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Analyse the excerpt from T. S. Eliot’s The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock with emphasis on:
1. theme and motif
2. modernist time
3. figures of speech
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Form
“Prufrock” is a variation on the dramatic monologue, a type of poem popular with Eliot’s
predecessors. Dramatic monologues are similar to soliloquies in plays. Three things characterize
the dramatic monologue, according to M.H. Abrams. First, they are the utterances of a specific
individual (not the poet) at a specific moment in time. Secondly, the monologue is specifically
directed at a listener or listeners whose presence is not directly referenced but is merely suggested
in the speaker’s words. Third, the primary focus is the development and revelation of the speaker’s
character. Eliot modernizes the form by removing the implied listeners and focusing on Prufrock’s
interiority and isolation. The epigraph to this poem, from Dante’s Inferno, describes Prufrock’s
ideal listener: one who is as lost as the speaker and will never betray to the world the content of
Prufrock’s present confessions. In the world Prufrock describes, though, no such sympathetic
figure exists, and he must, therefore, be content with silent reflection. In its focus on character and
its dramatic sensibility, “Prufrock” anticipates Eliot’s later, dramatic works.
The rhyme scheme of this poem is irregular but not random. While sections of the poem may
resemble free verse, in reality, “Prufrock” is a carefully structured amalgamation of poetic forms.
The bits and pieces of rhyme become much more apparent when the poem is read aloud. One of
the most prominent formal characteristics of this work is the use of refrains. Prufrock’s continual
return to the “women [who] come and go / Talking of Michelangelo” and his recurrent
questionings (“how should I presume?”) and pessimistic appraisals (“That is not it, at all.”) both
reference an earlier poetic tradition and help Eliot describe the consciousness of a modern, neurotic
individual. Prufrock’s obsessiveness is aesthetic, but it is also a sign of compulsiveness and
isolation. Another important formal feature is the use of fragments of sonnet form, particularly at
the poem’s conclusion. The three three-line stanzas are rhymed as the conclusion of a Petrarchan
sonnet would be, but their pessimistic, anti-romantic content, coupled with the despairing
interjection, “I do not think they (the mermaids) would sing to me,” creates a contrast that
comments bitterly on the bleakness of modernity.
Commentary
“Prufrock” displays the two most important characteristics of Eliot’s early poetry. First, it is
strongly influenced by the French Symbolists, like Mallarmé, Rimbaud, and Baudelaire, whom
Eliot had been reading almost constantly while writing the poem. From the Symbolists, Eliot takes
his sensuous language and eye for unnerving or anti-aesthetic detail that nevertheless contributes
to the overall beauty of the poem (the yellow smoke and the hair-covered arms of the women are
two good examples of this). The Symbolists, too, privileged the same kind of individual Eliot
creates with Prufrock: the moody, urban, isolated-yet-sensitive thinker. However, whereas the
Symbolists would have been more likely to make their speaker himself a poet or artist, Eliot
chooses to make Prufrock an unacknowledged poet, a sort of artist for the common man.
The second defining characteristic of this poem is its use of fragmentation and juxtaposition. Eliot
sustained his interest in fragmentation and its applications throughout his career, and his use of the
technique changes in important ways across his body of work: Here, the subjects undergoing
fragmentation (and reassembly) are mental focus and certain sets of imagery; in The Waste Land,
it is modern culture that splinters; in the Four Quartets we find the fragments of attempted
philosophical systems. Eliot’s use of bits and pieces of formal structure suggests that
fragmentation, although anxiety-provoking, is nevertheless productive; had he chosen to write in
free verse, the poem would have seemed much more nihilistic. The kinds of imagery Eliot uses
also suggest that something new can be made from the ruins: The series of hypothetical encounters
at the poem’s center are iterated and discontinuous but nevertheless lead to a sort of epiphany
(albeit a dark one) rather than just leading nowhere. Eliot also introduces an image that will recur
in his later poetry, that of the scavenger. Prufrock thinks that he “should have been a pair of ragged
claws / Scuttling across the floors of silent seas.” Crabs are scavengers, garbage-eaters who live
off refuse that makes its way to the sea floor. Eliot’s discussions of his own poetic technique (see
especially his essay “Tradition and the Individual Talent”) suggest that making something
beautiful out of the refuse of modern life, as a crab sustains and nourishes itself on garbage, may,
in fact, be the highest form of art. At the very least, this notion subverts romantic ideals about art;
at best, it suggests that fragments may become reintegrated, that art may be in some way
therapeutic for a broken modern world. In The Waste Land, crabs become rats, and the optimism
disappears, but here Eliot seems to assert only the limitless potential of scavenging.
