Evans Argumentative Essay
Evans Argumentative Essay
Evans Argumentative Essay
Sarah Evans
Prof. Richardson
24 March 2019
Mental health is all too often looked over in modern society. With the world focusing
more on social media and politics, mental health comes with a stigma. It’s something no one
wants to talk about. Mental illness affects one in five Americans in a given year. 43.8 million
Americans suffer in silence a year (“Mental Health by the Numbers”). About 5.7 million of these
people are struggling with bipolar disorder (Doheny, Kathleen). Treatment for bipolar disorder is
still being understood. For decades, patients were being misdiagnosed with schizophrenia
(Leuchter, Andrew). This is due to the manic episodes bipolar disorder brings along. The two
modern approaches for treatment include medication and psychotherapy. Medication has been
proved effective, therapy only works for some patients. A combination of the two approaches has
Treatment for bipolar disorder is important for many to understand, especially those who
are personally affected by it or have loved ones who have been affected. Bipolar disorder affects
many of my loved ones and some of my peers. I chose this topic because researching it has
become very important to me. My grandma received electroshock therapy for her bipolar
disorder when she was young. This was due to the misunderstanding between bipolar disorder
and other mental health disorders. This contributed to her early death. Electroshock therapy
increased the amount of white matter in her brain. This caused her to get early onset dementia.
Mistakes like these have affected millions of Americans. However, it’s brought attention to the
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treatment of this disorder. My family has affected by this for years. Genetically it has been
passed on her to kids, my aunts and uncles. “Approximately 80 percent of individuals with
bipolar disorder have a biological relative with some form of mood disorder” (Gooding, Diane
C.). This means those who are diagnosed have a high likelihood of having offspring with mental
illness.
I have a friend who I personally know very well and I have been close up with her
treatment and struggles with her disorder. Her manic episodes have caused major changes in her
life. Manic episodes can be characterized by impulsive actions, euphoric mood and extreme
optimism and grandiose plans for the future. My friend was actually led to moving from her life
in Oklahoma all the way to Ohio. She was spending lots of her money and changed her friends
and environment completely around. Her specific case is characterized by a high volume of
manic episodes. She loses sleep during these episodes and sleeps her whole time during her
depressive episodes. I am able to recognize her depressive episodes by her isolation. She will
isolate herself for days which is out of her usual character. This disorder hasn’t affected my own
brain but it has affected many of my loved ones. This is why I chose to research and argue on
this topic. Helping the ones I love is very important to me and this research has enabled me to
better understand what they are experiencing and how they can experience relief. Everyone in
America should educate themselves about bipolar disorder and its warning signs and symptoms
Bipolar disorder is one of the most misunderstood mental illnesses in America. Many
misconceptions exist for this disorder. People are led to believe this disorder is much simpler
than it is. Many characterize it by the depressive state of the disorder. However, bipolar disorder
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is a complicated state of depression and mania. Depression is only half of this complicated
disorder.
Those who suffer with bipolar disorder commonly have other mental disorder as well that
makes their condition worse. Anxiety and depression are commonly seen with this disorder. The
depressive state of this disorder is made much worse in individuals who already have preexisting
depression. Depression to this extent can lead to a complete disinterest in all activities and
possibly suicide, if the condition is not controlled. The manic state of this disorder may be
exaggerated if the individual also has anxiety. This may cause an overwhelming feeling in the
with bipolar disorder attempt suicide at least once during their lives”(Gooding, Diane C).
Therefore, individuals with this disorder must seek treatment as soon as possible to avoid any
risk of suicide.
