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ANALYSIS OF THE POEM "ONCE UPON A TIME" (Gabriel Okara) BY Samson Mwita

ONCE UPON A TIME

Gabriel Okara (Nigeria)

Once upon a time, son

They used to laugh with their eyes:

But now they only laugh with their teeth,

While their ice-block-cold eyes

Search behind my shadow.

There was a time indeed

They used to shake hands with their hearts:

But that’s gone, son.

Now they shake hands without hearts:

While their left hands search

My empty pockets.

Feel at home!’ ‘Come again’:

Again and feel

At home, once, twice

There will be no thrice –

For then I find doors shut on me.

So I have learned many things, son.

I have learned to wear many faces

Like dresses – home face,

office face, street face, host face,

cocktail face, with all their conforming smiles

like a fixed portrait smile.

And I have learned too

To laugh with only my teeth

And shake hands without my heart.

I have also learned to say, ‘Goodbye’,

When I mean ‘Good-riddance’;

To say ‘Glad to meet you’,

Without being glad; and to say ‘It’s been

Nice talking to you’, after being bored.

But believe me, son.

I want to be what I used to be

To unlearn all these muting things

Most of all, I want to relearn

How to laugh, for my laugh in the mirror

Shows only my teeth like a snake’s bare fangs!

So, show me, son,

How to laugh; show me how

I used to laugh and smile

Once upon a time when I was like you.

INTRODUCTION

One upon a time is a narrative poem by a Nigerian Gabriel Okara that reflects how the African’s sense
of his/her identity is affected by European culture. The father in this poem regrets the compromises he
has made and that have resulted to the loss of his dignity and pride. The poet looks back at a time in the
past when people were honest, sincere in their dealings with one another. He regrets about the
behavior of the people now. He says that he wants to see the frankness of people that existed long time
ago. The poet expresses his sadness comparing his laugh to that of a snake. However as he has come
back to his senses he is yet determined to unlearn all these muting things Europeans have introduced.

THEMES

LOSS OF DIGNITY AND PRIDE

The poem centres entirely on the loss of the dignity and the pride that Africans had before the coming
of Europeans. Africans were sincere in what they do. They had true love, cooperation, and showed
honesty. Things began to fall apart after the introduction of European culture in which case both dignity
and the pride of Africans were lost altogether. The father says to his son;

Once upon a time son,

They used to laugh with their hearts

But now they only laugh with their teeth

While their ice-block-cold eyes

Search behind my shadow

COMPROMISE/CULTURAL ALIENATION

Furthermore through the poem, the poet shows that Africans have compromised their culture in favour
of the new Western Culture. They have compromised the good values that held Africans together and
gave them a sense of identity and togetherness such as kindness and sincerity in what they do or feel.
Today they wear many faces depending on the context (occasion) but without feelings in the heart. The
father says:

I have learn to wear many faces

Like dresses- homeface

Officeface, streetface, hostface, cocktailface,

With all their comforting smiles

Like a fixed portrait smile.

The poet shows that even their smiles are fake ones because they keep smiling even when they don’t
mean it. They look like a smiling picture fixed on the wall that keeps smiling. As he has now come to his
senses and discovered the compromise he has made, he wants to unlearn these things and go back to
the basics.

HYPOCRISY

Hypocrisy can simply be defined as pretending to be what you are not. Moreover through the poem the
poet shows the highest level of hypocrisy that Africans have inherited from Europeans. The current
situation shows that there are people who show you a happy face while deep in their hearts they are
filled with hatred towards you. They outwardly say goodbye (wishing you a nice departure) but deep in
their hearts they mean Good-riddance (they are happy for getting rid of you). They say they are glad to
meet you while in fact there is no gladness in them, and they will say it’s been nice talking to you while
they mean that you have actually bored them. This is hypocrisy of the highest order. The father says to
his son

I have also learned to say Goodbye

When I mean Goodriddance

Without being glad; and to say “It’s been

Nice talking to you” after being bored.

The speaker tells us that he has learnt to deal with this fake, insincere world by changing himself to one
of those people. Like others, he too hides his real feelings. He says that he has learnt “to wear many
faces like dresses” Just like people keep changing dresses to suit different occasions, the poet has
learnt to behave differently in different situations.

EFFECTS OF EUROPEAN CULTURE

Ever since the coming of Europeans to Africa, Africans have adopted many things from Europe. Initially,
Africans were sincere in everything they do; they showed passion for each other, but now hypocrisy has
become the way of life. The persona regrets and longs to go back to his natural African identity and
culture. He wants to behave the way he used to behave. The persona says;

But believe me son

I want to be what I used to be

When I was like you. I want

To unlearn all these muting things.

