Grammar:

he miniquizzes on the following pages will help you determine your strengths and
weaknesses in grammar and punctuation. Each section begins with a quiz. If your
score is perfect, go on to the next exercise. If you score below 100 percent, continue by
reading the instructions and doing the practice exercise.
See Appendix A for solutions to practice exercises.

Dangling modifiers
Quiz yourself
Decide whether each sentence is correct or incorrect. Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. Less expensive, we propose the second option. 0 0

2. Closing out the year end, a calculation error jumped out at him. U 0
3. Although he is only an assistant vice president, his parking space
is closest to the front entrance. 0 0
4. While Director of Communications,several pioneering ideas
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Scoring: 100%:Reward-go on to the quiz on parallelism. Less than 100%:Read the fol-
lowing guideline and complete the practice exercise.

Guideline: Avoid dangling modifiers-phrases that do not logically or clearly modify a

specific noun or pronoun. When you can't tell whom or what the introductory word
group refers to, rearrange or add to the sentence to include the proper information. Hint:
Pay special attention to the word directly after the comma. Does it belong there?

Example:
Packed in Styrofoam, you can ship the Fogg smoke detector anywhere.

Written this way, the sentence means that you are packed in Styrofoam, not the detector.
Here are two ways to correct this dangling modifier.

Solution #I:
Add the missing subject (Fogg smoke detector) to the beginning of the main statement.

Packed in Styrofoam,the Fogg smoke detector can be shipped anywhere.

Solution #2:
Add the subject (Fogg smoke detector) and a verb to the modifying phrase to make it a
clause.

When the Fogg smoke detector is packed in Styrofoam, you can ship it
anywhere.

Practice exercise
Rewrite the sentences that contain dangling modifiers. (Answers are on p. 253.)

I . After spilling the soup at today's luncheon, the new Zappo contract was lost by
John.

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 2. While I was moving the computer, the keyboard fell on my toe.
3. Preparing for the strategic planning meeting, the energy level waned.

4. By editing carefully, a writer can make just a few words hold enormous mean-
ing.

5. After checking my messages, the letter carrier brought the mail, which I read
quickly.

6. When 12 years old, her uncle was promoted t o vice president of a global cor-
poration.

7. Unless completely rewired. no engineers should handle the Zone A networking

equipment.

8. Our curiosity was aroused, seeing a large gathering of emergency vehicles in

the parking lot.

9. While circling the airport, my mind was focused on the upcoming meeting.

10. Used for only two weeks, Jim expects t o sell his laptop at a good price.

Parallelism
Quiz yourself
Decide whether these sentences are correct or incorrect. Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. The damage was worse than they had anticipated: the rugs
were stained, flood damage, and some wiring had t o be replaced. 5 a
2. Her skills for the new job included researching, organization,
and writing of long reports. 0 0
3. His prospective employer required five references, but he
had only four, so he was worried about his chances of obtaining
the job. 0 0
4. The personnel department couldn't decide between rental
and buying a third copy machine for the upcoming rush. 0 0

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Scoring: 100%:Reward-go on to the quiz on consistency. Less than 100%: Read the
guideline and complete the practice exercise.

Guideline: In a sentence or a list, present parallel ideas in parallel Form. In other words,
sentence elements with identical functions should have identical construction. To
achieve this harmony and equality of ideas, choose one form of a word, phrase, or clause
and stick to it. Why? Parallel sentence elements channel the reader's attention in the
same way as the refrain in a song-there's a familiar repetition to anticipate.

Example:
His typing is fast and he does it accurately.

Solution:
His typing is fast and accurate.

Practice exercise
In the following sentences, correct the errors in parallelism. Mark "Correct" if the
sentence is already correct. (Answers are on p. 253.)

I. The agenda for the meeting is as follows:

a. calling the meeting t o order c. taking the roll call
b. set date for next meeting d. electing new officers.

2. The safety committee voted

t o install lighting in the parking areas
t o replace handrails on the stairway
that faulty electrical outlets should be replaced
to improve clearing ice from the walks.