The first half of this disorder is understanding the manic state. Mania is characterized by
over commitment, irritability, and extreme euphoric mood. An extreme case of this state can lead
to delusions and psychotic acts, such as streaking in public. This is what leads to the
misdiagnosis of bipolar as schizophrenia. A manic state can last for hours, weeks, months, and
sometimes even years. During a manic episode, one may have extreme spouts of creativity and
feel very optimistic. This feels good at first. However, this can lead to detrimental effects on the
individual’s life. A manic episode can lead to reckless behavior such as spending too much
money, inappropriate sexual activity, and even investments into useless businesses. If others
don’t agree with the individual's plans or if they try to come in between their plans, the
individual may lash out and become extremely irritable with everyone around them. It is
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important to recognize a manic episode in order to avoid reckless acts and behavior that could
The other half, the more commonly recognized part of bipolar disorder, is the depressive
state. Bipolar depression is different than regular depression. Bipolar depression involves slower
speech, loss of sleep, weight gain, irritability, and guilt. There is also a possibility of bipolar
depression forming into psychotic depression, which causes the one affected to lose touch with
reality and cause “major problems in work and social functioning” (Smith, Melinda, and Jeanne
Segal). Bipolar depression is not always fixed with antidepressants. In fact, antidepressants can
In order to understand bipolar, one must also understand the different types. “According
to the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders: DSM-5 (2013), the diagnostic
manual of the American Psychiatric Association, there are several types of bipolar
disorder.”(Gooding, Diane C). Bipolar I is the typical form of manic depression, characterized by
manic episodes/a mixed episode and a depressive episode. Bipolar II is characterized by a form
of mania that makes the individual functional in day to day life. Bipolar II is characterized by
severe depression and hypomania. Hypomania is described as “a less severe form of mania”
(Smith, Melinda, and Jeanne Segal). Therefore, Bipolar II is considered less intense. The other
hypomania, making it the least intense form of bipolar disorder out of the three. The graph,
Figure 1, shows the cycles of different forms of this disorder. According to the visual, Bipolar I
has the most intense mood swings and the others dip further down into depression. These types
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of bipolar are important to understand so those who are trying to educate themselves understand
individual.
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comes to treatment.
to decades to treat this disorder. Once more people started to understand this disorder and how it
affects the brain, medication was produced. Mood stabilizers is the most popular form of
treatment of this disorder. Mood stabilizers should be used to treat all known cases of bipolar
disorder because they have been proven over time to work well, they can reduce debilitating
systems, and they are effective in helping both the manic and depressive episodes of this
disorder.
A major factor in determining the efficiency of a drug is the long term effects on the lives
of those who take it. Medication is proven the most effective and quick fix for this disorder.
Lithium is the most famous medication for bipolar disorder. This was the first major mood
stabilizer used widely for diagnosed patients. Lithium is an example of a mood stabilizer. Mood
stabilizers control manic, hypomanic, and/or depressive, mild depressive episodes in the
individual struggling with bipolar disorder. Lithium works by targeting certain cells in the brain
and “exerting neuroprotective effects” (Eunsoo Won, and Yong-Ku Kim) that help overall brain
function. Lithium is described by this author as “the treatment of choice” (Eunsoo Won, and
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Yong-Ku Kim) for all types of bipolar disorder. This is due to “the fact that lithium has
withstood several ordeals, such as the concerns on its possible fatal toxicity and difficulty of use,
and has stayed strong as the treatment of choice for BD for over six decades, proves lithium to be
a goodie.” (Eunsoo Won, and Yong-Ku Kim). The long term effectiveness of this medication
increases the quality of life for individuals affected by this disorder by keeping them level and
able to function in day to day life. For less extreme types of bipolar disorder, this medication is
also effective since it can be taken in lower doses. Lithium, the most commonly used mood
stabilizer for this disorder, has proven its efficiency over time. Therefore, mood stabilizers are
efficient in treating this disorder in individuals with all different types of this disorder.
