced rapid industrialization and the
collectivization of agricultural land, resulting in
millions dying from famine while others were
sent to camps.
CITATION: www.history.com/topics/josephstalin / A+E Networks &
http://www.biography.com/people/joseph-stalin9491723 /bio.

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Stalin takes control of the Soviets agriculture causing farms to
shut down.
Farmers retaliate and many are killed or sent to camps
Widespread famine kills millions
Forced collectivization cause farmers to lose their farms.

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into sentences. Use sentence variety - use a * where you want to
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Stalin worked to take control of the Soviets agriculture and forced
collectivization. * When he succeeds, widespread famine kills
millions and industrialization succeeds.

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Millions of farmers refused to
cooperate with Stalins orders
and were shot or exiled as
punishment.
(www.history.com/topics/josep
h-stalin / A+E Networks)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Stalin worked to take control of the Soviets agriculture and forced collectivization. But [m]illions of farmers refused to cooperate with Stalins
orders and were shot or exiled as punishment. (www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / A+E Networks) After the farmers were finally
convinced, widespread famine kills millions and industrialization succeeds.
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+ , + Q2 idea + verb + ass idea) PLUG IT IN!
How did Josef Stalin maintain control over
the people?

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Q2 EV Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from Q1 EV sent.) (write it here)
Josef Stalin maintains control over the people.

Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

Box9/EV1: Propaganda
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Additionally, Stalin built a cult of personality
around himself in the Soviet Union. Cities were
renamed in his honor. Soviet history books
were rewritten to give him a more prominent
role in the revolution and mythologize other
aspects of his life. He was the subject of
flattering artwork, literature music, and his
name became part of the Soviet national
anthem. His government also controlled the
Soviet media.

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Cities are renamed in Stalins honor
Soviet Union immortalizes/mythologize Stalin
Stalin was adored and loved through the media

CITATION: www.history.com/topics/josephstalin / A+E Networks

The Soviet Union immortalizes and mythologizes Stalin through

the media and the arts. He made him seem like a hero, with
complimentary music, artwork, literature, and put his name in the
national anthem.*

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sentences. Use sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove
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compare what youve written here to it. If you use any of the same
words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally,
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your quotation selection. Write
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IT MAKES SENSE - ellipses
when removing words,
brackets when adding words in
Additionally, Stalin built a
cult of personality around
himself in the Soviet Union.
(www.history.com/topics/josep
h-stalin / A+E Networks)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
The Soviet Union immortalizes and mythologizes Stalin through the media and the arts. He made him seem like a hero, with complimentary
music, artwork, literature, and put his name in the national anthem. They even renamed cities after him. Additionally, Stalin built a cult of
personality around himself in the Soviet Union. (www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / A+E Networks)

Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

PG 10
F Transition Sentence
Once Stalin has taken over propaganda, Stalin begins to take actions to ensure his superiority and takes advantage of the military.
Box10/EV2: Military
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Stalin ruled by terror and with a totalitarian
grip in order to eliminate anyone who might
oppose him. He expanded the powers of the
secret police, encouraged citizens to spy on
one another and had millions of people killed
or sent to the Gulag system of forced labor
camps. During the second half of the 1930s,
Stalin instituted the Great Purge, a series of
campaigns designed to rid the Communist
Party, the military and other parts of Soviet
society from those he considered a threat.
Joseph Stalin did not mellow with age: He
prosecuted a reign of terror, purges,
executions, exiles to labor camps and
persecution in the postwar USSR, suppressing
all dissent and anything that smacked of
foreignespecially Westerninfluence.
CITATION: www.history.com/topics/josephstalin / A+E Networks &
http://www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin /
History

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Stalin took advantage of the military
Stalin used the military to remove his enemies and opposers
Stalin set up a secret police and allowed spying
Anyone who got out of hand was either executed, exiled to labor
camps, like the Gulags
Instituted the Great Purge
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sentences. Use sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove
your Q. incorp (Box A). When finished, look back at EV Box and
compare what youve written here to it. If you use any of the same
words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally,
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Stalin took advantage of the military, and used it to give him total
power. He set up a secret police and even allowed the people
permission to spy on one another. Anyone who got out of hand or
caused mischief was either executed, or exiled into the Gulags, a
labor camp. He used the military for his own personal needs, such
as removing his enemies, or any opposers. This was the start of the
Great Purge, where the people got the chance to prove their
allegiance.

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them here

A in EV Box,, underline the

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your quotation selection. Write
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when adding words in
[Stalin] prosecuted a reign of
terror [with] persecution
[and] suppressing anything
that [was] foreign.
(http://www.history.com/topics/
joseph-stalin / History)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
[Stalin] prosecuted a reign of terror [with] persecution [and] suppressing anything that [was]
foreign.(http://www.history.com/topics/joseph-stalin / History). Stalin took advantage of the military, and used it to give him total power. He
set up a secret police and even allowed the people permission to spy on one another. Anyone who got out of hand or caused mischief was either
executed, or exiled into the Gulags, a labor camp. He used the military for his own personal needs, such as removing his enemies, or any
opposers. This was the start of the Great Purge, where the people got the chance to prove their allegiance.