3. We think she is dedicated and resourceful, and we recommend her for the job.

4. When you make the list, arrange the items in order of importance, write them
in parallel form, and all the items should be numbered.

5. N o t only was the report disorganized and incomplete, but she misspelled many
words.

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Scoring: 100%: Reward-go on to the quiz on logical comparisons. Less than 100%:
Read the guideline and complete the practice exercise.

Guideline: Sentences and paragraphs should be consistenl in tense, in agreement of verbs

with subjects, and in agreement of pronouns with nouns. Consistency assures a logical
progression of ideas and helps the reader follow your meaning.

Examples: Here are three different types of inconsistency:tense, verb-subject, and pronoun. A
correct version follows each incorrect sentence.

1. Tense
Incorrect:
Today the Director of Training will appoint several new people t o the
committee. On his list were Kathy, Brad, and Li.

Correct:
Today the Director offraining will appoint several new people t o the com-
mittee. On his list are Kathy, Brad,and Li.

Incorrect:
Each of the day-shift employees start at 8:30 A.M.

Correct:
Each of the day-shift employees starts at 8:30 A.M.

3. Pronoun
Incorrect:
When someone has a cold, they should drink plenty of fluids.

Correct:
People with colds should drink plenty of fluids.

Practice Exercise
Find and underline the inconsistencies in the following examples. (Answers are on
p. 254.)

I . Sometimes a person cannot decide whether they would rather have a raise o r
a vacation.

2. The laptop computer is a time-saving, space-saving invention.They are not diffi-

cult to use.

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 3. To change the printer cartridge, first turn off the machine. Open the lid and re-
lease the red lever. D o not t r y t o lift out the cartridge until you release the
lever. Once the lever was released, the cartridge comes off easily.

4. Arriving late at work is a problem we all have from time t o time. Sometimes
we are late because family responsibilities conflict with work responsibilities,
and you feel caught in the middle.

5. He walked up on the stage, grabbed the microphone, and tells a few hilarious
jokes as an icebreaker.

6. Routine tasks we can do almost without thinking. N e w tasks require greater

concentration, but all tasks require attention t o detail. Alternating the routine
with the new refreshes us and help ensure that our attention t o detail never
wavers.

7. W e developed the new Web site after our t w o companies merged.They have
on-line support and a self-help database.

8. O n the day before her vacation, she handed in her report, answered all pend-
ing correspondence, and organizes her desk.

9. Concentration is the greater part of any skill. If a person wishes t o learn a new
skill, they must know how t o concentrate.

10. If a reader wants t o increase his reading speed, he should begin by examining
the entire book o r article in question. Once he assimilates the main ideas,
he can look at the details.You should strive t o master this technique in order
t o read more quickly.

Logical comparisons
Quiz yourself
Decide whether the following sentences are correct or incorrect. Check the appropriate
box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. The new employee's Spanish was better than many native

speakers. R 0

2. He was better prepared for his speech than any other speech
I've heard in a long time. 0

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3. The consultant's time-management study proved that our 0 0

strategy is more efficient than ITT.

4. This is among the easiest, if not the easiest, quiz I've ever taken. 0 0

Scoring: 100%: Reward-go on to the quiz for pronoun agreement. Less than 100%:
Read the guidelines and complete the practice exercise.

Guidelines:
1. When making comparisons, clearly identify the parallels or differences between
the things you compare. You can make logical comparisons only between things
of the same class.
2. If you want to make two comparisons in the same sentence, be sure to complete
the fira before starting the second.

Example:
This is one of the best products we manufacture, if not the best,

Practice exercise
The following sentences are ambiguous as they stand. Delete, add, o r rearrange
words as needed t o make logical comparisons. (Answers are on p. 255.)

I. Our policies are different from Lang Realty.

2. Boston Oil's policy on absenteeism is like Acme Industries.
3. Roy is not only one of the most progressive but also dynamic leaders in our
region.

4. 1 know the treasurer better than the general manager.

5. Jim's cash outlay amounted t o $50 more than his partner.
6. Roberto plays golf more than his colleagues.

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 7. Our health benefits are different from our competitor.