“Prufrock” ends with the hero assigning himself a role in one of Shakespeare’s plays: While he is
no Hamlet, he may yet be useful and important as “an attendant lord, one that will do / To swell a
progress, start a scene or two...” This implies that there is still a continuity between Shakespeare’s
world and ours, that Hamlet is still relevant to us and that we are still part of a world that could
produce something like Shakespeare’s plays. Implicit in this, of course, is the suggestion that Eliot,
who has created an “attendant lord,” may now go on to create another Hamlet. While “Prufrock”
ends with a devaluation of its hero, it exalts its creator. Or does it? The last line of the poem
suggests otherwise—that when the world intrudes, when “human voices wake us,” the dream is
shattered: “we drown.” With this single line, Eliot dismantles the romantic notion that poetic
genius is all that is needed to triumph over the destructive, impersonal forces of the modern world.
In reality, Eliot the poet is little better than his creation: He differs from Prufrock only by retaining
a bit of hubris, which shows through from time to time. Eliot’s poetic creation, thus, mirrors
Prufrock’s soliloquy: Both are an expression of aesthetic ability and sensitivity that seems to have
no place in the modern world. This realistic, anti-romantic outlook sets the stage for Eliot’s later
works, including The Waste Land.
Eliot simultaneously lauded the end of the Victorian era and expressed concern about the freedoms
inherent in the modern age. “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” reflects the feelings of
emasculation experienced by many men as they returned home from World War I to find women
empowered by their new role as wage earners. Prufrock, unable to make a decision, watches
women wander in and out of a room, “talking of Michelangelo” (14), and elsewhere admires their
downy, bare arms. A disdain for unchecked sexuality appears in both “Sweeney Among the
Nightingales” (1918) and The Waste Land. The latter portrays rape, prostitution, a conversation
about abortion, and other incidences of nonreproductive sexuality. Nevertheless, the poem’s
central character, Tiresias, is a hermaphrodite—and his powers of prophesy and transformation
are, in some sense, due to his male and female genitalia. With Tiresias, Eliot creates a character
that embodies wholeness, represented by the two genders coming together in one body.
Motifs
Fragmentation
Eliot used fragmentation in his poetry both to demonstrate the chaotic state of modern existence
and to juxtapose literary texts against one another. In Eliot’s view, humanity’s psyche had been
shattered by World War I and by the collapse of the British Empire. Collaging bits and pieces of
dialogue, images, scholarly ideas, foreign words, formal styles, and Tones within one poetic work
was a way for Eliot to represent humanity’s damaged psyche and the modern world, with its
barrage of sensory perceptions. Critics read the following line from The Waste Land as a statement
of Eliot’s poetic project: “These fragments I have shored against my ruins” (431). Practically every
line in The Waste Land echoes an academic work or canonical literary text, and many lines also
have long footnotes written by Eliot as an attempt to explain his references and to encourage his
readers to educate themselves by delving deeper into his sources. These echoes and references are
fragments themselves, since Eliot includes only parts, rather than whole texts from the Canon.
Using these fragments, Eliot tries to highlight recurrent themes and images in the literary tradition,
as well as to place his ideas about the contemporary state of humanity along the spectrum of
history.
Infertility
Eliot envisioned the modern world as a wasteland, in which neither the land nor the people could
conceive. In The Waste Land, various characters are sexually frustrated or dysfunctional, unable
to cope with either reproductive or nonreproductive sexuality: the Fisher King represents damaged
sexuality (according to myth, his impotence causes the land to wither and dry up), Tiresias
represents confused or ambiguous sexuality, and the women chattering in “A Game of Chess”
represent an out-of-control sexuality. World War I not only eradicated an entire generation of
young men in Europe but also ruined the land. Trench warfare and chemical weapons, the two
primary methods by which the war was fought, decimated plant life, leaving behind detritus and
carnage. In “The Hollow Men,” the speaker discusses the dead land, now filled with stone and
cacti. Corpses salute the stars with their upraised hands, stiffened from rigor mortis. Trying to
process the destruction has caused the speaker’s mind to become infertile: his head has been filled
with straw, and he is now unable to think properly, to perceive accurately, or to conceive of images
or thoughts.
Symbols
Water
In Eliot’s poetry, water symbolizes both life and death. Eliot’s characters wait for water to quench
their thirst, watch rivers overflow their banks, cry for rain to quench the dry earth, and pass by
fetid pools of standing water. Although water has the regenerative possibility of restoring life and
fertility, it can also lead to drowning and death, as in the case of Phlebas the sailor from The Waste
Land. Traditionally, water can imply baptism, Christianity, and the figure of Jesus Christ, and Eliot
draws upon these traditional meanings: water cleanses, water provides solace, and water brings
relief elsewhere in The Waste Land and in “Little Gidding,” the fourth part of Four Quartets.
