Miss Brill
Miss Brill
Miss Brill
Mr. Gallagher
AP English Literature
many do not pay attention to is that a narrator sets up everything from scenery to plot to
tone. In Miss Brill by Katherine Mansfield the reader can gain an insightful look thrgouh
a selective omniscient point of view. From there the reader can then arrive at the theme of
life being like a play set with a narrator and its actors.
Miss Brill starts out with an objective description of the story's setting. The
narrator captures Miss Brill's childish and overly excited tone. Even from the beginning
we can see that the narrator, not Miss Brill herself, but is someone that observes her with
extreme scrutiny. Her every emotion is presented, but even mocked in a way because
Miss Brill is a grown woman. Mansfield manipulated punctuation so as to first give Miss
Brill a younger personality, such as when she exclaims "Very pretty!" The narrator
develops her innocently enough to demonstrate that Miss Brill is in fact an actress.
Miss Brill enjoyed admiring others, "little children...swooping and laughing." Her
interest demonstrates her yearn to fit in with society. Miss Brill is neither accepted by the
old or the young and is forced to lead a life where her everyday life is a struggle for self-
definition and acceptance. The narrator observes her in the act of observing others and
acts as a representation of how the town thinks her to be. The narrative plays a double
role because the narrator is able to tell the story from Miss Brill's perspective and as a
bystander too.
The story then goes to Miss Brill thinking that her pastime was like watching "a
play." She even admits that she has "been an actress for a long time." As general
knowledge, the reader can derive that Miss Brill's role in this "play" is fake. Her passive,
yet still impossibly happy, reaction towards rejection questions reality. The narrator
creates a fine line between fiction and reality when he/she speaks about the scenery as
opposed to the scenes Miss Brill is actively "acting" in. Miss Brill has resorted to this
fake reality of hers because all humans want to be accepted by our peers. The condition
lies in our hearts. An objective narrative is needed because Miss Brill could not really tell
eventually loses faith in its goodness. "Something so beautiful" then becomes difficult to
cope with as she listens in on criticism directed towards her - "that stupid old thing." The
limelight on the wonderful youth and people that she once enjoyed suddenly fades.
Mansfield includes a big break between the ending dialogue and conclusion. The tone
becomes solemn, sympathetic even. Miss Brill becomes speechless and she "put[s] the
lid" on her naïve character. The narrator ends with a dramatic whisper, concluding in
observations that Miss Brill would not have noted in such detail. The "play" ends quietly
and the narration draws the curtains on Miss Brill's now "dark little...cupboard." Life is