8. Sarah's sales report is better organized than her assistant.

9. My office is bigger than my manager.

Pronoun agreement
Quiz yourself
Are these sentences correct or incorrect? Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. Ingrid was clearer than me about her choice for president. 0 0

2. Between you and I, I feel that the proposal was not fair t o
minority groups.. 0 0

3. Us optimists have t o stick together. 0 0

4. If a person makes a mistake, they should admit it and not hide

the truth. 0 0

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Scoring: 100%:Reward-go on to the quiz on commas. Less than 100%:Read the guide-
lines and complete the practice exercise.

Guidelines:
1. If a pronoun replaces or functions as the subject of a clause or sentence, use

Singular Plural

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Example:
The devil made me do it. He made me do it

2. If a pronoun replaces or functions as the object of a verb or preposition, use:

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him, her; it them

Examples:
The memo praised Brian. The memo praised him.

Send the letter to Sally and Greg. Send the letter t o her and Greg.

Remember: Before choosing a pronoun, determine how you will use it in the sentence.
Also decide whether the pronoun is replacing a single or plural noun or nouns.

Practice exercise
Think cardully about the function of each pronoun in the sentences below. Circle
the correct form. (Answers are on p. 255.)

I. Between you and (I, me), the company seems on the edge of bankruptcy.

2. Two consultants, Dale and (he, him), made the decision.

3. (We, Us) architects must consider beauty as well as strength in our designs.

4. He showed (we, us) newcomers the training video.

5. Hal was more irritated about the invoice than (I, me).

6. (She, Her) and (me, I) were the only ones who could have done the job.

7. If we need t o brainstorm, I'd like t o include (he, him) and Tim.

8. Among (us, we) executives at the conference, there were many from Chicago.

9. Alice and (she, her) wrote the speech.

10. The award for the best speech of the year went t o Alice and (she, her).

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 Commas
Quiz yourself
Which sentences require commas? Supply the missing commas where needed.
I. Steven Marx who has a melodious voice is very effective on the telephone.
2. The office that he works in is spacious.
3. Anyone with Web-development skills has an edge in today's job market.

4. H e will take advice from any person he considers knowledgeable.

5. This system which has been tested in 25 major office buildings across the country is
infallible.

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Scoring: 100%: Reward-go on to the quiz for semicolons. Less than 100%: Read the
guideline and complete the practice exercise.

Guideline: Use commas before and after phrases or clauses when the information in them
offers added facts about the subject. If the phrase could be omitted because it isn't es-
sential to the meaning of the sentence, use commas to set it off.

Example:
Peter Schreiber; who began his career in electrical engineering, is the
owner of the firm.

Solution:
The clause "who began his career in electrical engineering" is an added fact
about Peter SchreiberYou could omit it and not alter the meaning o f the
Sentence-Therefore,use commas.

r Example:
All employees who work this Sunday will be paid overtime.

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Solution:
The clause "who work this Sunday" could not be omitted. It is essential t o
the meaning of the sentence because it identifies which employees.There-
fore, do not use commas.

Practice exercise
Supply the missing commas where needed. (Answers are on p. 255.)

I. Our company which employs 1,800 people is the largest manufacturer in the
area.

2. The men and women who work in management are well motivated.
3. People will usually try harder for a manager whom they consider fair:

4. The earth which has a limited amount of fossil-fuel resources can support only
a finite number of people and their homes, cars, planes, and offices.

5. Any person who is as intelligent as Donna can have a job with the firm.
6. 1 have never known a manager who was as efficient as Frank.

7. Tanya Brock who has never missed a day of work was promoted yesterday.
8. 1 believe that a firm should not manufacture any product that is useless t o so-
ciety.

9. This desk which is an antique is his pride and joy.

10. Often the people who are the loudest have the least t o say.

Semicolons
Quiz yourself
Are these sentences correct or incorrect? Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. The department's trip t o the Ice Follies was canceled;

because of the bad storm and the warning of local authorities
t o stay off the roads. 0 Q
2. The document is a fake, we found the real one in the
president's office.

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consequently, we must now rearrange the furniture.