Prufrock hears the seductive calls of mermaids as he walks along the shore in “The Love Song of
J. Alfred Prufrock,” but, like Odysseus in Homer’s Odyssey (ca. 800b.c.e.), he realizes that a
malicious intent lies behind the sweet voices: the poem concludes “we drown” (131). Eliot thus
cautions us to beware of simple solutions or cures, for what looks innocuous might turn out to be
very dangerous.
J. Alfred Prufrock guides a companion through the smoggy, lurid streets of modern London as he
ponders his “overwhelming question” and worries that he is running out of time “for a hundred
indecisions.”
Prufrock visits a party of sophisticated women who “come and go / Talking of Michelangelo,” but
he feels self-conscious of his slender, balding appearance. Bored at the prospect of engaging in
social activity, he wishes to withdraw.
Prufrock becomes lost in thought, wondering whether he should “force the moment to its crisis”
or “squeeze the universe into a ball / To roll it toward some overwhelming question.” However,
he feels unable to express the nature of either his crisis or his question.
He considers himself as a side character in Shakespeare’s Hamlet, an “attendant lord” or “Fool”
who plays an insignificant part in life’s drama. As the poem ends, Prufrock imagines himself
strolling down the beach, listening to “mermaids singing, each to each” but not to him. He dreams
of lingering “in the chambers of the sea” until “human voices wake us and we drown.”
Lines 1–12
T.S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” begins with an epigraph from Dante’s
Inferno that sets a tone of both despair and candor. The condemned, corrupt statesman Guido da
Montefeltro tells Dante that he will divulge his sinful story, for he doubts Dante will ever return
to the mortal world. With the opening line, “Let us go then, you and I,” Prufrock invites readers
to hear his story, laced as it is with doubt, failure, and ruin. The “you” Prufrock addresses is both
an unnamed companion as well as readers of the poem.
Prufrock moves through a London landscape where “the evening is spread out against the sky /
Like a patient etherized upon a table.” As the journey passes through “half-deserted streets,”
“one-night cheap hotels,” and “sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells,” the bleak atmosphere
thickens as Prufrock paints a portrait of a dissolute city. Here Prufrock engages in a mode of
projection, using the physical city to reveal aspects of his own psychology. When Prufrock
describes
Lines 13–34
Prufrock briefly brings us to a festive parlor, where “women come and go / Talking of
Michelangelo.” This location seems to be the “visit,” but it proves fleeting, for his attention
returns to an outdoor scene in which a yellow, cat-like smog “rubs its back upon the window-
panes.”
Prufrock falls into a meditation, reminding himself that “indeed there will be time,” but he does
not say why he desires such consolation. Nor is it clear what he desires to do with time, for
Prufrock’s aims are scattered and abstract: “time / To prepare a face to meet the faces that you
meet,” “time to murder and create,” and “time yet for a hundred indecisions.” He has limited
time to act, but he desires more time to dither and revise.
Lines 35–74
The scene suddenly shifts back to the parlor of sophisticated women “talking of Michelangelo.”
By this point, the narrative structure of the poem is more a series of fragments, connected only
by the order in which they pass through Prufrock’s consciousness. Prufrock, ascending the stair
(perhaps to the same parlor), deliberates and considers descending, but he fears that “they will
say: ‘How his hair is growing thin!’” Prufrock is unsure, both about...
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T.S.Eliot and A Summary of The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
One of the first true modernist poems, The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock is a shifting,
repetitive monologue, the thoughts of a mature male as he searches for love and meaning in an
uncertain, twilight world.
T.S.Eliot wrote his dubious love song in 1910/11 but J.Alfred Prufrock didn't appear in print
until June 1915, when editor Harriet Monroe, with Ezra Pound's recommendation, published it in
the journal Poetry. The poem was radically different to the more genteel accepted verse of the
times and helped to kick-start the modernist movement.
Eliot's poem caught the changes in consciousness perfectly. At the time of writing, class systems
that had been in place for centuries were under pressure like never before. Society was changing,
and a new order was forming. World War 1 was on the horizon and the struggles for power were
beginning to alter the way people lived and thought and loved.
J. Alfred Prufrock is a respectable character but has seen the seedier side of life. He's getting on
in years and is acutely aware of what he's become, measuring his life in coffee spoons, losing his
hair, turning thin. He's due for a refresh, a personal revolution, but doesn't know where to start.
Yet he still wants to make his mark on the world, even 'disturb the universe' whilst throughout
the poem he appears nervous, isolated and lacking in confidence. He may be intelligent, he may
have experience but he doesn't seem to trust in anyone or anything. But who can blame him? The
world is crumbling and with it comes the fragmentation of human sensibility.