Name: Monique Stanford

Dictator: Josef Stalin

ASS 3 Q 1

PG 11

Para 3 Ass Idea: (Trans. sig. word + Previous Ass

idea + , + Ass idea + dictator) PLUG IT IN!
Stalins Involvement in WWII

Para 3 Ass Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from ASS1 Idea) (write it
here)
Stalin takes a stand in WWII and joins Hitler and fights on his side, but when Hitler breaks
their pact, Stalin joins the Allies and we work together to defeat Hitler.

Q1 Idea: (Q idea + verb + ass idea) PLUG IT IN!

Who did Josef Stalin ally himself with at the
beginning and end of WWII? Why?

Q1 Sentence: (write it here)

Josef Stalin allies himself.

Box11 / EV1: Beginning

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On August 23, 1939, Hitler and Soviet leader Joseph
Stalin signed a surprising treaty of nonaggression; an
invasion of Poland seemed likely. Great Britain and
France, uniting as the core Allied powers, promised
retribution.
On September 17, the Soviet Union invaded eastern
Poland, revealing that the Soviets and Germans had
agreed to partition the country in their pact.
One advantage of Germany waging war against the
Soviet Union had been a new cooperation between
Allied and Soviet forces. However, the relationship
became strained. Stalin intended to keep control of
Soviet-occupied Poland and was interested in other
German-held territories as well. The Allies wished to
stop the spread of Communism, yet needed the strength
of the Soviet Red Army. On November 1943, Churchill,
Roosevelt, and Stalin met in Cairo, Egypt. It was
decided that Eisenhower would take Allied forces into
France while The Soviet Red Army would
simultaneously attack the German Eastern Front.
The progress of the Soviet armies on the Eastern Front
made it imperative for the Allies to come to terms with
Stalin about the fate of the eastern Europe.
CITATION: ww2history.com/ Stalin and the West

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The Soviet Union and Germany began to invade surrounding
countries
They reveal that they are working together
Stalin and Hitlers bond was strained, as they both wanted
each other's land
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your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.
On August 23, 1939, Hitler and Soviet leader Joseph Stalin
signed a surprising treaty of nonaggression
(ww2history.com/ Stalin and the West). Hitler and Stalin
worked together and started to invade all of the surrounding
countries. This revealed that they were working together
and the Allies began to form. Though, even with the
nonaggression pact, Hitler and Stalin's bond was strained.

C Synonyms: find synonyms

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them here

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phrase that youd like to use
as your quotation selection.
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at the end. Make sure that it
doesnt exceed 10 words.
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NECESSARY TO ENSURE
IT MAKES SENSE ellipses when removing
words, brackets when adding
words in
On August 23, 1939, Hitler
and Soviet leader Joseph
Stalin signed a surprising
treaty of nonaggression
(ww2history.com/ Stalin and
the West)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
On August 23, 1939, Hitler and Soviet leader Joseph Stalin signed a surprising treaty of nonaggression
(ww2history.com/ Stalin and the West). Hitler and Stalin worked together and started to invade all of the surrounding countries. This revealed
that they were working together and the Allies began to form. Though, even with the nonaggression pact, Hitler and Stalin's bond was
strained.

PG 13
F Transition Sentence
After the turn of the Germans, Stalin looks for support and joins the Allies.
Box12 / EV2: End
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Name: Monique Stanford

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Stalin is named 'Time' magazine's person of
the year for 1939 for switching the balance of
power in Europe by signing the
nonaggression pact with Hitler, a decision
that is described as "world-shattering".
"Without the Russian pact," the magazine
says, "German generals would certainly have
been loath to go into military action. With it,
World War II began."
Stalins relationship with his wartime Allies
Britain and America was dominated by
two issues which were to cause almost
endless conflict. One was the question of the
second front by which Stalin meant the
invasion of France via D Day and the next
was the thorny subject of the post-war
boundaries of the Soviet Union, and the
extent to which the Soviets could influence or
control the border states nearby.
CITATION:
http://www.moreorless.net.au/killers/stalin.ht
ml \ 1931 &
William L
Hosch. / (PG ?)

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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Stalin plans an attack on France on D-day
The Soviet Union is believed to be influential to those around it
Tension around the Soviet Union

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phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.
Stalins relationship with his wartime Allies Britain and America
was dominated by two issues which were to cause almost endless
conflict. (William L Hosch. / PG ?). The first issue was the pending
plans of attack on France on D-day, the other was the Allies worries of
the Unions influence on the surrounding countries. These facts caused a
lot of tension around the Soviet Union.