AWARENESS AND IDENTITY

The persona is aware of his African identity and he is aware of the potential changes that have occurred
to him and in fact to his fellow Africans. Africans have adopted the culture that is not in line with their
core African values. As he becomes aware of the loss of his African identity he wants to sharply take a u-
turn and go back to correct the mistake he has done. He is determined to regain the honesty he had in
everything he used to do. He says to his son;

So show me son

How to laugh; show me how

I used to laugh and smile

Once upon a time when I was like you.

Showing his determination to regain his lost sense of African Identity, he adds; But believe me son

I want to be what I used to be

To unlearn all these muting things

STRUGGLE FOR CHANGE

The persona is struggling for change. He calls upon the Africans to be aware of where they came from,
where they are, and where they were supposed to be. The persona shows a sense of regret due to the
fact that Africans are gradually losing their good values and identity unawares. This is a wakeup call that
will invite all willing Africans to go back to embrace our good values. He says;

. ..I want

To unlearn all these muting things

Most of all I want to relearn

How to laugh....

Here ‘muting’ may be like the poet has learnt to behave in such a way that it ‘mutes’ or
‘silences’ his real feelings. He tells his son that he wants to get rid of this false laugh showing only the
teeth. The comparison of his laugh in the mirror to a snake’s bare fangs brings out the fact that the
smile is artificial and might be dangerous. The persona regrets his fake behaviour and so expresses his
desire to unlearn all those bad things and learn how to laugh sincerely.

THE INNOCENCE OF CHILDREN

The innocence of children is also a major theme in this poem as it is this state that the persona wants to
go back to. It is his childhood that he remembers throughout the poem, the time when things seemed so
much more real and sincere. Or maybe it is only that the persona is remembering his childhood through
the eyes of a child, when he was too young to understand how people behave. Perhaps there was no
such time when life was perfect, perhaps it is only a misconception induced by nostalgia but the persona
does not care. He says

I want to be what I used to be

When I was like you.

The poet asks his son to show him how to laugh sincerely. Children do not fake things. They show what
they feel inside. Again, the phrase ‘once upon a time’ reiterates the fact that he wants to be what he
used to be once in the past.

GUIDING QUESTIONS
Ø What is the poem about?

The poem is about the father who regrets the compromises he has made and that have resulted to the
loss of his dignity and pride. However as he has come back to his senses he is yet determined to unlearn
all these muting things Europeans have introduced and go back to embrace his African identity.

Ø What kind of a poem is this?

This is a freeverse/modern poem, but it is specifically a narrative poem as it tells a story in a traditional
monologue style from a father to his son.

Ø Who is the persona and how do you know?

The persona is a father speaking to his son. This is revealed when he says

But believe me son

I want to be what I used to be

When I was like you.

Ø What is the mood and tone of the poem?

The tone is nostalgic as the father remembers what things used to be like once when he was a child. The
persona is not pleased with the changes that have taken place. This creates a sad or unhappy mood to
the readers.

Ø Comment on the structure of the poem.

ü The poem is made up of seven (7) stanzas.

ü Stanza 1-4 have six verses each of unequal length

ü Stanza5 has eight verses

ü Stanza six has seven verses

ü Stanza seven has four verses.

Ø Comment on the rhyming scheme

The poem has irregular rhyming scheme.

Ø Comment on the language use.

The language used is simple and easy to understand. He has used oral traditional story-telling technique
“once upon a time” to enrich his style in language. This is a monologue as the father speaks to the
son but the son does not respond.
Figures of speech.

The poem contains the following figures of speech.

v Personification

While their ice-block-cold eyes Search behind my shadow

v Simile

ü I have learned to wear may faces like dresses.

ü Their comforting smiles like a fixed portrait smile

ü My teeth like a snake’s bare fangs

v Parallelism

Homeface, Officeface, streetface, hostface, cocktailface

v Consonance : once twice, but that’s gone son

MESSAGES

Ø Africans should be aware of their identity.

Ø Africans should be proud of their culture and dignity.

Ø Hypocrisy is not good. It should be discarded

Ø We should not compromise our standards in favour of European culture.

RELEVANCE

The poem is relevant in a number of ways.

Ø There are people in our societies who have been affected by loss of innocence. There are many
hypocrites in our societies. People are no longer kind as they used to be in the past.

- May 15, 2018

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6 comments:

Noojilla Srinivas26 September 2018 at 05:43

Wonderful analysis - Very useful Notes to the students and faculty members - Thanks & Regards -
Noojilla Srinivas (noojillasrinivas@gmail.com)

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SAMWITERSON 27 September 2018 at 18:18

thanks for your appreciation

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Unknown9 October 2018 at 08:50

Consonance is an eye opener to me. Thank you. Very useful and different from many other explanations.

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SAMWITERSON 24 December 2018 at 21:29

thanks for your feedback

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Unknown17 October 2018 at 12:58

Best analysis.This is actually what we want.

SAMWITERSON 24 December 2018 at 21:30

thanks

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