Prufrock is in a life or death situation, between heaven and hell. The city is half-deserted. You
can sense the atmosphere isn't quite right. He's looking for answers.
The epigraph, in Italian, is a quotation from Dante's Inferno, canto 27. Dante faces the spirit of
one hellbound Guido da Montefeltro, a false advisor, and the two trade questions and answers.
It's an important lead in to the poem itself as the quote conveys the idea that the answer will be
given (by Guido) because no man has ever returned to Earth alive from the hellish abyss.
T.S.Eliot's poem is the story of a modern day Guido living in a smoky, city hell. He is insecure,
lonely and loveless.
Loneliness
Relationships
Society
Time
Generation Gap
Isolation
Psychological Issues
Mental Stability
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The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
Rhyme and Metre (Meter) - Analysis of The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock is 131 lines long and is mostly loose rhyming, that is, there
is no consistent rhyme scheme and no regular pattern to the rhythm.
for example lines 23-67 contain plenty of full and slant rhyme - street/meet, create/plate,
dare/stair/hair, room/presume - and a good proportion of the rest of the poem has rhyme.
Lines 37-48 in particular have an unusual set of rhymes which not only help to reinforce
Prufrock's neurotic personality but add a comic effect to the idea that he might dare to disturb the
universe, in one minute. Check out dare/stair/hair and thin/chin/pin/thin whilst time and dare
repeat towards the end of the stanza.
These rhymes certainly give the sense of song and bring a lyrical feel to the poem.
T.S. Eliot was a great believer in using both traditional and innovative poetic techniques and
devices in his work and this poem reflects this belief.
So, for example, loose iambic pentameter, tetrameter and trimeter pop up now and again to help
keep the poem on track as it heads out into the yellow fog of the cityscape.
Note the fact that lines vary from 3 syllables to 20 (lines 45 and 102), and with well placed
enjambment the reader's ability to scan and understand can be tested to the full.
This shifting, repetitive poem is a parody of a love song; it flows then stumbles and hesitates its
way through the life of a middle aged male who can't decide where he stands in the world. Will
he venture out to find the love of his life? Now is the time to visit that room where the women
come and go/Talking of Michelangelo.
But Prufrock, the tentative male, envisages being ridiculed for having a bald patch. Time is
running out, or is it? Note the reference to the Andrew Marvell poem To His Coy Mistress in line
23 and Shakespeare's play Twelfth Night in line 52 and Prince Hamlet in line 111.
Eliot also used French poet Jules LaForgue as inspiration for his repeated women who come and
go talking of Michelangelo. "Dans la piece les femmes vont et viennent / En parlant des maîtres
de Sienne." LaForgue was one of the innovators of the interior monologue and Eliot certainly
exploited this technique to the full in Prufrock.
There are fragments of images, gloomy cityscapes, reflective inner thoughts and an uneasy
questioning self that is the anti-hero Prufrock. He is both ditherer and dreamer, a split personality
who procrastinates, who is caught between fantasy and reality.
The questions continue as the narrative progresses, an echo of the scene from Dante - will
Prufrock have the courage to act, will he have the strength to force the moment to its crisis? He
makes us think that he has sacrificed much to get to this point in his life. He has fasted, prayed,
wept, afraid for the future.
But how much of this is fiction dreamt up by a forlorn man past his best, who is constantly
frustrated because It is impossible to say just what I mean!
Is this the outcome of Prufrock's fear of rejection? He cannot bring himself to commit to his
vision - poetic, religious, amorous - he cannot even eat a peach due to a deep seated angst.
In the end he succumbs to harsh reality whilst fantasising about the mermaids who sing to each
other but who will never sing to him. Prufrock just can't snap out of this self-imposed existential
mindset. What is it he needs? Love, drugs, therapy?
Eliot's poem is full of metaphor and simile, simple rhyme and complex rhythms. By portraying
Prufrock as an anxious, neurotic individual he invites us to use his work of art as a mirror. Read
it out loud, slowly, and its intelligence and music will emerge.
No matter what sort of life we lead we might question, dare and invite others to share, before
time and fate take their toll. So you want to know how to change the universe? Sink your teeth
into a juicy peach.
The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes,
The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes,
Licked its tongue into the corners of the evening,
Lingered upon the pools that stand in drains,
Let fall upon its back the soot that falls from chimneys,
Slipped by the terrace, made a sudden leap,
And seeing that it was a soft October night,
Curled once about the house, and fell asleep.
Dante’s Hell features a lot of really smart people who repeat utterly pointless physical
gestures over and over again in small, cramped spaces.