The Perfect English Grammar Workbook - Lisa McLendon
The Perfect English Grammar Workbook - Lisa McLendon
The Perfect English Grammar Workbook - Lisa McLendon
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Introduction
1.0
WHY WE NEED GRAMMAR
2.0
GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION
2.1 General Writing Tips
2.2 Before You Begin
2.3 Starting to Write
2.4 Structure
2.5 Transitions
2.6 Common Pitfalls
2.7 Editing
3.0
PARTS OF SPEECH
4.0
SPELLING AND STYLE
4.1 How to Improve Your Spelling
4.2 Common Spelling Errors
4.3 Affixes and Common Spelling Rules
4.4 Contractions
4.5 Possessive Pitfalls
4.6 Dates and Times
4.7 Numbers
5.0
SENTENCE STRUCTURE
5.1 Subjects and Predicates
5.2 Subject-Verb Agreement
5.3 Objects
5.4 Clauses
5.5 Subordinators
5.6 Phrases
5.7 Complements
5.8 Misplaced Modifiers
5.9 Parallel Construction
6.0
VERBS
6.1 Conjugation
6.2 Person
6.3 Number
6.4 Aspect and Tense
6.5 Mood
6.6 Voice
6.7 Action Verbs and Linking Verbs
6.8 Modal Verbs
6.9 Consistent Tense and Sequence of Tenses
6.10 Phrasal Verbs
6.11 Verbals
7.0
DETERMINERS
8.0
NOUNS
8.1 Compound Nouns
8.2 Possessives
8.3 Collective Nouns
8.4 Count Nouns and Noncount Nouns
8.5 Definite and Indefinite Articles with Nouns
8.6 Plurals
8.7 Proper Nouns
8.8 “Verbing” Nouns
9.0
ABBREVIATIONS
9.1 Initialisms
9.2 Acronyms
9.3 Shortened and Clipped Forms
9.4 Portmanteaus
9.5 Pluralizing Abbreviations
10.0
PRONOUNS
10.1 Personal Pronouns
10.2 Subject and Object Pronouns
10.3 Possessives
10.4 Pronoun Agreement
10.5 Reflexive and Intensive Pronouns
10.6 Relative Pronouns
10.7 Demonstratives
10.8 Interrogative Pronouns
10.9 Indefinite Pronouns
10.10 Dummy Subjects
11.0
ADJECTIVES
11.1 Order of Adjectives
11.2 Comparatives and Superlatives
11.3 Proper Adjectives
11.4 Compound Adjectives
11.5 Indefinite Adjectives
11.6 Intensifiers
12.0
ADVERBS
12.1 Conjunctive Adverbs
12.2 Sentence Adverbs
13.0
PREPOSITIONS
14.0
CONJUNCTIONS
14.1 Coordinating Conjunctions
14.2 Correlative Conjunctions
14.3 Subordinating Conjunctions
15.0
INTERJECTIONS
16.0
PUNCTUATION
16.1 End-of-Sentence Punctuation
16.2 Joining Punctuation
16.3 Dividing Punctuation
16.4 All About Commas
17.0
USAGE AND STYLE TIPS
17.1 Word Usage
17.2 When Spell-Check Won’t Help
17.3 Grammar Conventions
17.4 Clichés and Wordiness
17.5 Grammar Myths
Glossary
Further Reading
Quiz Answer Keys
Practice Exercises and Quizzes
About the Author
COLOR KEY: ■ PRINCIPLES ■ COMPOSITION ■ STRUCTURE ■
WORDS ■ PUNCTUATION ■ USAGE AND STYLE
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INTRODUCTION
A
s a linguist, an editor, and now a teacher—and a person who has loved words her
whole life—I love taking language apart to see how it works, playing with it, and
seeing what I can do with it. I spent years in graduate school studying Slavic
languages and then more years in journalism; now I teach news editing at a
university. I’m a total geek about grammar, and I’m not ashamed to admit it. But
I’m definitely not a “grammar cop.” I like the label grammar cheerleader a lot
better, because grammar is a remarkable thing and a great tool for us, so we
should give it a hearty hoorah from time to time.
Having worked in both academia and journalism, I approach language from
several points of view: scholar, writer, and reader. I recognize that living
languages change, so grammar advice from a century or even a couple of
decades ago may not still be applicable today. But I also recognize that when
you’re trying to communicate clearly, with credibility and authority, there’s a set
of current standards you need to follow so that readers focus on what you’re
saying rather than how you’re saying it. (Anyone who’s ever made a typo on the
Internet understands this.)
Teaching has given me new insight on grammar, though: Many people are
apprehensive about writing and public speaking because they’re not confident in
their grammar skills. The fact that some guidebooks are complicated or snobby
doesn’t help. So I’ve made it a priority to “demystify” grammar:
It’s just a machine we all use already that occasionally has some tricky parts.
Once you learn the tricky parts, you can use that machine like a pro.
A poster in my office reads, “Grammar is not a secret code.” It is a code, sort
of, but it’s certainly not a secret. Grammar is for everyone, and everyone
deserves to feel confident using it. The bigger point is that I wrote this book not
to scold, but to support. It’s for writers who want to learn more about language
and how to use it according to current professional standards. Grammar doesn’t
have to be confusing and it doesn’t have to be technical. It does take some
practice—that’s what this book offers—and with practice, you’ll be perfect.
Clean, clear grammar is the foundation for solid writing. No matter how good
your ideas are or how relevant your facts might be, if they are presented in a
confusing way, readers won’t understand them. And if your content is presented
through sloppy, scattered writing, readers won’t take it seriously.
Writing is a craft. It takes work to get better, but with work you will get
better. A good way to improve your writing is to read good examples of the kind
of writing you’re working on, so you can get a feel for how it’s supposed to look.
Writing is a process. Most people don’t just sit down and write something
straight through. Instead, take it one step at a time: Think about your topic,
gather information, organize your facts and your thoughts, write, revise, think
some more, write some more, edit, and then format.
Different kinds of writing call for different styles. And “style” means both
word choice and sentence structure, as well as the formatting, spelling, and
punctuation choices in a document. For example, journalism is written in a more
conversational style, and it usually follows Associated Press style. Academic
writing is in a more formal style and often follows American Psychological
Association (APA) or Modern Language Association (MLA) style.
First, figure out what your goal is. That is, why are you writing? Are you writing
to inform? Enlighten? Persuade? Entertain? Explore?
Then, figure out what your point is. Are you writing a news story about
something that happened in your city? An analysis of imagery in a novel? A
summary of research findings? An argument for or against a particular policy or
viewpoint? Once you determine that, stay focused.
Next, figure out who your audience is. Are you writing for the general
public? A scholarly audience? Children? Experts in a particular field? Your
peers? People whose first language is not English? Your audience will determine
how formal you want your writing to be, what sort of vocabulary you will use,
and how complex your sentences and paragraphs will be.
Then, figure out what information you need to include and how much detail
you need to go into. Gather your facts and analyze them. Always cite your
sources!
Last, plan your composition. You don’t have to do a traditional outline
(though you may want to—lots of people find them helpful). Some people write
each piece of information on an index card or a PowerPoint slide, to make it easy
to put them in order and move things around. Some people jot down a brief list
of topics in the order they want to write about them. There’s no one right way to
plan, but you should plan, so you know where you’re going and how you’re
getting there.
You don’t have to start at the beginning, but you should at least start by writing a
summary sentence. Think of it as the “elevator pitch” or the “headline” for what
you’re writing: It sums up what the point is and why your readers should care. If
the rest of your plan doesn’t match this summary, that’s a red flag. It means
you’ll need to figure out whether to change your point or change your
information.
The first paragraph is the entry into your composition. It needs to be clear
and engaging, and it also needs to give the reader an idea of what’s to come. You
want to be specific about what your topic is, but don’t get bogged down in
details in that first paragraph.
Some people write down the details first, then go back and write the
transitions and summaries. Others write everything in order. Find what works for
you, but when you’re ready to write, write. Write it all down—you’ll revise it
later. It’s much easier to change something you’ve already written than to fill a
blank page, so the sooner you get rid of the blank page, the better.
If you get stuck, talk it through. Find someone you know who’s written for
the audience you’re writing for—or perhaps someone who is a member of that
audience—and tell them about what you’re writing. Explain why you’re writing.
Talk about the interesting things you’ve learned. Listen to any questions they
might have.
2.4 Structure
■ Start with something good: You want to catch and hold the reader’s
attention. Be clear about what your point is and be as interesting as you can
be.
■ Stay focused on the point: Don’t wander off on a tangent that doesn’t
support or relate to your point. But, you might say, that tangent is really
interesting! If you find yourself saying that, think about this: If it’s that
interesting, why isn’t it your main point? Maybe you need to revisit your
plan (which is fine—writers do it all the time).
■ Support your point with examples and facts. Even if you are writing an
opinion, having data or specific examples to back it up makes your argument
stronger. And always credit your sources.
■ Flow from one idea into the next, both logically and through use of
transitions. You want the reader to stay with you and understand the
progression of ideas and information.
2.5 Transitions
When you’re linking ideas together, transitions are what help you lead the reader
from one idea to the next. They make your writing flow smoothly and allow the
reader to follow your train of thought.
Transition words or phrases can begin a sentence to tie that idea to the
previous idea. Sometimes you might need a whole sentence or even a whole
(brief) paragraph to transition between ideas. The important thing is not to
swerve from one idea to the next without a transition.
Transitions usually fall into one of these categories:
This is by no means an exhaustive list, but it gives you an idea of what sorts
of words and phrases work as transitions.
TRANSITIONS
Think about the transition categories and then choose the correct answer.
1. Which of these transitions sets up a contrast?
a. however
b. likewise
c. second
2. Which of these transitions sets up an example?
a. additionally
b. specifically
c. despite
3. Which of these transitions sets up an addition?
a. furthermore
b. although
c. due to
4. Which of these transitions sets up a result?
a. also
b. indeed
c. in effect
5. Which of these transitions sets up a conclusion?
a. first
b. to sum up
c. on the other hand
No matter what you’re writing, or what structure you’re following, you want to
be aware of common writing pitfalls. We rarely say never in language, but here
are a few things it’s usually better to avoid:
■ Wordiness: Why use five words when one would do? Excess verbiage
doesn’t make you sound smart, it just makes your writing a slog to read. Too
many words and not enough substance will distract or bore readers, neither
of which you want.