4. Working in the training department was a wise choice for

Nancy; she is a natural with people. 0 0

Scoring: 100%: Reward-go on to the quiz on colons. Less than 100%: Read the guide-
lines and complete the practice exercise.

Guidelines:
1. Use a semicolon to link two closely related complete sentences. Independent
clauses must always precede and follow a semicolon.

Example:
W e cannot predict how long the study will take: we have never conducted
this type of analysis before.

2. Use a semicolon to precede independent clauses that begin with transition words
such as however, moreovev, therefore, consequently, or for example.

Example:
This training manual is confusing; moreover; it lacks an index and a table of
contents.

3. Use a semicolon to separate items in a list or series when any of those items con-
tains a comma.

Example:
The three people authorized t o sign checks are Vincent Cabral, the presi-
dent; Dora Bidiak, the treasurer; and LeslieTrawler; the office manager:

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Practice exercise
Insert a semicolon in the following sentences where required. (Answers are on p.
256.)

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 I. Procrastination can derail a project deadline we must all learn t o recognize it.

2. The department needs the new equipment, however, there is no room t o in-
stall it.

3. We'd like everyone t o contribute something t o the staff party for example,
bring cheese, crackers, cider, soda, cake, o r cookies.

4. When I'm on time, no one notices when I'm late, the whole ofice knows.

5. The telephone survey showed that the bank's services were little known con-
sequently, the PR department started a new publicity campaign.

6. The managers had planned t o discontinue that service however, an overwhelm-

ing customer demand persuaded them t o retain it.

7. We enjoyed our visit t o the desktop-publishing department moreover, we

were glad t o meet the staff.

8. We are tightening security therefore, we will not issue night passes this year.

9. She dislikes committee work consequently, she declined the position.

10. If you need more exercise, don't use the elevator take the stairs.

I I. We would like t o give him a farewell party however, he would prefer that we
do not.

12. We cannot meet this deadline we would like an extension.

13. He opened my mail for me while I was on vacation he even answered most of
my letters.

14. The job carries several diverse responsibilities for example, you must prepare
the budget, design and implement new systems, and oversee a staff of six.

15. We have several choices, all of them interesting.

16. The company softball team lost two out of three games this summer, but
morale remained high.

Colons
Quiz yourself
Which of these sentences are punctuated correctly? Check the appropriate box.

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I. Marianne is brilliant in her field: artificial intelligence. 0 0

2. W e need to order the following; 500 letterheads, 500

envelopes, 1,000 address labels. and 3 reams of printer paper. 0 0

3. Whoever reserves a booth early for the expo receives a

discount: one way to minimize costs. 0 0

4. Dear Monica, 0 0

Scoring: 100%: Reward-go on to the quiz on dashes. Less than 100%: Read the guide-
lines and complete the practice exercise.

Guidelines:
1. Use a colon after a name in the salutation of a business letter

Examples:
Dear Ms. Culpepper:
Dear Martin:

2. Use a colon to link a list or series to its connecting thought.

Example:
Six states are participating in the conference:New jersey Oklahoma, New
York Florida,Texas,avd California.

3. It is incorrect to use a colon after a preposition or after a form of the verb to be.

Examples:
Distribute these forms t o human resources, finance, sales, and 1.T
The departments that need these forms are human resources, finance,
sales, and 1.T
The following departments need these forms: human resources, finance,
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4. Use a, colon to introduce an amplification of a statement or idea. When used
this way, the colon replaces such words as that is, namely, orfor example.

Example:
There is only one way t o do things: the right way

Practice exercise
Decide where colons should replace commas. (Answers are on p. 256.)

I. Make an outline, headline each paragraph, begin each paragraph with a topic
sentence, and proofread for spelling and punctuation.

2. Several of our functions were outsourced within the last few years, technical
support, payroll, and shipping.

3. The nurse gave him the same old advice, drink plenty of liquids, get lots of rest,
and take vitamin C.

4. We have three salespeople in each of our four regions the Northeast, the Mid-
Atlantic states, the Northwest, the Southwest.

5. The board met in January but could not take a vote, the chair, the secretary,
the treasurer, and two members were absent with the flu.

