0500 First Language English: MARK SCHEME For The May/June 2013 Series
0500 First Language English: MARK SCHEME For The May/June 2013 Series
This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner
Report for Teachers.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2013 series for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level components and some Ordinary Level components.
Page 2 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper
IGCSE – May/June 2013 0500 12
Note: All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected
approaches in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant
knowledge and skills demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related
to and derived from the passage.
Question 1
(a) What is the name of the underwater hotel described in the passage? [1]
(b) From paragraphs three and four (Opened in…designer pyjamas.), explain, using your
own words, what the rooms are like in the underwater hotel. [2]
(c) What effect does the writer achieve by using the short sentence ‘But it is exclusive.’
(line 12)? [2]
1 mark for a partial understanding; 2 marks for a full explanation of two or more of these
details.
(ii) how the writer’s description of the programme suggests that he is being sarcastic
about it. [2]
• The way in which the writer states the obvious (about wearing flippers and so
on), presumably reflecting the instructions.
• The way he is making fun of the programme by using inverted commas for ‘Pro’
mermaid.
(e) From paragraph seven (After a short…) explain, using your own words, how guests
reach and enter the hotel [2]
(f) Explain, using your own words, what the writer means by the words in italics in the
following phrases:
(ii) ‘veered off the road in your large hi-tech caravan’ (lines 10–11) [2]
• Unrestricted; chances.
NB: the definitions above contain the essence of an answer. However, accept that
candidates may respond in different ways, e.g. at greater length.
The writer uses the following phrases to make fun of what he finds on his visit to the
underwater hotel.
Choose three of the following phrases and then explain how each one of them helps
you to understand what amuses him:
Award 1 mark for an explanation which show literal understanding of each phrase and 2
marks for an explanation which shows some appreciation of the writer’s use of language, up
to a maximum of 6.
An explanation of the phrase ‘more of a submerged caravan than a hotel’ such as ‘the word
“caravan” has associations with cheap and not very comfortable holiday accommodation,
which effectively ridicules the hotel’s claim to be luxurious’.
An explanation of the phrase ‘only spies are fish such as barracudas’ such as ‘the suggestion
that the fish are spying as if they were inquisitive’.
An explanation of the phrase ‘the secret of putting on slippers is that there is no secret’ such
as ‘by stating the obvious in this way, the writer makes fun of the excessive seriousness with
which the mermaid treats the process of putting on flippers’.
(h) Re-read paragraph five (When you check-in…) to the end of the passage.
Write a summary of what happens when you stay at the underwater hotel from when
you check-in until you leave.
[Total: 30]
Question 2
Imagine that you have just spent a night at the hotel described in the passage.
You should base your ideas on what you have read in the passage, but do not copy from it.
Address each of the two bullet points.
You should write between 1 and 1½ sides, allowing for the size of your handwriting.
Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer, and up to 10 marks for the quality
of your writing. [20]
The most successful responses are likely to select details from the passage which describe features
of a stay in the underwater hotel and will also pick up on the implied criticisms and suggestions that it
is an ‘exclusive’ but ultimately boring experience. The most successful may well elaborate on the
writer’s description of the orientation programme. There will be a clear focus on the suitability or
otherwise of the experience for the recipients of the letter. Less successful responses are likely to rely
on lifting large amounts of the original and lose focus on the requirements of the task or to engage in
telling a story about an underwater adventure with little relevance to the passage or question.
Uses and develops several ideas, both factual and inferential, from the passage
Band
9–10 about the features of the hotel. Develops details to make perceptive and
1
convincing comments as to why and why not the friend would enjoy a stay there.
Band Refers to several details from the passage about the features of the hotel and
7–8
2 makes some mainly straightforward comments as to its suitability for the friend.
Uses some details from the passage to suggest some understanding of the
Band features of the hotel. Focuses on the question and on the passage, but uses
5–6
3 material simply and partially with limited comment about its suitability for the
friend.
There is some relevance to the question with a tendency to retell the passage
Band
3–4 rather than to focus on the requirements of the question. Focuses almost entirely
4
on the features of the hotel and the writer’s experience of staying there.
May retell the passage or give occasional relevant facts. There may be
Band
1–2 examples of misunderstanding or lack of clarity in attempting to use the
5
passage.
Sentences are fluent and there is a fairly wide range of vocabulary. Overall
structure is good and sentences generally follow in sequence. Most full stops are
Band 1 9–10
correct and errors are infrequent and minor. An appropriate register is
established.
Sentence structures and vocabulary are simple, but meaning is never in doubt.
Band 3 5–6 The order is reasonable. Error may be frequent, but it does not blur meaning.
There may be an inconsistent attempt at an appropriate register.
The response is very simply written and there are occasional examples of
Band 4 3–4 blurred meaning. The structure can usually be followed. Some error is serious,
affecting meaning. The response may be over-dependent on lifted material.
Add the marks for Reading and Writing to give a total mark out of 20 for Question 2.
[Total:20]