■ Clichés: If something’s a cliché, it’s so well known that it’s lost its “oomph.”
You want your writing to be fresh and engaging, not tired and dull. This
doesn’t mean to never use clichés, but to stop when you write one to see
whether you could be more vivid, more specific, or more interesting. If
something is “like shooting fish in a barrel” or “as easy as pie,” how much
does that tell the reader? Could you convey the same information in a more
specific way, such as, “it takes only 10 minutes”?
■ Too much detail: Find the example, statistic, or fact that best illustrates your
point and leave it at that. No need to hit readers over the head with a load of
repetitive support.
■ Not enough detail: You do, however, need to support your point. Don’t
expect readers to simply take your word for it—back up your ideas with
concrete information.
■ No single, overarching theme: This shows up as two problems. One is
having no clear point at all, which leaves a reader confused or frustrated. The
other is having too many competing points, which means the reader can’t
figure out what to focus on.
COMMON PITFALLS
Match each wordy phrase with its more concise alternative.
2.7 Editing
Once you’re done writing, you’re not finished yet—you still need to edit. Editing
is far more than running spell-check (you do run spell-check, right?). It involves
details such as making sure you’ve used words correctly, spelled names right,
and punctuated everything properly, as well as bigger issues such as making sure
your writing flows, your ideas are supported, and your numbers add up.
It’s best to have another person edit your work, because they aren’t familiar
with your point and their fresh eyes will spot places where you’ve jumped too
far ahead without connection, you haven’t explained something clearly enough,
or you’ve made typos your own tired eyes can no longer notice.
If you need to edit your own work, you can do a few things to make it more
successful:
1. blue noun
2. the adjective
3. Yikes! adverb
conjunction
4. bus
5. perform interjection
preposition
6. quickly
pronoun
7. but
8. in noun
determiner
9. we
Once the scientists returned from Alaska, they calculated their climatic
data.
11. Write down the noun(s), but not the pronouns, in the sentence:
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12. Write down the verb(s) in the sentence:
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13. Write down the adjective(s) in the sentence:
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14. Write down the conjunction(s) in the sentence:
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15. Write down the preposition(s) in the sentence:
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■ Words that aren’t the words you want but are still words, such as solider
when you meant soldier or loose when you meant lose.
■ British spellings when you’re writing for a US audience, such as endeavour
for endeavor or centre for center. These aren’t wrong, but because they aren’t
the typical American spellings, they may distract your readers. (Many spell-
checkers flag British variants.)
■ Homophones, which are words that sound the same but have different
spellings and meanings, such as affect and effect or principle and principal.
■ For words that end in -e, drop the -e when you add a suffix starting in a
vowel, but leave the -e when the suffix starts with a consonant: dance,
dancing, dancer. Exceptions are words that end -ee, -oe and -ye: hoe, hoeing;
eye, eyeing.
■ For words that end in -y, change the -y to an -i before a suffix, unless the
suffix starts with i: rally, rallied, rallying; early, earlier.
■ For one-syllable, one-vowel words that end in one consonant, we usually
double the last consonant when adding a suffix: set, setting, setter; whir,
whirring, whirred.
(And forget “i before e except after c”—that “rule” has so many exceptions
that it’s practically useless.)
4.4 Contractions
Contractions are formed when two words combine into one and lose a letter (or
several) in the process. Where the letters drop out, we put in an apostrophe.
Contractions most commonly occur with noun + is, will, with pronoun + is,
are, are, will, has, have, had, and with verb + not. For example, “Rob is eating
becomes Rob’s eating, we are becomes we’re, did not becomes didn’t, could
have becomes could’ve, and so on. Let’s is used for let us and is fine for
suggestions and requests. Y’all is the contraction of you all, which is common in
speech but best avoided in formal writing. Notice that the apostrophes go where
the missing letters were.
There’s nothing wrong with using contractions in writing: They are
grammatical and a perfectly legitimate part of English. In fact, deliberately
avoiding contractions in writing makes it sound stuffy and stilted. That said,
don’t overuse contractions, and be mindful of what your audience expects.
CONTRACTIONS
Match each contraction with the phrase it’s short for.
1. you’re they are
2. you’ve you are
POSSESSIVE PITFALLS
Use the word above each sentence to fill in a plural and/or a possessive that
fits the sentence’s meaning.
1. Ford
That dealer sells new and used ______________. The F-150 is
______________ best-selling pickup.
2. employee
The store has 12 full-time ______________. The ______________
uniforms are green and yellow.
3. they
______________ house is being painted this week.
4. you
Just because all ______________ friends are doing it doesn’t mean you
should, too.
5. band
Our marching ______________ performance was good enough to win
first place. Nearly a hundred other ______________ were in the
competition.
■ US dates are written as “month, day, year”: January 31, 1997. Much of the
rest of the world writes “day, month, year”: 31 January 1997. Remember this
when you see a date such as 11/5/16: In the United States, that’s November
5, 2016; elsewhere, it’s probably May 11, 2016.
■ The day is always written with numerals, not spelled out: Graduation is June
2 (not “June second”). If you’re talking only about the day, use the ordinal
but still write it with numerals: I’m busy on the 12th, but I can meet on the
13th.
■ If you have a full date within a sentence, the year is set off by commas: The
D-Day assault on June 6, 1944, was led by General Dwight Eisenhower.
Don’t forget the comma after the year.
■ How and when to abbreviate months and days of the week varies, but if the
month or day is the only time element given, spell it out: We’re meeting
Tuesday. His birthday is in February.
■ When talking about a decade, the apostrophe is placed where the missing
numbers are: I love the ’80s (not “the 80’s”; also, make sure the apostrophe
faces the proper direction—some word processors automatically think it’s a
single quote and turn it the wrong way).
■ When talking about a time of day, if you specify a.m. or p.m., you don’t need
“in the morning” or “in the evening,” and vice versa—it’s redundant to
double up.
■ Use o’clock only on the hour: the 6 o’clock news. Specify morning or
evening if it’s unclear from the context.
■ Midnight and noon are usually clearer than 12 a.m. and 12 p.m., but
midnight can sometimes be ambiguous, so clarify if needed: Friday night just
before midnight, Saturday morning just after midnight. If you use noon or
midnight, you don’t also need to say 12.
■ If you use approximations such as around, use a rounded-off time, not a
specific time: The 911 call came in shortly after 10 p.m. (not “shortly after
10:08 p.m.”—if you can be that specific, then don’t fudge it).
■ Biweekly, bimonthly, and biannual are, at this point, hopelessly muddled.
Specify twice a week/month/year or every two weeks/months/years to be
clear.
4.7 Numbers
As with dates and times, a style guide is a great resource for how to render
numbers, and, as with dates and times, the important thing is to be consistent
throughout a document. Here are a few things the style guides generally agree
on:
■ Spell out numbers zero to nine, and spell out any number at the beginning of
a sentence (this may require rewording a sentence that starts with a big
number).
■ For numbers of four or more digits, put a comma every third number
counting from the right: 5,280; 22,000; 3,495,122.
■ Fractions are more commonly used in casual language, such as recipes or
approximations, otherwise, spell it out (about half the people there).
■ Decimals are used for more precise figures. For a number less than zero, add
a zero before the decimal point: 0.67, 0.005.
■ For dollar amounts, use either the dollar sign or the word dollars, but not
both. If you use the dollar sign, use numerals for the amount: $5, five dollars.
Ditto for cents, if anyone still uses the cents sign. And remember that 25
cents is $0.25, not 0.25 cents—it’s one-quarter, or 0.25, of a dollar, not a
penny.
■ The letters K (for thousands), M (for millions), and B (for billions) are
generally used only in headlines and specialized publications.
■ For percentages, use either the percent sign or the word percent, but not both.
Use numerals for the percentage in either case: a 7 percent solution, the
interest rate is 3.25%.
You may run across the terms cardinal and ordinal for numbers. Cardinal
numbers are the counting numbers: one, two, three, etc. Ordinal numbers are the
sequence numbers (that is, they put things in order): first, second, third, etc. The
same rules for spelling them out or using numerals apply to both types.
Expressions such as a couple of, a few, several, some, a number of, a bunch
of, many, and a lot of are common in casual language and are used when a
precise quantity is either unknown or irrelevant. Use a plural verb with them.
It’s okay to pronounce a zero as oh when it’s clear that you’re talking about
numbers, such as in phone numbers (867-5309 as eight-six-seven-five-three-oh-
nine) and years (1908 as nineteen-oh-eight).
NUMBERS
Choose the best answer.
1. Leadville, Colorado, is the highest city in the United States, with an
elevation of __________ feet.
a. 10,152
b. 101,52
c. 10152
2. The average cost of a new car in the United States in 2015 was
__________.
a. $33,560 dollars
b. $33,560
c. 33K dollars
3. The Krakowskis have __________ people in their family and
__________ dogs.
a. 5, 6
b. 5, six
c. five, six
4. Storms and 95-degree temperatures didn’t keep __________ fans from
the outdoor music festival.
a. fifty thousand
b. 50,000
c. 50K
5. In the mid-1980s, mortgage rates were around __________.
a. twelve %
b. twelve percent
c. 12 percent
2. While you are at the store, can you get some milk?________________
3. Paul should have known better with a girl like her. ________________
For questions 5–8, mark the best answer. Look up the words if necessary.
6. The police found shell casings that matched the caliber / calibre of the fatal
bullet.
7. Because Rachel’s a book blogger, she gets a sneak peak / peek / pique at
new releases.
8. The development team has free rein / reign on the new project—and a huge
budget.
For questions 9–12, fill in the correct form of the given word.
9. scary
The sequel was much _______________ than the first movie.
10. puddle
Water was _______________ on the floor underneath the leak in the roof.
11. rat
The gangster couldn’t believe his buddies _______________ him out to the
Feds.
12. army
The video game involves warring _______________ of monsters.
For questions 13–16, use the given word to fill in a plural and/or a possessive
that fits the sentence’s meaning.
13. it
The spectators cheered when the monster truck was knocked clean off
__________ chassis.
14. kitten
At the Humane Society, there are dozens of __________ waiting to be adopted.
15. PBS
Sherlock is one of __________ most popular shows.
16. you
Why haven’t you finished __________ homework yet?
17. They stood in line for the midnight / 12 a.m. / 12 midnight movie.
18. Marcy’s Aunt Agnes was born on November 19, 1911, / November 19,
1911 in Chicago.
