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structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four
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Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public
transport.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Mobile phones have become an essential part of life. Although they are very useful, they could be quite an irritant in
public places if they kept ringing. Much has changed in the recent past mobiles phones have turned into smart
phones which means that they are not used only as phones anymore. They should not be banned in public places
as they do not disturb others. In the past phones could not be customized to vibrate or be silent when there was a
call.

Nowadays, the general mindset of people and the government is to encourage the service of mobile phones
everywhere including public places for various reasons. A mobile phone today is a bank, a camera, source of news,
a mini computer and the main tool for communication. With a connectivity on the internet, mobile phones can
perform everyday chores like shopping and sometimes even work is done after the call up.

They connect to the internet through a Wi-Fi network.

Wifi can be accessed from public places including libraries, transport, cafe’s and shops, the purpose of the Wifi is
only to promote the usage of mobile phones in public places. If at all a mobile phone in a public area is a potential
problem for any reason, then a sign or a public notice asking users to keep their phones in silent mode can be
displayed.

To summarize, banning or restricting the use of mobile phones is counterproductive and does not achieve any
meaningful purpose. On the contrary, a place that restricts use of a mobile phone has few takers these days. The
most important fact is that network through mobiles is as essential as air to breathe. Banning or restricting mobile
phones must not even be considered since it does not harm anybody and there really is no valid reason to do
restrict their use.

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Linking words, meeting the

3
goal of 7 or more

Repeated words, meeting

0
the goal of 3 or fewer

0 Mistakes

5 paragraphs 308 words

65
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70
Overall Band Score

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COHERENCE AND COHESION: 6.0

? Structure your answers in logical

paragraphs
? One main idea per paragraph
9 Include an introduction and
conclusion
? Support main points with an
explanation and then an example
? Use cohesive linking words
accurately and appropriately
? Vary your linking phrases using
synonyms

LEXICAL RESOURCE: 9.0

? Try to vary your vocabulary using

accurate synonyms
- Use less common question specific
words that accurately convey
meaning
? Check your work for spelling and
word formation mistakes

GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 9.0

? Use a variety of complex and

simple sentences
9 Check your writing for errors

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TASK ACHIEVEMENT: 4.0

? Answer all parts of the question

- Present relevant ideas
? Fully explain these ideas
? Support ideas with relevant,
specific examples

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