Mse Ann Bib 1 - Brandon Gaston-2
Mse Ann Bib 1 - Brandon Gaston-2
Mse Ann Bib 1 - Brandon Gaston-2
Brandon Gaston
ENG 2 - Section 14
21 October 2020
Bidwell, Allie. “Survey: Incoming College Students Struggle With Basic Financial Literacy.”
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Literacy.
In the article, “Survey: Incoming College Students Struggle With Basic Financial Literacy”
written by Allie Bidwell engages readers in the idea that many incoming college students aren’t
educated with the tools to help them be financially responsible. The author builds credibility with
her audience throughout the article with her use of ethos. For readers, under the title of the article
is the author's name, Allie Bidwell, who happens to be the senior reporter for the articles’
also stated for readers. By explicitly stating her role for NASFAA, Bidwell is ensuring readers
can trust her findings and suggestions on college students becoming more financially literate.
The publishing outlet speaks for itself as an advocate for student financial aid support, their
throughout all activities” (Bidwell). Furthermore the author uses logos to logically convince
For the majority of the article Bidwell discusses the downfalls of students as it pertains to
their financial literacy entering college. To solidify these shortcomings, Bidwell presents the data
from a survey from EverFi that collected data from a nationally representative sample of more
than 100,000 incoming college students. By providing readers with the data for her claims,
Bidwell has provided readers with logic and reasoning for the issues she discusses. In closing,
Bidwell presents the results of another survey testing students who were financially educated
prior to college, where results found that additional education may have accounted for improved
knowledge and lower stress. All in all, Bidwells use of data and research aid in the reader's
understanding of her claim and potentially persuade them that financial literacy should be a