19. Because of Wiley’s success on the Acme account, he got a $3K / $3,000 /
$3,000 dollar bonus.
20. Millie was so excited the day she reached 10K / 100,00 / 10,000 followers
on Twitter.
21. All four of the Wongs’ children have December / Dec. birthdays.
22. When you go to the boss’s house for dinner, mind you’re p’s and q’s / your
p’s and q’s / your ps and qs.
23. First / 1st / 1th, you need to turn on the machine.
24. The music scene in the late 60’s / 60s / ’60s was groovy, man.
subject | predicate
Harold | built a surveillance machine.
But when we add more words, you may need to hunt a little for the subject
and predicate:
After the exam, Alyssa, who hadn’t studied, knew she had done well.
After the exam starts the sentence but isn’t doing or being anything, so it is
not the subject. Alyssa is a noun, and she’s doing something, so there’s your
subject. Who hadn’t studied is something that happened (see section 5.4:
Clauses), but it’s not the main thing that happened. Knew she had done well is
the main thing that happened, so there’s your predicate.
subject | predicate
After the exam, Alyssa, who hadn’t studied, | knew she had done well.
With questions, the word order is a little different because we put the subject
between an auxiliary verb (see section 6.1) and the main verb:
The pronoun you is the subject. Did find anything is the predicate.
Cameron and Sloane were laughing as they watched Ferris jump onto a float
and sing.
Intervening phrases or clauses can throw you off, but remember: Even if
there’s a plural noun at the end of a phrase or clause, it’s not the subject, so it
doesn’t affect the verb. Use only the subject to decide which verb you need.
The CEO, accompanied by three board members, was seated at the head
table.
SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
In each sentence, mark the correct verb.
1. The dog, along with her owners, is / are playing in the park.
2. Each team has / have been practicing all week for Sunday’s game.
3. Either the coach or the assistants has/ have to decide the starting lineup.
4. Brendan’s radio show and Laura’s podcast feature / features a lot of
local music.
5. Our mayor, just like most other politicians, never know / knows when
to keep quiet.
An indirect object comes between the action verb and the direct object and
answers the question “To whom or what?” or “For whom or what?” Indirect
objects are recipients and occur with verbs that have the sense of giving,
showing, or telling. An indirect object is always a noun or pronoun and almost
never appears by itself without a direct object.
OBJECTS
In each sentence, identify the function of the underlined word.
1. Peter sent his mother flowers for her birthday.
direct object
indirect object
object of a preposition
2. Joel will be going home after dinner.
direct object
indirect object
object of a preposition
3. Will you return the gift to the address on the envelope?
direct object
indirect object
object of a preposition
4. Kelly sent her classmates an email about the group project.
direct object
indirect object
object of a preposition
5. I found your car keys in the bathroom—they must have fallen out of
your pocket.
direct object
indirect object
object of a preposition
5.4 Clauses
A clause is a group of words that has a subject and a predicate (see section 5.1).
Sounds like a sentence, right? But clauses can be independent or dependent.
Independent clauses are complete sentences—they can stand on their own. But
dependent clauses, also called subordinate clauses, are not complete sentences
—they have to be part of a larger sentence.
We were late.
Independent clause, complete sentence
The easiest way to tell whether you have a dependent clause is to say it out
loud. If you find yourself wondering “Aaaaaand?” as if there should be more to
the sentence, then you probably have a dependent clause. Or you can look for
subordinators, which we’ll get to in the next section.
Two independent clauses can be joined with a coordinating conjunction such
as “and” or “but” (see section 14.1) to create a compound sentence, in which
neither clause is subordinate. When there’s a subordinate clause attached to the
main clause, you get a complex sentence.
CLAUSES
Identify the type of clause.
1. Because she’s your friend
independent dependent
2. When I find myself overwhelmed with work
independent dependent
3. Yesterday, Sam and Shana finished their project
independent dependent
4. She came in covered with mud
independent dependent
5. Though the news was late because of the football game
independent dependent
KEY FOR PRACTICE EXERCISE 5.4
1. dependent
2. dependent
3. independent
4. independent
5. dependent
5.5 Subordinators
Subordinators are words that link a clause to another clause, making it a
dependent, or subordinate, clause (see previous section). Subordinators fall into
two main categories: relative pronouns (see section 10.6) and subordinating
conjunctions (see section 14.3).
The relative pronouns are who, whom, which, that and their indefinite forms
whoever, whomever, whichever. Relative clauses introduce more information
about a noun. The relative pronoun can serve as the subject or an object in the
clause.
The Death Star plans, which the Bothan spies stole, were used to plot the
attack. Which the Bothan spies stole is the subordinate clause, with which as
the direct object of the verb stole.
SUBORDINATORS
Identify the subordinator in each sentence.
1. If there’s something wrong with your refrigerator, Billy Sue can fix it.
____________
2. We were worried because she looked as if she’d seen a ghost.
____________
3. These crazy people who say they “bust ghosts” are a menace!
____________
4. But the ghost that haunted the library is gone. ____________
5. Egon knows what to do whenever there’s a paranormal problem.
____________
5.7 Complements
A linking verb (see section 6.7) takes a subject complement instead of a direct
object. Complements can be single words, phrases, or entire clauses, but the
important thing is that they are telling you more about the subject.
COMPLEMENTS
Underline the complement in each sentence.
1. I look incredible in my granddad’s old uniform.
2. Her goulash tastes terrible because she doesn’t use enough paprika.
3. She overcame an abusive childhood, got an education, and became the
head surgeon.
4. When I grow old, I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled.
5. Bruce Springsteen is truly the boss.
The Senate Judiciary Committee will confront the administration over the
practice of targeted killings at a hearing Tuesday.
This makes it sound as if the targeted killings happened at a hearing Tuesday
because that phrase comes after the targeted killings rather than after
confront the administration. At a hearing Tuesday could also go at the very
beginning of the sentence.
To spot and fix misplaced modifiers, carefully check lead-ins and time
phrases to make sure they’re next to whatever they’re modifying.
MISPLACED MODIFIERS
Underline the misplaced modifier in each sentence.
1. The senators are downplaying the assault weapons ban in the gun
violence package put together after December’s mass shooting by the
president’s handpicked task force.
2. The prosecutor announced that the suspect had been charged with
murder during a news conference downtown.
3. After 95 years of working the land, it’s clear that the best foods come
from the best ingredients.
4. We will honor three veteran journalists for their dedication to accurate
and honest reporting at the Capitol Hill Club.
5. When reorganizing your business, employees must trust that you have a
clear destination in mind and that you are committed to progress.
The city is dealing with locally produced ozone, pollution from the Gulf
Coast, and prairie burns cause high levels of smoke.
The base of the first element is the noun ozone, the second element is the
noun pollution, but the third element is a clause: burns cause. This means that
the construction is not parallel. You can fix this by making the last element into a
noun modified by either a relative clause or a participial phrase:
With correlative conjunctions (see section 14.2), make sure that whatever
comes after each part is parallel. So, for instance, if you put a verb after either,
make sure you also have one after or: Instead of We will have to find the book
either at the library or go buy a copy, try We will have to either get the book at
the library or go buy a copy.
The village was deserted, except for journalists in a dusty tent and Syrian
army soldiers who were dismantling explosives.
3. deserted subject
5. explosives complement
For questions 21–25, mark whether the sentence has a misplaced modifier,
nonparallel construction, or no error.
21. The nurse who was treated for Ebola spoke at a news conference as
members of her nursing staff looked on after being discharged from the
hospital.
misplaced modifier
nonparallel construction
no error
22. The salon’s services include haircuts, coloring, and it offers manicures and
pedicures.
misplaced modifier
nonparallel construction
no error
23. Facing a severe budget shortfall, it’s easy to see how online services might
fill the gap.
misplaced modifier
nonparallel construction
no error
24. If the mayor supports the parking exemption, no one will be able to find a
spot on the north side of campus.
misplaced modifier
nonparallel construction
no error
25. We need to tidy up the backyard, the shed, and trim the front hedges.
misplaced modifier
nonparallel construction
no error
6.1 Conjugation
Verbs change according to a process called conjugation. Conjugation involves
changes in the base verb as well as the addition of auxiliary verbs, also called
“helping verbs,” to convey information other than simply what’s happening,
such as who’s doing it or to whom it’s being done, when it happened, whether
it’s finished, whether it’s possible or obligatory or hypothetical, and so on.
English verbs have three main forms, also called principal parts: the base or
infinitive (to ___) form, the past tense form, and the past participle form. Verbs
also have a present participle, or -ing, form, which shows up with some auxiliary
verbs as well as in participles and gerunds.
For regular verbs, the principal parts are base/-ed/-ed, such as
talk/talked/talked. The -ed and -ing endings join directly to the verb. When a
verb ends in e, the final e usually drops out in the present participle form:
invade/invading. If a one-syllable verb ends in a single consonant, that
consonant usually doubles before the ending: bat/batted/batting. For
multisyllable verbs ending in a single consonant, that consonant usually does not
double in American English: travel/traveled/traveling.
For irregular verbs—and English has a lot of these—the principal parts
depend on what language the verb came from, when it entered English, and so
on, but they don’t follow a pattern. So we get ring/rang/rung but bring/
brought/brought and go/went/gone but do/did/done. Most dictionaries list verb
forms and their preferred spellings, so if you’re not sure, look it up.
Auxiliary verbs are forms of be, have, and do and combine with other verb
forms. Be and have forms mark tense, aspect, and voice (see sections 6.4 and
6.6), whereas do forms indicate emphasis or questions with verbs that don’t
normally have an auxiliary: Did you read the paper? Don’t you know her? Other
auxiliary forms are modals (see section 6.8), which add an extra layer of
meaning.
CONJUGATION
Fill in the missing verb forms. Use a dictionary if you need to.
6.2 Person
A verb’s “person” is simply the subject of the verb from the point of view of the
speaker or writer.
You can bet the trash talk is only going to get worse.
If you really wanted to go, you wouldn’t have waited so long to buy a ticket.
Fiction, memoirs, and personal essays are often written in first person, using
I, when someone wants to tell a story from a personal point of view.
PERSON
Identify whether the verb is first, second, or third person in each sentence.