6. There is only one thing t o dispel the midwinter gloom in this office, a party.

7. Vacation time increases with length of service, one week the first year, two
weeks the second through the fifth year, three weeks thereafter.

8. 1 cannot begin without the following equipment, a laptop with expanded mem-
ory, a scanner, a color printer, a CD burner.

9. We all know why business is booming, Christmas is a week away.

10. Dear Fred.

Dashes
Quiz yourself
Which sentences are punctuated correctly? Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. Formal words can make you sound insecure-something 7

no manager can afford. 0 0

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o r e-mail-and then moves on t o more challenging issues.

3. Please wait-until I complete the section on nanotechnology. 0 0

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Scoring: 100%:Reward-go on to the quiz on apostrophes. Less than 100%:Read the

guidelines and complete the practice exercise.

Guidelines:
1. Use a dash to indicate an emphatic pause.

Example:
He knew he had closed the sale-they asked for a contract.

2. Use a dash to repeat an idea for emphasis.

Example:
The office was cold-ice-cold.

3. Use dashes to set off an explanatory expression that needs emphasis.

Example:
The chip-which consumes only 100 mW--quickly converts text into
speech.

Practice exercise
Decide whether a dash could improve the following sentences. Some are correct
either way. (Answers are on p. 257.)

I. The suburban branch will be closed by the end of this month, unless its sales
pick up unexpectedly.
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2. He designed, produced, and distributed the posters you saw around the build-
ing.

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 3. Only one system, the XR70, can perform all the functions listed here.
4. The manager was new t o the firm, brand-new.
5. If I were you, and I'm glad I'm not, I'd rewrite the report.
6. All our employees, overseas staff included, are eligible for the profit-sharing
plan after two years' consecutive service.

7. 1 gave many specific examples, all well documented. Still, no one understood
the problem.

8. Please visit our new showrooms, the new models have arrived.
9. If this trend continues, and there is no reason why it should not, we will show
unprecedented profits this year.

10. You are the last one included in our retirement plan; you signed up just in
time.

Apostrophes
Quiz yourself
Which sentences are correct? Check the appropriate box.

CORRECT INCORRECT

I. When the package arrived in the mailroom, we were mystified

by it's contents. 0 0

2. Look what she has accomplished in only two years time. U 0

3. Genes happiness with the job was a pleasure t o see, and his
enthusiasm was contagious. U 0

4. Please use the rear entrance in the evening; i t s the only one
open after 6 P.M. 0 0

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Scoring: 100%: Go on to "Editing: Quiz Yourself." Less than 100%: Read the guidelines
and complete the practice exercise.

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Guidelines:
1. Form the possessive of a singular noun or a plural noun not ending in s by
adding an apostrophe and an s. Form the possessive of a plural noun ending in
s by adding only the apostrophe-for example, "a managers' meeting," "the two
technicians' findings."

2. Also use the apostrophe alone to form the possessive of plurals ending in es, as
in "the witnesses' testimony."

3. Apostrophes have traditionally been used to form the plural of letters and num-
bers ("mind your p's and q's"), but the more recent approach is to drop apos-
trophes whenever the meaning will not be affected-for example, "1990s" or
"CD-ROMs." Always add both an apostrophe and an s to form the singular pos-
sessive, however ("the YMHAs building fund").

Practice exercise
The following sentences need apostrophes. Put the 18 missing apostrophes where
they belong. (Answers are on p. 257.)

I. His planner always seems t o end up on Miles desk.

2. Fridays sales meeting was canceled on account of Chris Jones illness.
3. The new assistants job is t o proofread all of the defending lawyers and the
prosecuting attorneys briefs before the trials.

4. Smith & Dawsons system is the same model as Royal Regions.

5. Jims insistence that he can't work with Mary makes the offices atmosphere
tense.

6. Womens retirement needs are different from mens because statistically they
live longer.

7. Sudden power surges can damage a computers drives and circuit boards.

8. The PCs backup system isn't working.

9. He thought Sarahs reports were more carefully researched than either Dawns
or his.

10. The X2000s cost is greater than the X IOOOs, which was developed in the
1990s.

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