Water Water Everywhere - A Poem
Water Water Everywhere - A Poem
Water Water Everywhere - A Poem
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This poem came to be when I rose to Kimberly Keith's poetry challenge "Light up as
many of your reader's senses as possible by using sounds. Let's hear what you have
to say with sound words...crash, boom, splat!!"
This was one of the hardest poetry challenges I have been faced with for reasons that
are not clear to me. I imagined that it would be easy – it sounds so easy on the surface.
But, since the challenge was posed in January of 2009, this is the only entry as of May
2009.
And as I finished composing it, I stumbled across an amazing song by Adham Shaikh
and Kinnie Starr, all about water.
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endlessly
sea sharp ended points
in a fruitless effort to efface placid black keyboard riffs,
creating anew faces etched with rifts,
crevices
of cold sweating
tango dancing
wing-wind prancing
teary eye-lined squinted
eye lines.
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