1. If you like that shirt, then you should buy two.
first second third
2. I wrote that paper a year ago.
first second third
3. Jealousy, according to Shakespeare, is a “green-eyed monster.”
first second third
4. She is the youngest of seven sisters.
first second third
5. When you think of the meaning of life, what do you think of?
first second third
Number is important because verbs can have different forms for singular and
plural, and, as we mentioned in the last chapter, the verb and the subject need to
match, or “agree,” in number.
You find the singular/plural distinction most often in third person present
tense verbs. In regular verbs, only the third person singular form adds an -s:
I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream. She screams for ice
cream.
Amanda has a nice car. Her parents have two other cars.
With to be, the forms change a lot differently and go beyond the third person:
Miguel is supposed to do the dishes. I am supposed to help, and you are, too.
NUMBER
In each sentence, identify whether the verb is singular or plural.
1. My sister wears pink on Wednesdays.
singular plural
2. On Wednesdays, we wear pink.
singular plural
3. Your friend here is only mostly dead.
singular plural
4. They were looking for two droids.
singular plural
5. I am waiting for it to stop raining.
singular plural
I like tacos. I make them a lot. I buy them from a food truck, too.
■ Present progressive is for an ongoing action and is formed with the present
tense of be plus the -ing form of the verb:
■ Present perfect is something that was completed in the past but is relevant in
the present. It’s formed with the present tense of have plus the past participle
form of the verb:
■ Present perfect progressive is for ongoing actions that started in the past and
are still going on now. It’s formed with the present tense of have plus been
plus the -ing form of the verb:
My family was watching a movie when the tornado sirens went off.
Luckily, we had cleaned the office before the CEO’s surprise visit.
■ Past perfect progressive is for an action that was ongoing in the past before it
stopped when something else in the past happened. This is formed with had
been plus the -ing form of the verb:
The team had been working on this project for over a month when it got
canceled.
Note #1: The present progressive is often used with a simple future meaning,
usually when the action is happening soon or at a specified time: We are meeting
them after work. My colleagues are flying to Chicago for the conference. Carly
is graduating in May.
Note #2: The auxiliary shall was traditionally used instead of will with first
person verbs, but now it’s largely confined to legal/obligatory uses and formal
suggestions/requests like “Shall we dance?”
■ Future progressive is for something ongoing in the future. It’s formed with
will plus be plus the -ing form of the verb:
■ Future perfect indicates that at a time in the future, something will be done.
This is formed with will have plus the -ed/past participle form of the verb:
Hopefully, Jared will have finished his homework before you get here.
■ Future perfect progressive is for an ongoing action in the future that ties into
another future action. It’s formed with will have been plus the -ing form of
the verb.
By the time they catch up, we will have been looking for several hours
already.
2. Security
cameras
are
watching ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐
everyone in
the
building.
3. I’ve
never been
to Los
Angeles,
☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐
but I’ve
been to
San
Francisco.
4. I ran
away from
☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐
the scary
clowns.
5. The dog
was
barking at
two men
☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐ ☐
who were
walking
past the
house.
KEY FOR PRACTICE EXERCISE 6.4
1. ✓ simple ✓ future
2. ✓ present ✓ progressive
3. ✓ present ✓ perfect
4. ✓ simple ✓ past
5. ✓ past ✓ progressive
6.5 Mood
A verb’s “mood” reflects the speaker’s perspective on the contents of the
sentence. There are three moods: indicative, subjunctive, and imperative.
Indicative mood is the most common. It states a fact, asks a question, or
expresses an opinion: You bought the blue dress. What made you choose the blue
one? I think you look great!
Subjunctive mood is used for hypothetical and contrary-to-fact situations, as
well as for wishes and requests.
If it hadn’t rained (but it did), we would have gone to the park (but we
didn’t).
The somewhat complicated rules for verb tense with subjunctives have been
undergoing a simplification as the language changes. The best advice for now is
to trust your ear and don’t overthink it. Remember that verbs are usually in the
past tense (but not with let subjunctives), and could, would, and should show up
a lot. Think of If I were you and let that be your model.
Also, be careful to distinguish a subjunctive from a conditional, which is
indicative: A conditional could happen; a subjunctive didn’t or won’t.
Imperative mood expresses a command: Get out of this house! Entertain us.
Stop at red lights. Don’t talk to strangers. The subject (you) is understood but
usually omitted.
MOOD
Identify the mood of the verb in each sentence.
1. If I were an editor, I wouldn’t need this book.
indicative subjunctive imperative
2. Call me when you want to talk.
indicative subjunctive imperative
3. When I get to the end of a book, I start another one.
indicative subjunctive imperative
4. I don’t care if it rains tonight.
indicative subjunctive imperative
5. She wished she knew how to play a musical instrument.
indicative subjunctive imperative
6.6 Voice
A verb’s “voice” indicates the focus of the action: who’s doing it or who is
having it done to them. The two voices are active and passive.
Active voice is simple subject-verb or subject-verb-object structure (see
section 5.3), where the subject is doing the verb:
We study engineering.
We ordered pizza.
Passive voice takes the direct object and makes it the subject, with the verb
being done to the subject. The original subject is sometimes put into a by phrase:
Active: The cat ate the tuna. Passive: The tuna was eaten by the cat.
Active: Her bridesmaids wore green dresses. Passive: Green dresses were
worn by her bridesmaids.
Passives can sometimes be wordy or too indirect for what you want to say.
They can also be deliberately vague when no by phrase is included:
Mistakes were made. (No one gets the blame with this sentence.)
But passive voice is perfectly grammatical and is sometimes the right choice,
especially when who does the action isn’t as important or is unknown:
The First National Bank was robbed yesterday. (We don’t know yet who did
it, and the important thing is that the bank was robbed.)
A suspect in the robbery was arrested this morning. (Obviously, police arrest
people. But the important thing here is that a suspect is in custody.)
One piece of writing advice you may have heard is “Avoid the passive
voice.” That’s not bad advice, but as the examples above show, sometime
passive is the best choice. Also, make sure you’ve correctly identified a passive
voice verb. Passive voice is not the same as a linking verb (see next section) or a
verb phrase that includes auxiliary verbs. Passives occur only with verbs that can
take a direct object, called transitive verbs (see next section).
VOICE
In each sentence, identify whether the verb is active or passive.
1. The weather seems unstable today.
active passive
2. Hail is falling from the sky.
active passive
3. The dogs are frightened by thunder.
active passive
4. We’ll have to clean up the yard.
active passive
5. A bunch of tree limbs were knocked down in the storm.
active passive
KEY FOR PRACTICE EXERCISE 6.6
1. active
2. active
3. passive
4. active
5. passive
Cade likes cake. He eats cake every chance he gets. He bakes cakes, too.
Action verbs can also be intransitive—they don’t have a direct object but are
still talking about an action.
Molly runs every morning. She has been running since grade school.
Linking verbs, on the other hand, are always intransitive. They have subject
complements (see section 5.7) instead of direct objects.
Cade will be a master chef someday. Molly looks very fit. Olga seems
intelligent.
With a modal, verb forms that normally change to indicate person (see
section 6.2) don’t change:
For past tense modals, use the past participle form of the main verb:
MODAL VERBS
In each sentence, fill in the correct form of the main verb given in
parentheses.
1. I don’t know where Helen is, but I think she might have ___________
on vacation. (go)
2. Everyone said they should have ____________ a cleaner campaign.
(run)
3. Could you _____________ whether the scouts need any help? (see)
4. We need to have _______________ all the chairs over before the party.
(bring)
5. Be careful—burnt popcorn can _______________ up the whole office!
(stink)
Jeff said he loved mushroom pizza in college but hates mushrooms now.
Don’t overthink sequence of tenses: Trust your ear; it’ll be right most of the
time.
CONSISTENT TENSE
In each sentence, fill in the correct form of the verb in parentheses.
1. He said he ____________ (think) what he did ___________ (is) the
right thing to do.
2. The teacher said a circle ____________ (have) 360 degrees.
3. Mom promised she _______________ (go) to the store after work
tomorrow.
4. The Jeffersons said they ________________ (enjoy) their trip to
Australia last year.
5. She said The Catcher in the Rye ____________ (is) her favorite book.
Phrasal verbs can also be split—that is, other words can come between the
verb and the preposition:
Please throw your trash away before leaving the picnic area.
PHRASAL VERBS
Match the phrasal verb with the sentence in which it fits best.
1. The kids need to _________ all their toys before bed. put back
4. She asked the shop to ____________ some flounder for her. put out
6.11 Verbals
Verbs have some forms that act like other parts of speech. These are called
verbals and include participles, gerunds, and infinitives.
Participles are verbs that act like adjectives. A lot of participles are so
common as adjectives that we don’t even think of them as verbs: the chosen one,
an interesting book, a compelling story, an undiscovered manuscript. English has
active participles and passive participles. Active participles are the -ing form of
the verb; passive participles are the third principle part (see section 6.1), ending
in -ed or an irregular form.
Gerunds are verbs that act like nouns. They can be subjects, direct objects,
or objects of prepositions. They are always the -ing form of the verb: Michael
Phelps is really good at swimming. The park offers hiking and biking. Cooking is
their hobby.
Infinitives are the to form of the verb. They also function as nouns and often
head up a whole phrase: To write like a professional, learn the rules. Perfect
infinitives are formed with to have plus the past participle form and indicate
action prior to the rest of the sentence: To have lived in Beirut then, must have
been harrowing. Passive infinitives are the passive forms of transitive verbs,
formed with to be (present) or to have been (past) plus the past participle form:
To have been taken from her family at such a young age must have been
traumatic for Lucy.
VERBALS
In each sentence, indicate whether the underlined verbal is a gerund,
participle, or infinitive.
1. To be or not to be, that is the question.
gerund participle infinitive
2. Spurs jangling, the cowboy walked up to the bar.
gerund participle infinitive
3. Horseback riding is her one passion.
gerund participle infinitive
4. The group’s main goal is hacking into the CIA’s computers.
gerund participle infinitive
5. The bound volumes of newspapers are in the basement.
gerund participle infinitive
15. You can check out up to 12 books at a time, but you can have them for only
two weeks.
a. modal
b. subjunctive
c. gerund
d. participle
16. If they say we can’t meet there, then where will we go?
a. indicative
b. modal
c. gerund
d. participle
17. Choose a kitten that likes to purr.
a. participle
b. modal
c. subjunctive
d. imperative
18. Sailing is a sport that requires a lot of money.
a. participle
b. modal
c. gerund
d. imperative
19. After the burglary, shattered glass was strewn all over the kitchen floor.
a. modal
b. participle
c. gerund
d. infinitive
20. If you can’t write well, it will be hard to find a job.
a. modal
b. participle
c. gerund
d. infinitive
For questions 21–25, fill in the correct form of the verb in parentheses. You may
need to add an auxiliary verb.