Mood stabilizers can be combined with other medications to alleviate other symptoms
that come along with bipolar disorder. However, the side effects of these mood stabilizers have
consumers with bipolar disorder are satisfied with their current medication(s), although side
effects remain a problem”. Medication for bipolar disorder is proven satisfactory for most
patients, however their side effects still remain a problem. Difficulty sleeping is a major
hindrance in the lives of those with this disorder. Lack of sleep can cause manic episodes to
strengthen. It increases the difficulty to focus which leads to increased irritability. Therefore, in
combination with mood stabilizers, benzodiazepines (benzos) are often prescribed to help with
sleeping issues. This combination allows to optimum functioning for these individuals. The
mood stabilizer allows for a stable mood throughout the day. The benzo allows for one’s mood
to calm down. It decreases anxiety and allows for peaceful sleep. Sleep hygiene is crucial for
those struggling with bipolar disorder. Mood stabilizers helps individuals with bipolar disorder
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stay calm throughout the day. This allows for a more peaceful state of mind when entering bed
Antidepressants help with the depressive state of this disorder by bringing one’s mood up,
however, antidepressants can actually make things worse. The elevated mood that
antidepressants trigger can cause mania in individuals. Mania, again, can lead to detrimental
effects on one’s life. Mood stabilizers are often prescribed along with antidepressants. Therefore,
antidepressants are not the best route for everyone with bipolar disorder, especially those with
Bipolar I disorder, as they experience more intense mood swings. The more intense mood swings
causes a higher sense of mania when taking antidepressants. However, antidepressants helps with
depression. Many cases of bipolar disorder have depression as a prevalent state. The
antidepressant is not effective by itself since it can trigger mania. Therefore, mood stabilizers
must come into play to balance antidepressants out. Mood stabilizers should be used in the first
Another path of treatment involves cognitive behavioral therapy. In this form, mental
health professionals teach the patients how to control and recognize their distorted perception of
their surrounding environment/situations. Patients are taught how to control their thoughts little
by little in hopes of reducing the intensity of mood swings. Patients are also able to improve their
relationships with those around them with this type of therapy. “Family members and friends can
be the strongest supporters and advocates for those who have bipolar disorder or other
psychiatric illnesses” (Gooding, Diane C). Family members and friends have a big impact on
those with bipolar disorder. They have the power to help them through their mood swings.
However, this form of therapy is only effective if the patient is aware of their symptoms of
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bipolar disorder and are accepting of it. Due to the fact that many are uneducated on this topic,
Cognitive behavioral therapy also does not take away the symptoms of this disorder. This
particular disorder is hard to function normally. Especially when one is delusional and in a
severe manic state. Therefore, all the learning tools used in this therapy will not be effective
when the mind of a victim of bipolar is racing back and forth. This disorder takes so long to
identify that the victims are usually used to their old ways the finding new methods of behavior
is very hard to adapt to in an individual. This type of therapy may only be effective for a short
amount of time. In the long run, this specific type of therapy is not effective.
MD, “mild elevations in thyroid stimulating hormone (TSH) were associated with rapid cycling
in bipolar disorder”. Therefore, he and his colleagues are investigating how the thyroid could be
manipulated for helping with bipolar disorder. This form of treatment, however, is so new and
The proven most effective treatment for bipolar disorder is mood stabilizers. They have
been around for the longest amount of time and have proven, many times, even in the modern
day, to have the best results on individuals struggling with bipolar disorder. Mood stabilizers
allow for there not to be a manic or depressive state present. These medications allow for proper
If everyone knew the symptoms and warning signs of bipolar disorder, they will be more
aware of the ones around them. Millions of Americans battle mental illness every day. If
everyone knew what those with bipolar battle, they will be able to support and help the ones
around them properly. It would reduce the amount of ignorance to this disorder. People would
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realize how many people actually have this disorder. It could reduce the amount of misdiagnosis.
If those who have bipolar disorder are informed about it, they may be able to express their
thoughts to their counselor in order to receive proper treatment. This could also lead to the
misdiagnosis of other disorders. Some may read the symptoms and misdiagnose themselves with
this disorder even if they are struggling with a different personality disorder. This is why
everyone should be educated on how to treat bipolar disorder, not only to help themselves, but
Mood stabilizers show the best proven results in victims of this disorder. Allowing for
proper treatment will help millions of Americans and allow for others to help their loved ones.
Proper treatment with medication will allow for happier healthier lives for many and contribute
to a happier world.
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