Essay Writing Guidelines
Essay Writing Guidelines
Essay Writing Guidelines
Introductions can be tricky. Because the introduction is the first portion of your essay
that the reader encounters, the stakes are fairly high for your introduction to be
successful. A good introduction presents a broad overview of your topic and your
thesis, and should convince the reader that it is worth their time to actually read the
rest of your essay. Below are some tips that will make writing an introduction a little
less daunting, and help us all to write essays that dont make our professors want to
bang their heads against the wall.
1. Start your introduction broad, but not too broad. When I first started writing formal
essays, I didnt really know how broad to go with my intros. A brief paragraph on
Hamlet would suddenly include irrelevant details about Shakespeares childhood, then
grow out to be a history of Western literature, and then a history of the universe itself.
Do not write an introduction like this; this kind of intro is confusing and makes the
reader wonder where exactly youre going with your essay. Your introduction should
provide the reader with a sense of what they should expect out of your essay, not to
expound upon every piece of knowledge ever developed by man. Go ahead and start
relatively broad, then narrow to your thesis, but make sure youre still on topic.
2. Provide relevant background, but dont begin your true argument. Its fine to give
a bit of context to your essay in the introduction, but the real meat of your argument
should be located in your body paragraphs. A good test to see if information should
go in a body or introductory paragraph is to ask yourself a few questions. Is this
providing context or evidence? Does this introduce my argument, or try to prove
it? True evidence or proof deserves a body paragraph. Context and background most
likely belong in your introduction.
3. Provide a thesis. The majority of the time, your thesis, or main argument, should
occur somewhere towards the end of your introduction. It is a typical convention to put
your thesis as the last sentence of your first paragraph. My personal opinion is that it
can sometimes be awkward to shove your thesis in one specific place if it doesnt
necessarily fit, but if your thesis works in that position, that is the best place for it. That
being said, if you absolutely cant include your thesis in that location, go ahead and
stick it somewhere else.
6. Dont feel pressured to write your intro first. Sometimes it can be difficult to figure
out exactly what information is relevant to your introduction until youve written the
piece itself. Personally, I find that my writers block is always strongest when writing
the introduction. If you are having trouble with your intro, feel free to write some, or all,
of your body paragraphs, and then come back to it. You might find it a bit easier to
write your introduction once youre more comfortable with the essay as a whole.
7. Convince the reader that your essay is worth reading. Your reader should finish
the introduction thinking that the essay is interesting or has some sort of relevance to
their lives. A good introduction is engaging; it gets the audience thinking about the
topic at hand and wondering how you will be proving your argument. Good ways to
convince your reader that your essay is worthwhile is to provide information that the
reader might question or disagree with. Once they are thinking about the topic, and
wondering why you hold your position, they are more likely to be engaged in the rest
of the essay.
Basically, a good introduction provides the reader with a brief overview of your topic
and an explanation of your thesis. A good introduction is fresh, engaging, and
interesting. Successful introductions dont rely on clichs or irrelevant information to
demonstrate their point. Be brief, be concise, be engaging. Good luck.
A conclusion is, in some ways, like your introduction. You restate your thesis
and summarize your main points of evidence for the reader.You can usually
do this in one paragraph.
A conclusion should
Suggestions
Show your readers why this paper was important. Show them that your
paper was meaningful and useful.
Example
Introduction
From the parking lot, I could see the towers of the castle of the Magic Kingdom
standing stately against the blue sky. To the right, the tall peak of The Matterhorn
rose even higher. From the left, I could hear the jungle sounds of Adventureland.
As I entered the gate, Main Street stretched before me with its quaint shops
evoking an old-fashioned small town so charming it could never have existed. I
was entranced. Disneyland may have been built for children, but it brings out the
child in adults.
Conclusion
I thought I would spend a few hours at Disneyland, but here I was at 1:00 A.M.,
closing time, leaving the front gates with the now dark towers of the Magic
Kingdom behind me. I could see tired children, toddling along and struggling to
keep their eyes open as best they could. Others slept in their parents' arms as we
waited for the parking lot tram that would take us to our cars. My forty-year-old
feet ached, and I felt a bit sad to think that in a couple of days I would be leaving
California, my vacation over, to go back to my desk. But then I smiled to think that
for at least a day I felt ten years old again.
Example
Example
Without well-qualified teachers, schools are little more than buildings and
equipment. If higher-paying careers continue to attract the best and the
brightest students, there will not only be a shortage of teachers, but the
teachers available may not have the best qualifications. Our youth will
suffer. And when youth suffers, the future suffers.
Example
CONCLUSION
In the nutshell
*add an idiom* when theres a will, theres a way too. if we join hands
to curb bullying at school, we can ...