22. Yesterday she said she ______________ it was a good idea. (think)
23. When we rang the doorbell, they _______ just ____________ the dishes.
(finish)
25. While the plane was sitting on the tarmac with the gate in sight, the
passengers ________ increasingly annoyed. (grow)
How can we tell which compounds close, which stay open, and which get
hyphenated? There’s no hard-and-fast rule for this, and there’s a lot of variation
among style guides and dictionaries, but there are some trends. US English in
particular trends toward closed compounds but not in all instances.
Compounds made up of two nouns, such as healthcare and childcare, are
most likely to be closed.
Compounds made up of noun + adjective and especially noun + participle or
gerund (see section 6.11), such as upper crust and training exercise, are more
likely to be open.
Compounds made up of noun + “doer” noun and noun + another phrase,
such as mouth-breather and jack-in-the-box, are more likely to be hyphenated.
COMPOUND NOUNS
Go to your usual dictionary, and after the entry for middle, see how it
renders middle + the following words (look at the nouns, not adjectives):
1. age
2. school
3. ground
4. man
5. weight
8.2 Possessives
When we want to indicate that someone or something belongs to or is associated
with someone or something else, we use a possessive form.
Making nouns possessive is pretty straightforward: add apostrophe-s. For
singular nouns, this is all you need to do: Miranda’s award, my brother’s bike,
the restaurant’s specials, the class’s assignment. If the noun is plural and
already ends in -s, just add an apostrophe: the businesses’ lobbyist, the
candidates’ debate. If the noun is plural and doesn’t already end in -s, add
apostrophe -s: children’s books, people’s interests.
Only the last word of a noun phrase gets made possessive: Peggy and Mike’s
boat, the University of Illinois and Northwestern’s joint program.
Sometimes possession is indicated by an of phrase, and generally this is used
for emphasis or when it makes a string of possessives clearer, like my best
friend’s sister’s boyfriend’s brother’s girlfriend becomes the girlfriend of the
brother of my best friend’s sister’s boyfriend.
Please do not use apostrophe-s to make a noun plural. Never. I will remind
you about this again in section 8.6 because it’s that important.
POSSESSIVES
Make each of the following nouns possessive.
1. author ________________________
2. Missy ________________________
3. The Liebermans ________________________
4. Chris and Pat ________________________
5. the sister of the friend of my co-worker ______________________
COLLECTIVE NOUNS
In each sentence, circle the correct verbs and pronouns.
1. The corporation is / are expanding its / their product line to include
mobile devices.
2. All my far-flung family members is / are planning to come to the
reunion.
3. The navy is / are ready for new protocols.
4. The army installed new communications at most of its / their domestic
bases.
5. Tell all the team members to get its / their stuff to the bus no later than
7 a.m.
8.6 Plurals
Most nouns go from singular to plural with the addition of -s or -es on the end:
cats and dogs, places and faces, Martians and Russians. No apostrophe, just
extra letters. Add -es when the word ends in -s, -sh, -ch, -z, -x, and sometimes -o:
dresses, ashes, searches, buzzes, foxes, tornadoes (but burritos). For nouns
ending in -y, usually change the -y to -i and then add -es: candies, pennies (but
monkeys).
That’s easy enough, but there’s a whole bushel of words in English that have
irregular plural forms that don’t seem to follow any rules: mouse → mice but
house → houses, man → men but can → cans, goose → geese but moose →
moose (more on that one in a moment), foot → feet but boot → boots. Many
words ending in -f change the -f to a -v and then add -es, but not always: thief →
thieves but chief → chiefs, hoof → hooves but roof → roofs. When in doubt,
look it up: Any good dictionary lists plural forms with nouns.
There are also many, many nouns that we borrowed from Latin and Greek
that have their own set of plurals, such as vertebra → vertebrae, crisis → crises,
phenomenon → phenomena, vortex → vortices, and candelabrum →
candelabra. Some of these we’ve anglicized enough that we just add -s, like
stadium → stadiums (don’t use stadia unless you want to be thought of as
insufferably stuffy). Others—especially scientific or academic terms—have
retained their ancient plural forms. Again, when in doubt, look it up.
Some words have the same form for both singular and plural. It may be a
singular form, such as deer or fish or the above mentioned moose, or a plural
form, such as pants or glasses (as in spectacles).
Data and media are two words that began as Latin plurals but are used in the
singular with increasing frequency: The data shows, the news media is. In formal
or academic contexts, stick to using these as plurals, but in speech and in more
conversational writing, it’s fine to use these words as singulars.
PLURALS
Write the plural of each noun. Look up the word in the dictionary if you
need to, but use the first plural given if you do.
1. rhinoceros
2. asteroid
3. first baseman
4. series
5. criterion
PROPER NOUNS
Capitalize all the proper nouns in each sentence.
1. Where do you think you’re going, timbuktu?
2. Two professors from the university of montana take students on an
archaeological dig every summer.
3. The golden state warriors fell short in their quest for a title in 2016.
4. We won tickets to hamilton in a contest sponsored by the new york
times.
5. For her summer abroad, she’s going to hungary and romania to study
alternative energy.
For each noun, fill in the plural, the possessive, and the possessive plural (not all
words will have all three), and indicate whether it’s common or proper, and
count or noncount. Feel free to use your dictionary.
9.1 Initialisms
Initialisms are abbreviations that use the first letter of each word in the phrase,
with each letter pronounced individually, such as FBI or USA. Articles (see
chapter 7: Determiners), prepositions, and conjunctions usually aren’t included
in the initialism. Initialisms can be in all capital letters, such as NFL and MRI, or
lowercase, like e.g. Sometimes they include periods and sometimes they don’t.
And sometimes they can be rendered several ways, such as 8 AM, 8 A.M., 8 a.m.,
and 8 am. Check your designated style guide for whether you should use
periods.
Initialisms are sometimes called acronyms (see next section), but technically
they’re not because acronyms are pronounced as a word rather than as individual
letters.
9.2 Acronyms
Acronyms, like initialisms, are abbreviations that use the first letter of each word
in the phrase. Unlike initialisms, they’re pronounced as a word rather than a
series of letters, such as CAT scan. Acronyms are usually written in all capital
letters, such as UNICEF and NASCAR, but sometimes, when they become a part
of the mainstream language, they turn lowercase, like radar and snafu (look it
up). Also, some style guides require that longer acronyms have only the first
letter capitalized, such as Unicef and Nascar.
PRACTICE EXERCISE 9.2
ACRONYMS
Give the acronym for each full word or phrase.
1. President of the United States
2. Museum of Modern Art
3. Supplemental Nutrition Assistance Program
4. science, technology, engineering, and math
5. sound navigation and ranging
2. vegetable quads
3. veteran vet
4. quadruplets
5. veterinarian
6. vegetarian
9.4 Portmanteaus
Portmanteaus are mash-up words, formed by combining two words into one.
Sometimes they’re funny and slangy, such as adorkable (dorky + adorable) and
bootylicious (booty + delicious), and sometimes they go mainstream, such as
motel (motor + hotel) and webinar (web + seminar). Many are tech-based, such
as malware (malicious + software) and modem (modulator + demodulator).
Fun fact: A portmanteau is also a big suitcase, and we can credit author
Lewis Carroll with the meaning expansion. One of his characters describes
nonsense words as “like a portmanteau—there are two meanings packed up into
one word.”
PORTMANTEAUS
Combine the two words into a familiar portmanteau.
1. shopping + alcoholic = ______________________________
2. math + athlete = _____________________
3. mock + documentary = _________________________________
4. Labrador retriever + poodle = ____________________________
5. spoon + fork = __________________________________
PLURALIZING ABBREVIATIONS
Make each abbreviation plural.
1. RFP
2. doc
3. PB&J
4. cockapoo
5. MVP
10. The USA PATRIOT Act was passed shortly after the 9/11 attacks.
initialism
acronym
clipped form
portmanteau
11. Each candidate is getting support from numerous PACs.
initialism
acronym
clipped form
portmanteau
12. Superhero movies have become much more popular than rom-coms.
initialism
acronym
clipped form
portmanteau
13. Her senior film project was a docudrama about cactus hunters.
initialism
acronym
clipped form
portmanteau
14. Their French lit final involves reading passages and identifying the authors.
initialism
acronym
clipped form
portmanteau
PERSONAL PRONOUNS
Mark the personal pronoun in each sentence.
1. Oh, say can you see by the dawn’s early light?
2. One day she just up and left.
3. I don’t want to live in Alabama.
4. If Marco doesn’t get here soon, we are going to be late.
5. Can Grandpa see them from here?
10.3 Possessives
Personal pronouns have two possessive forms: possessive pronouns and
possessive adjectives. Pronouns stand alone: That seat is mine. Adjectives
precede a noun: That is my seat. Refer to the table in section 10.1 for all the
personal pronoun forms.
The most common mistake with possessive pronouns and adjectives is to add
apostrophes. Although possessive nouns (see section 8.2) are formed with
apostrophes, possessive pronouns aren’t. If you see an apostrophe with a
pronoun, it should be a contraction, so say it as two words. If the sentence
doesn’t make sense, then you have the wrong form. For example: It’s name is
Tigger. It is name is Tigger? No, so you want its, with no apostrophe.
POSSESSIVES
Mark the correct pronoun form in each sentence.
1. You’re / Your hair looks terrific!
2. You can’t take that dog—he’s ours / our’s.
3. Her uncles sold their / they’re / there farm in Missouri.
4. Have you met that new friend of her’s / hers?
5. I hear its / it’s supposed to snow tonight.
KEY FOR PRACTICE EXERCISE 10.3
1. Your
2. ours
3. their
4. hers
5. it’s (= it is)
PRONOUN AGREEMENT
Mark the correct pronoun in each sentence.
1. The new restaurant is having their / its grand opening on Saturday.
2. Under the new curriculum, students will fulfill six requirements through
his or her / their coursework, regardless of major.
3. The team ended their / its five-game losing streak on Sunday.
4. The players are rested and ready for their / its game tomorrow.
5. The international conglomerate is building their / its new executive
center in the Kansas City area.
