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Ramiyah Mack- Curtis

Marta Lord

English 1301

4 December 2020

Reflective Essay

Writing essays have always been a challenge for me and I haven’t truly enjoyed writing

since about sixth grade. It might be because I constantly experience writer’s block, or I just have

no interest in the topic that the essay is on. Even now I’m stuck in the same situation that I’m

always in when writing essays. This semester confused me in the beginning and made me

question my writing abilities, but I believe my writing has improved significantly since the start

of the semester. With this being my first Composition class in college I attempted to go above

and beyond when writing my first essay. It turns out that what I thought was exceptional writing

was actually a terrible attempt at writing an essay. I had to break old habits and pick-up new

strategies to improve my writing skills. After a critical conversation with my professor, I was

able to realize exactly what I needed to change. The three main things that negatively affected

my writing was the fact that I was having trouble with organization, and I was surprised to learn

that I ramble throughout my essays.

When it is time for me to sit down and write an essay my thoughts tend to be everywhere.

One second, I’m trying to write my first body paragraph, and then the next I have started

brainstorming ideas for the conclusion. Whenever I come up with a random sentence, I always

place it in my essay. It wasn’t until my professor brought it to my attention that I realized

spontaneously placing random sentences in my essay made the writing appear unorganized. It

was difficult for the audience to understand what I was writing because I could never stay on
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track. I had to break the habit of placing these sentences throughout my essay in order to present

my information more clearly. There is still room for improvement as there are still times that I

catch myself falling back into my old habits, but I’ve gotten better at correcting my mistake. In

the end, once I was able to contain my thoughts and properly place them throughout the paper

my essays were easier to read and understand.

I also made a new discovery about the way I write this semester. I’ve never known that I

ramble throughout my essays. This is another problem that my English teacher brought to my

attention during our conference. Whenever I read my essays back to myself, they don’t sound

like there are extra sentences added in there. A good example of a time when I rambled

throughout an essay was in the third paragraph of my career evaluation essay. It is clear that my

thoughts were all over the place in that paragraph and it is hard to follow along with what the

overall message was supposed to be. There is a major change within my second final essay. The

paragraphs in that essay flow easily and provide enough information to get my point across.

This habit was not hard to break, but I did have to change the way I typically write my essays.

This problem was easy to fix because of the simple fact that all I had to do was follow a formula.

Once I started following the formula everything else fell into place. For example, the body

paragraphs in my review essay were all over the place, while the paragraphs in my report essay

were structured properly. They included a topic sentence, background information, sentences for

commentary, and a conclusion sentence. In sum, learning how to properly execute the paragraphs

in my essays significantly improved the quality of my writing.

In conclusion, the changes I’ve made in my writing have made it easier to effectively

communicate with my intended audience. I’ve learned that if I gather my thoughts and place

them in a better order than the audience will be able to understand my paper better. I also learned
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that it is best to refrain from rambling and that I should only add information necessary to

proving my topic sentence. As I progress in the future my only hope is that my writing continues

to improve. Ultimately, my writing progressively got better this semester and I’m grateful for

everything that I’ve learned.

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