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doesnt exceed 10 words.
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when adding words in
Stalins relationship with
his wartime Allies Britain
and America was
dominated by two issues
which were to cause almost
endless conflict.
(William L Hosch. / PG ?)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Stalins relationship with his wartime Allies Britain and America was dominated by two issues which were to cause almost endless conflict.
(William L Hosch. / PG ?). The first issue was the pending plans of attack on France on D-day, the other was the Allies worries of the Unions
influence on the surrounding countries. These facts caused a lot of tension around the Soviet Union.

ASS 3 Q 2

PG 14

Q2 Idea: (Trans. sig. word + Prev. Q idea

+ , + Q2 idea + verb + ass idea) PLUG IT IN!
How did the nations involvement in WWII
Josef Stalin affect the country as a whole?

Q2 EV Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from Prev Q) (write it here)
Nations involvement in WWII and how it affected the country.

Box13/EV1: Community
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Name: Monique Stanford

you have multiple sources for this box, place
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During the postwar reconstruction period,
Stalin tightened domestic controls, justifying
the repression by playing up the threat of war
with the West. Many repatriated Soviet citizens
who had lived abroad during the war, whether
as prisoners of war, forced laborers, or
defectors, were executed or sent to prison
camps. The limited freedoms granted in
wartime to the church and to collective farmers
were revoked. The party tightened its
admission standards and purged many who had
become party members during the war.
CITATION:
http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html /
Soviet Union 1945-1985

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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Stalin takes more control over territory and used his power to seem
more intimidating to his enemies.
Stalin was harsh to his people, (and captives)
Limited the freedom of the people
Purged new party members

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sentences. Use sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove
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Within the reconstruction period, Stalin takes more control over his
territory, in attempt to make himself seem more intimidating to his
enemies. He was very harsh over the control of the Soviet
citizens whether as prisoners of war, forced laborers, or defectors,
[they] were executed or sent to prison camps [if they got out of
hand]. (http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html / Soviet Union
1945-1985) and limited their freedom. He also would purge any
new party members.

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phrase that youd like to use
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doesnt exceed 10 words.
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in
Many repatriated Soviet
citizens who had lived abroad
during the war, whether as
prisoners of war, forced
laborers, or defectors, were
executed or sent to prison
camps.
(http://www.shsu.edu/~his_nc
p/Soviet2.html / Soviet Union
1945-1985)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Within the reconstruction period, Stalin takes more control over his territory, in attempt to make himself seem more intimidating to his
enemies. He was very harsh over the control of the Soviet citizens whether as prisoners of war, forced laborers, or defectors, [they] were
executed or sent to prison camps [if they got out of hand]. (http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html / Soviet Union 1945-1985) and limited
their freedom. He also would purge any new party members.

PG 15
F Transition Sentence
After the war, Russia was a mess, the community was poor and the economy was weak, the Allies come out and help the Soviet Union rebuild itself.
Box14/EV2: Economy
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Name: Monique Stanford

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Although the Soviet Union was victorious in
World War II, its economy had been devastated
in the struggle. Roughly a quarter of the
country's capital resources had been destroyed,
and industrial and agricultural output in 1945
fell far short of prewar levels. To help rebuild
the country, the Soviet government obtained
limited credits from Britain and Sweden but
refused economic assistance proposed by the
United States under the Marshall Plan. Instead,
the Soviet Union compelled Soviet-occupied
Eastern Europe to supply machinery and raw
materials. Germany and former Nazi satellites
(including Finland) made reparations to the
Soviet Union. The Soviet people bore much of
the cost of rebuilding because the reconstruction
program emphasized heavy industry while
neglecting agriculture and consumer goods. By
the time of Stalin's death in 1953, steel
production was twice its 1940 level, but the
production of many consumer goods and
foodstuffs was lower than it had been in the late
1920s.
CITATION:
http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html /
Soviet Union 1945-1985

Dictator: Josef Stalin

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The Soviet Union is victorious in WWII
Russias economy was struggling
They obtained help from the Allies (mainly England) and began to
rebuild
Refused the assistance of the U.S.
The Soviets rebuilding program consisted mostly of heavy industry
rather than agriculture and goods

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Although the Soviet Union was victorious in World War II, its
economy had been devastated in the struggle.
(http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html / Soviet Union 19451985). To help them, the Allies pitched in some credits and
materials. But, the Soviet refused any assistance from the U.S. The
rebuilding progress of the Soviet Union was very poor though, they
put most of their time into heavy industry, rather than agriculture and
goods.

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when adding words in
Although the Soviet Union
was victorious in World War
II, its economy had been
devastated in the struggle.
(http://www.shsu.edu/~his_
ncp/Soviet2.html / Soviet
Union 1945-1985)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation: Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make
sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own sentence.
Although the Soviet Union was victorious in World War II, its economy had been devastated in the struggle.
(http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Soviet2.html / Soviet Union 1945-1985). To help them, the Allies pitched in some credits and materials. But, the
Soviet refused any assistance from the U.S. The rebuilding progress of the Soviet Union was very poor though, they put most of their time into
heavy industry, rather than agriculture and goods.