10.7 Demonstratives
Demonstratives point things out and can contrast things or note whether they are
close by or farther away. Like possessives (see section 10.3), demonstratives can
work as pronouns (standing alone) or as adjectives (preceding a noun). The
demonstratives are this, that, these, and those.
This and these usually refer to whatever is closer, in physical distance,
figurative distance, or time. This is the book I was talking about. These plates
are going in the garage sale; those are staying. That and those are usually used
with something more distant (again, literally, figuratively, or temporally): That
house down the street has been on the market for ages. Sometimes the
distinction is extremely fine: I can’t read type of this size would likely imply
you’re looking right at the document; I can’t read type of that size may be trying
to convey the reason you haven’t read it.
DEMONSTRATIVES
In each sentence, identify whether the demonstrative is a pronoun or an
adjective.
1. That’s how we roll.
pronoun adjective
2. This code opens the main door.
pronoun adjective
3. This is my roommate, Sheldon.
pronoun adjective
4. Those people are acting strangely.
pronoun adjective
5. Don’t worry about that.
pronoun adjective
INTERROGATIVE PRONOUNS
Mark the correct pronoun in each sentence.
1. Who / Whom / What threw away those papers?
2. Which / Whose / What do you want for dinner tonight?
3. What / Which / Whose time do we need to leave for the seminar?
4. Who / Whom / Whose backpack is that?
5. Which / Who / Whom calendar should I put the meeting on?
INDEFINITE PRONOUNS
Mark the correct verb in each sentence. (Don’t overthink it—what “sounds
right” probably is.)
1. Before we go out, let’s make sure our homework is / are done.
2. The square root of nine? Everybody knows / know that!
3. Some of our friends is / are part of that club.
4. Does / Do anyone know the way to Hudson Bay?
5. Both of the hallways leads / lead to the main auditorium.
DUMMY SUBJECTS
Rewrite each sentence without using a dummy subject.
1. It is Venice where they want to go on their honeymoon.
2. There was one factor that was ignored by proponents of the plan, and
that was unintended water contamination.
3. After the storm, there were a number of houses and businesses that
reported damage.
4. It is suggested on the writing website that writers should avoid using
dummy subjects.
5. It is the consensus of experts that direct, concise sentences are easier to
understand.
2. I like to think I judge a book by its / it’s content instead of its / it’s cover.
5. Please hand your ticket to John or I / me when you are ready to go in.
6. We plan to vote for the politician who / whom best represents our interests.
10. The jazz band and the dance ensemble had its / their annual joint concert
last weekend.
17. Everyone in the group was / were exhausted and just wanted to sleep.
18. Sam and I / me / myself have solos in the upcoming performance.
For questions 19–25, match the pronoun with its category. (Some might match
with more than one category!)
possessive
19. he
indefinite
22. that
relative
23. anyone
reflexive
25. your
So we would have four Amish wooden chairs, or sturdy big white chairs, or
four sturdy big white Amish wooden chairs. If the noun happens to be a
compound, like “dining chairs,” the compounding adjective is closest to the
noun: four sturdy big white Amish wooden dining chairs.
Not surprisingly, you will occasionally come across exceptions to this order,
such as big bad wolf. See section 16.4.5 for guidelines on when to use commas
to separate lists of adjectives, as in a friendly, welcoming place and a frustrating,
exhausting day.
ORDER OF ADJECTIVES
Rewrite each phrase with the list of adjectives in the correct order.
1. new / black / expensive dress
2. green / little / several aliens
3. stinking / hot / big mess
4. Russian / colorful / wooden toy
5. fluffy / three / white kittens
COMPOUND ADJECTIVES
Change each phrase into a compound adjective.
1. an opportunity that comes once in a lifetime →
a __________________ opportunity
2. negotiations at a high level →
____________________ negotiations
3. the owner of a small business →
the ________________owner
4. skills in speech writing →
_______________________ skills
5. a signal from ship to shore →
a ____________________signal
11.6 Intensifiers
Some adverbs (see chapter 12), called intensifiers—words such as really, very,
pretty, fairly, quite, and so on—indicate how much of an adjective’s quality the
noun has. Intensifiers are common in speech but should be used sparingly in
writing because without verbal and visual cues from a speaker, they’re often so
vague they are meaningless. The famous newspaper editor William Allen White
had a directive in the style guide for his paper, the Emporia Gazette: “Very: If
you must use this word, the Boss says to make it read ‘damn.’ Then the copy
editor will be sure to spot it and kill it.”
If you find yourself writing with intensifiers, stop and think about whether
you could use a stronger adjective instead: Really big? How about huge? Very
tasty? How about delicious? You won’t always be able to do it, but even doing it
some of the time will make your writing clearer and more interesting.
1. ___ French
2. ___ little
3. ___ triangular
4. ___ two
5. ___ silk
6. ___ old
7. ___ green
8. ___ gorgeous
9. Darren is fast, but he’s not the __________________ runner on the squad.
10. Natasha looks young for her age, but her sister looks __________________.
11. They told us it wasn’t that far off the road, but it’s __________________
than we thought.
12. Nick is smart; in fact, he’s one of the __________________ people I know.
13. This meeting is important, but the call I have to take is
_________________.
14. She loves Key West because it’s so peaceful. She says it’s the
_________________ place she’s visited.
15. The hummus here is good, but the baba ghanoush is even
__________________.
For questions 16–20, identify what kind of adjective the underlined word is.
18. The German chocolate cake was the first one gone.
comparative
superlative
proper
compound
indefinite
19. Any coat left in the library will be turned in to the main office.
comparative
superlative
proper
compound
indefinite
Adverbs are often formed by adding -ly to an adjective, such as quickly and
beautifully, but not all adverbs end in -ly (such as well) and not all words ending
in -ly are adverbs (for example, costly, deadly, and neighborly are all adjectives).
Some words have the same forms for adjectives and adverbs, such as fast, hard,
and early. Occasionally an adjective generates two adverb forms with different
meanings—for instance, right gives us both right (as in correctly: Make sure you
spell her name right) and rightly (as in properly or appropriately: He rightly
brought up that we couldn’t vote without a quorum).
Like adjectives (see section 11.2), adverbs can have comparative and
superlative forms: Harry speaks Chinese more fluently than we expected.
Claudia plays the piano better than her brother does. The colors in Jo’s painting
shone the most brightly. The vast majority of comparative and superlative
adverbs are formed with “more” and “most,” though some common ones (such
as better/best and worse/worst) have specific forms.
A piece of advice often given in writing guides is to avoid adverbs or strictly
limit them. Adverbs are perfectly grammatical and necessary in writing, but be
careful about overusing adverbs or using an adverb plus a verb or an adjective
when a stronger verb or adjective would be better (see section 11.6).
12.1 Conjunctive Adverbs
This type of adverb helps provide a transition between two ideas. It can start a
sentence or join a phrase or a clause to a sentence: The summer has been
extremely dry. Consequently, we’ve had very few mosquitoes. Common
conjunctive adverbs are therefore, however, moreover, nevertheless, likewise,
thus, and also.
If a conjunctive adverb comes in the middle of a sentence joining two
clauses, it’s usually preceded by a semicolon and followed by a comma: She said
she wanted to study in Prague; indeed, she’s going in the spring. We wanted to
change the timeline of the project; however, we were overruled.
Mark the adverb in the sentence and then indicate what type of adverb it is.
3. Though written well, the essay was riddled with factual errors.
time
location
manner
degree
conjunctive
sentence
4. Alex gave an excellent answer in class yesterday.
time
location
manner
degree
conjunctive
sentence
5. You should be extremely careful when handling fireworks.
time
location
manner
degree
conjunctive
sentence
7. Matthew rejected the revisions. Nevertheless, the journal will publish his
report.
time
location
manner
degree
conjunctive
sentence
1. Greta went out the door and met the mail carrier.
adjective adverb
5. Summoning his courage, Homer ate a ghost chili pepper at the county fair.
adjective adverb
6. Stacey is reading a book about the London sewers.
adjective adverb
7. Employees are supposed to wash their hands after clearing tables.
adjective adverb
8. That hotel is more expensive because it is on the beach.
adjective adverb
10. She liked the house with the finished basement better than the others.
adjective adverb
Answers can be found here.
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f you’ve ever seen the Schoolhouse Rock! cartoon about conjunctions, you’ll
know that they’re for “hooking up words and phrases and clauses.” (If you
haven’t seen it, it’s on the Internet—earworm warning.) Conjunctions link
elements of a sentence, and they can do this in several ways.
We bought tomatoes, squash, and zucchini at the market. (words are joined)
The twins ran out the door and down the street. (phrases are joined)
Lift the cover but don’t press the red button. (clauses are joined)
Now that you’re here, can you help with dinner? (time)
Common subordinating conjunctions include before, after, as, if, even if, now
that, once, although, though, as long as, unless, until, when, where, and while.
Some subordinating conjunctions, often ones having to do with time and
place, can have adverbs modify them: Just before your email came, I was
thinking of calling you. She used to live right where the tornado hit.
2. The Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew books are children’s classics.
coordinating correlative subordinating
3. Both the students and the faculty agreed that the policy had to change.
coordinating correlative subordinating
4. Do you want to study for your chemistry test or history quiz first?
coordinating correlative subordinating
5. He was astounded that Phish could not only improvise for 20 minutes but
also make it interesting. coordinating correlative subordinating
6. She decided to continue the relationship even though he watched Real
Housewives a bit too much for her taste.
coordinating correlative subordinating
4. She saw the damage to her car and thought, “Oh, no, I can’t afford this.”
5. I was walking down the street and then blam! The tree fell onto a delivery
truck.
6. You’re going to Paris? Awesome!
10. We’ve had so much rain that my yard is full of mushrooms, yuck.
Periods (.), question marks (?), and exclamation points (!) are how we end
sentences. Most people don’t have much trouble with these, but two stylistic
points should be noted.
After a period, put one space before the next sentence. The standard used to
be two spaces, back when everyone used manual typewriters and computer
typesetting didn’t exist. Now, computers automatically adjust the spacing so we
don’t need to type two spaces anymore.
Avoid exclamation points in formal writing: essays, reports, research papers,
proposals, executive summaries, and so on. You may need to use exclamation
points in electronic communication—even professional electronic
communication—so as not to look mad or curt, but when you do, use only one
and make sure it’s appropriate.
END-OF-SENTENCE PUNCTUATION
Add the appropriate punctuation mark at the end of each sentence.
1. What are you doing tonight
2. The sale starts at midnight
3. That foul ball is going to hit us—duck
4. Maybe Rodriguez will autograph it for you after the game
5. Do you think I should ask him
16.2.1 HYPHENS
Hyphens join compound adjectives (see section 11.4) and are sometimes used
with prefixes and suffixes. Some people love hyphens for their clarity; others
think they clutter up a piece of writing. Reasonable people can disagree on this
point, so it’s always good to check your dictionary and stylebook to see what
they say.
Hyphens can distinguish constructions such as heavy equipment operator (an
equipment operator who is heavy) and heavy-equipment operator (an operator of
heavy equipment), and 30-odd professors (around 30 professors) and 30 odd
professors (a convocation of eccentric educators).
A good guideline for whether to hyphenate a compound adjective is to
hyphenate if the modifying words are different parts of speech: mixed-up world,
frost-free refrigerator, sit-in protest, grass-fed cattle. If each word modifies the
next, or if two words are so commonly used together that they act as one, no
hyphen is necessary: oddly shaped room, hot dog bun, high school musical. Let
clarity be your ultimate guide. And be consistent.
Use suspensive hyphenation when you want to get rid of a word to tighten
up a sentence with two repetitive hyphenated constructions. You can drop the
first instance of the repeated word but leave the hyphen: InterCall is a global
voice- and video-conferencing operation.
16.2.2 APOSTROPHES
Probably the most commonly misused piece of punctuation, the apostrophe has
clear rules governing its use:
■ Apostrophes are used for possessive nouns (see section 8.2): the cat’s meow,
the book’s title, Margaret’s laptop.
■ Apostrophes are used for contractions (see section 4.4): it’s raining, you’re
wet, don’t go.
■ Apostrophes are not used for possessive pronouns (see sections 4.5 and
10.3): your book, their house, its place.
■ Apostrophes are not used for plural nouns: tacos, professors, moms.
Expressions such as two weeks’ notice and three years’ experience are
typically plural possessives and take an apostrophe. Think about them as notice
of two weeks and experience of three years. The of lets you know it’s possessive
and needs an apostrophe.
JOINING PUNCTUATION
Choose the sentence that is properly punctuated.
1.
a. That building’s foundation is concrete.
b. That buildings foundation is concrete.
c. That buildings’ foundation is concrete.
2.
a. It’s about time you got here.
b. Its about time you got here.
3.
a. The two restaurants parking spaces should be divided evenly
between them.
b. The two restaurant’s parking spaces should be divided evenly
between them.
c. The two restaurants’ parking spaces should be divided evenly
between them.
4.
a. We were ready to leave on a seven-day road trip, then the tornado
siren blared.
b. We were ready to leave on a seven day road trip, then the tornado
siren blared.
5.
a. The coalition knew a hearts and minds campaign was key to
success.
b. The coalition knew a hearts- and minds-campaign was key to
success.
c. The coalition knew a hearts-and-minds campaign was key to
success.
Colons, semicolons, dashes, parentheses, and quotation marks all serve to set off
some part of a sentence.
16.3.1 COLONS
A colon (:) signals a major break in a sentence and is used to introduce a list, an
explanation or elaboration, or examples, as in She sang about her favorite
things: raindrops, roses, kitten whiskers, and death metal. Material after a colon
may be either a complete sentence or a fragment. Formal letter salutations end
with a colon (To the Editors:).
16.3.2 SEMICOLONS
A semicolon (;) separates two independent but related clauses and elegantly
avoids a comma splice (see section 16.4.8): Curt works at Macy’s; Katy works at
Nordstrom. If you have a conjunction, you don’t need a semicolon: Curt works
at Macy’s, and Katy works at Nordstrom. The test to see whether you can use a
semicolon is to put a period in the same location. If both sentences can stand
alone, you can use a semicolon.
Semicolons come before a conjunctive adverb (see section 12.1) that falls in
the middle of a sentence: She wanted to plant a garden; in fact, she’s already
dug up a spot in the yard. The governor vetoed the bill; moreover, she warned
lawmakers such a law would have been unconstitutional.
Semicolons are also used for separating elements of a list that themselves
contain commas, so readers clearly see where a new element begins: All she
brought on the plane was a granola bar; a tablet loaded with her favorite games,
music, and apps; and her earbuds.
16.3.3 DASHES
Use a dash (—) to set off descriptive material or a comment or aside within a
sentence. Dashes are particularly useful if that extra material contains commas of
its own or needs more separation: My entire family—Mom, Dad, Jonah, and Liz
—came to watch my spelling bee. Dashes can also signify a sudden turn in the
sentence, or a special emphasis on something at the end: He’d never seen
footprints like this—seven distinct toes. Be mindful not to overuse dashes. Many
times commas will do to set off a short phrase or a single word.
Whether to use spaces on either side of a dash is a matter for your style
guide, but dashes are wider than hyphens, so don’t use a hyphen when you need
a dash.
16.3.4 PARENTHESES
Use parentheses (( )) to set off a tangential piece of information or opinion
within a sentence. Parentheses are best used with a less important fact or a side
comment. Parentheses are also used for citations in some style guides.
DIVIDING PUNCTUATION
1. Whoever takes over the department ___ whether it’s Mariel, Joe, or
Aisha ___ has a big job.
2. Only one thing is required ___ a sense of humor.
3. She referred to Mencken’s observation, ___ Love is like war: easy to
begin but very hard to stop. ___
4. He said he liked the exhibit ___ Matisse and Van Gogh are his favorite
painters.
5. The restaurant that just opened ___ my neighbor was the owner ___ is
closed already.
16.4.2 APPOSITIVES
Appositives are phrases that provide a little extra information about a noun.
They are set off with commas before and after: Freddy, my college roommate, is
having a party next month. Don’t forget the “after” comma—that’s a common
mistake. Dates and places fall into this category: On January 10, 2013, they all
went to Moscow, Idaho, for a family reunion.
16.4.6 LEAD-INS
Sentences sometimes start with a phrase or clause that leads into the main clause.
Usually these lead-ins need a comma to separate them from the main clause:
Being a top pick for the team, he tried not to let the attention go to his head.
Read it out loud, and if you pause, put a comma in.
16.4.7 CONJUNCTIONS
Use a comma after a coordinating conjunction (see section 14.1) if both verbs
have a subject: We love hyphens but hate commas (one subject, so no comma)
We love hyphens, but we hate commas (two subjects, so use a comma).
16.4.8 COMMA SPLICE
A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined by a comma. If
you can put a period where the comma is and both sentences are complete, you
have a comma splice: The dog eats cat food, the cat won’t touch dog food. To fix
a comma splice, use a period or semicolon instead of a comma, or add a
conjunction after the comma: The dog eats cat food, but the cat won’t touch dog
food.
1.
a. They saw six, old airplanes.
b. They saw six old airplanes.
2.
a. The dog had it’s front leg caught securely in the trap.
b. The dog had its front leg caught securely in the trap.
3.
a. Make sure you’re ready when we get there.
b. Make sure your ready when we get there.
4.
a. He wants pizza, she wants tacos.
b. He wants pizza; she wants tacos.
5.
a. Leave the premises immediately—or else.
b. Leave the premises, immediately or else.
6.
a. I can’t believe, I ate the whole thing.
b. I can’t believe I ate the whole thing.
7.
a. We were ready on time, however the plane was delayed.
b. We were ready on time; however, the plane was delayed.
8.
a. John purchased three items on the grocery list: peas, carrots, and
licorice.
b. John purchased three items on the grocery list: peas; carots; and licorice.
9.
a. I liked Kanye West before he got famous.
b. I liked Kanye West before, he got famous.
10.
a. Do we really need to go there; or can we stay here?
b. Do we really need to go there, or can we stay here?
11.
a. He likes to use the saying, “The darkest hour is right before the dawn.”
b. He likes to use the saying; “The darkest hour is right before the dawn.”
12.
a. Helen Keller once wrote, “Humanity, I am sure, will never be made lazy
or indifferent by an excess of happiness.”
b. Helen Keller once wrote, “Humanity, I am sure will never be made lazy
or indifferent by an excess of happiness.”
13.
a. He found a flashlight and carefully entered the dark attic.
b. He found a flashlight, and carefully entered the dark attic.
14.
a. He writes novels, but she writes poetry.
b. He writes novels but she writes poetry.
15.
a. Carol Ann likes her naive sweet roommate best.
b. Carol Ann likes her naive, sweet roommate best.
16.
a. About 1,500 people turned out for an anti-gang-violence walk on
Saturday.
b. About 1,500 people turned out for an anti-gang violence walk on
Saturday.
17.
a. The calendar app, which you can use on your phone was designed for
busy parents.
b. The calendar app, which you can use on your phone, was designed for
busy parents.
18.
a. The neighborhood kids all think the big brick house is haunted.
b. The neighborhood kids all think the big, brick house is haunted.
19.
a. Our neighbors have an old Ford, and it’s just about to fall apart.
b. Our neighbors have an old Ford, and its just about to fall apart.
20.
a. It’s time to eat kids.
b. It’s time to eat, kids.
1. When Brad and Janets car broke down they went to a crumbling ornate
mansion for help met some strange people and were never the same again.
2. Westley joined Fezzik and Inigo to disrupt the princes plans rescue
Buttercup kill the count and live happily ever after.
3. Certification requires a course of study then a practicum working with four
and five year olds.
4. Gerald Halford an infectious disease expert said the outbreak could be easily
contained but the vaccine had to be distributed quickly.
5. The Sanchezes live on the west side their house is next to the Changs.
■ Affect versus effect: I use RAVEN to Remember: Affect Verb, Effect Noun.
This isn’t 100 percent effective (each can be a noun or a verb in specific
situations), but it works most of the time in everyday writing.
■ Peak versus peek versus pique: You pEEk with your EyEs. A peak is a
mountain and a capital A looks like a mountain. Pique is much less common,
but it can be a noun (a fit of pique) or a verb (pique your curiosity).
■ Peddle versus pedal: Peddle means to sell, and pedal is what you do on your
bike. There isn’t a nifty trick to remember this one, so if you’re not sure,
look it up.
■ Palette versus palate versus pallet: A palette is what a painter uses or is a
color scheme. Palate is the roof of your mouth or your sense of taste. A
pallet is a thin mat or one of those wooden platforms cargo is shipped on.
There’s also no easy trick with this one, so look it up if you need to.
■ Apart versus a part: Apart is an adverb or a preposition meaning
“separated.” They can never tear us apart. A part is a noun, which means
that if you can drop an adjective between a and part, you want the two-word
version. A (key) part of the plan is civic responsibility. I would love to be a
(new) part of the company.
Rein versus reign: “ReiGn” is what kinGs do; both have a G in them. Reins
■
are for guiding horses, but also have a more figurative sense, like a new
leader “taking the reins” or someone having “free rein.”
■ Compliment versus complement: Compliments are nice things to say—both
have an I—or nice things to get when they are complimentary (free). The
two E’s in complEmEnt complEtE each other, just as colors or angles are
complementary.
■ Compose versus comprise: A whole “comprises” parts: The committee
comprises one person from each department. A whole “is composed of”
parts: The committee is composed of one person from each department.
Nothing “is comprised of” anything. The easiest way to get this one right is
to avoid “comprise” altogether.
■ Smothered verbs occur when noun + verb is used instead of a verb that
means the same thing, as in made the decision that instead of decided or
conducted an investigation instead of investigated. Smothered verbs aren’t
wrong grammatically, and sometimes they carry a specific meaning that you
need, but be careful not to overuse them.
■ Redundancy occurs when an idea is repeated unnecessarily, such as join
together instead of just join (which means to bring things together) or a
bright spotlight instead of just a spotlight (spotlights by definition are
bright).
■ Sesquipedalianism means, appropriately enough, “use of long words.”
Although you shouldn’t shy away from a word that is exactly the word you
want, even if it’s long or uncommon, don’t use a big, obscure word when a
shorter, clearer one would mean the same thing, unless you are trying to look
like a show-off.
Myth: Don’t split infinitives or compound verbs. This means not to put an
adverb between the to and the base verb of an infinitive (see chapter 6: Verbs),
or between auxiliary verbs and the main verb.
Fact: Split away—there’s no basis in English grammar not to put adverbs in the
middle; in fact, a sentence often sounds stilted or unnatural when this “rule” is
applied.
For questions 1–10, choose the best answer. Use a dictionary if you need to.
1. All sorts of artists and crafters peddle / pedal their wares at the festival.
2. They were testing to find out the medicine’s side affects / effects.
5. He wanted to know how the medicine would affect / effect him before he
drove anywhere.
11. Larissa is counting the days until she leaves for Rome.
12. The speech was full of pie-in-the-sky platitudes.
13. Even though it was raining cats and dogs, the parade marched as scheduled.
14. He wasn’t sick, but he spent all weekend lying on the floor like a beached
whale.
15. She studies astrophysics? Well, that’s a horse of a different color.
For questions 16–20, match the wordy expression with a similar, more concise
one.
For questions 21–25, match the big word with the shorter, clearer one.
acronym: an abbreviation that uses the first letter of each word in a phrase to
spell a pronounceable word
adjective: a part of speech that describes a noun, usually answering the question
“what kind?” or “which one?”
adverb: a part of speech that describes a verb, adjective, or other adverb, usually
answering the question “where?” “when,” “how?” or “why?”
agreement: the grammatical concept that nouns and pronouns and subjects and
verbs have to match each other in number
auxiliary verb: a form of be, have, or do that combines with other verb forms to
indicate tense, aspect, and mood
determiner: a word that goes with a noun or noun phrase to shape its meaning
direct object: a noun or pronoun that follows an action verb and indicates what
was done
homophone: a word that is pronounced the same as another word but spelled
differently
indirect object: a noun or pronoun that indicates the recipient of a direct object
initialism: an abbreviation that uses the first letter of each word in a phrase
noun: a part of speech that indicates people, places, things, ideas, or concepts
phrase: a group of words that work as a unit of meaning and may have a subject
or predicate but not both
portmanteau: a word formed by combining two words into one
predicate: what comes after the subject to finish the sentence: the verb, usually
plus a direct object or subject complement
subject complement: a noun or adjective that comes after a linking verb and
tells more about the subject
tense: a verb quality indicating whether an action happened in the past, present,
or future
Grammar advice is everywhere, but sometimes it’s hard to know what’s reliable
or at the level you’re looking for. Here are some resources for further
exploration:
Classic style and usage manuals (that is, some advice may be dated but
interesting from a historical perspective, and much of the information is still
valid):
The Careful Writer (1965) and Dos, Don’ts, and Maybes of English Usage
(1977) by Theodore M. Bernstein
The Elements of Style (fourth edition, 1999) by William Strunk and E. B. White:
This little guide has taken a lot of criticism recently, not because it’s full of bad
advice, but because people take it as gospel instead of guidelines. Start with it;
don’t end with it.
Writers’ guides:
Help! for Writers (2011) by Roy Peter Clark: Steps for getting ideas and putting
drafts together.
The Sense of Style (2014) by Steven Pinker: A guide for making academic and
professional writing more engaging.
Lapsing into a Comma (2000), The Elephants of Style (2004), and Yes, I Could
Care Less: How to Be an English Snob Without Being a Jerk (2013) by Bill
Walsh: Walsh’s engaging writing, interesting facts, and practical advice make
these books a delight for anyone interested in usage, grammar, and writing.
The Transitive Vampire (1984) and other grammar books by Karen Elizabeth
Gordon: Fun examples and clear explanations make these books a good way to
romp through some of the finer points of grammar.
Online advice:
1. blue / adjective
2. the / determiner
3. Yikes! / interjection
4. bus / noun
5. perform / verb
6. quickly / adverb
7. but / conjunction
8. in / preposition
9. we / pronoun
10. freedom / noun
11. scientists, Alaska, data
12. returned, calculated
13. climatic
14. once
15. from
16. you
17. can’t go, is
18. too
19. hey
20. the, the
1. it’s
2. you’re
3. should’ve
4. didn’t
5. effects (RAVEN: Remember: Affect Verb, Effect Noun)
6. caliber (preferred US spelling)
7. peek (you pEEK with your EyEs—two E’s each)
8. rein (reiGn is what a kinG does—both have a G)
9. scarier
10. puddling
11. ratted
12. armies
13. its (no apostrophe—it doesn’t mean it is)
14. kittens
15. PBS’s
16. your
17. midnight
18. November 19, 1911, (don’t forget the second comma!)
19. $3,000
20. 10,000
21. December
22. your p’s and q’s
23. First
24. ’60s
1. a
2. b
3. a
4. b
5. c
6. b
7. d
8. b
9. a
10. c
11. b
12. a
13. b
14. a
15. a
16. a
17. d
18. c
19. b
20. d
21. think
22. thought
23. had; finished
24. were
25. were growing
1. whenever / subordinating
2. and / coordinating
3. both … and / correlative
4. or / coordinating
5. not only … but also / correlative
6. even though / subordinating
7. wherever / subordinating
8. neither … nor / correlative
9. but / coordinating
10. so / coordinating
1. Wow
2. Yikes
3. Whoa
4. Oh, no
5. blam
6. Awesome
7. Holy cow
8. Wait
9. yay
10. yuck
1. b
2. b
3. a
4. b
5. a
6. b
7. b
8. a
9. a
10. b
11. a
12. a
13. a
14. a
15. b
16. a
17. b
18. a
19. a
20. b
21. When Brad and Janet’s car broke down, they went to a crumbling, ornate
mansion for help, met some strange people, and were never the same again.
22. Westley joined Fezzik and Inigo to disrupt the prince’s plans, rescue
Buttercup, kill the count, and live happily ever after.
23. Certification requires a course of study, then a practicum working with four-
and five-year-olds.
24. Gerald Halford, an infectious-disease expert, said the outbreak could be
easily contained, but the vaccine had to be distributed quickly.
25. The Sanchezes live on the west side; their house is next to the Changs’.
A
Abbreviations Quiz, here
Acronyms, here
Action Verbs and Linking Verbs, here
Adjectives Quiz, here
Adverbs Quiz, here
All about Commas, here
Aspect and Tense, here
C
Clauses, here
Collective Nouns, here
Common Pitfalls, here
Common Spelling Errors, here
Common Spelling Rules, here
Comparatives and Superlatives, here
Complements, here
Compound Adjectives, here
Compound Nouns, here
Conjugation, here
Conjunctions Quiz, here
Consistent Tense, here
Contractions, here
Count Nouns and Noncount Nouns, here
D
Dates and Times, here
Definite and Indefinite Articles with Nouns, here
Demonstratives, here
Determiners Quiz, here
Dividing Punctuation, here
Dummy Subjects, here
E
End-of-Sentence Punctuation, here
H
How to Improve Your Spelling, here
I
Indefinite Pronouns, here
Initialisms, here
Intensifiers, here
Interjections Quiz, here
Interrogative Pronouns, here
J
Joining Punctuation, here
M
Misplaced Modifiers, here
Modal Verbs, here
Mood, here
N
Nouns Quiz, here
Number (Verbs), here
Numbers, here
O
Objects, here
Order of Adjectives, here
P
Parallel Construction, here
Parts of Speech Quiz, here
Person, here
Personal Pronouns, here
Phrasal Verbs, here
Phrases, here
Pluralizing Abbreviations, here
Plurals, here
Portmanteaus, here
Possessive Pitfalls, here
Possessives (Nouns), here
Possessives (Pronouns), here
Prepositions Quiz, here
Pronoun Agreement, here
Pronouns Quiz, here
Proper Nouns, here
Punctuation Quiz, here
R
Reflexive and Intensive Pronouns, here
Relative Pronouns, here
S
Sentence Structure Quiz, here
Shortened and Clipped Forms, here
Spelling and Style Quiz, here
Subject and Object Pronouns, here
Subjects and Predicates, here
Subject-Verb Agreement, here
Subordinators, here
T
Transitions, here
U
Usage and Style Tips Quiz, here
V
Verbals, here
Verbs Quiz, here
Voice, here
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Lisa McLendon runs the Bremner Editing Center at the University of Kansas
journalism school, where she also teaches editing, writing, and grammar. She
was formerly a copy editor at the Wichita Eagle and launched her journalism
career on the copy desk at the Denton Record-Chronicle after earning a Ph.D. in
Slavic linguistics from the University of Texas. She lives in Lawrence, Kansas.
Follow her on Twitter @MadamGrammar.