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    The giant panda, also known as panda bear is a bear-like animal native to south-central China, which also originally lives in the center and western part of China. The Giant panda is a mammal which classified into the kingdom of bear, Ursidae, the species native to Central China. It lives in a few mountain ranges in China, like Sichuan and also Tibet. Now, giant panda is specified into endangered and vulnerable species due to habitat loss and very low birth rates. The panda has some unique features that make them different from other species of bear and it makes panda will be easily recognized by the large, distinctive black patches around its eyes, over the ears, and across its round body. Male

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    The giant panda, also known as panda bear is a bear-like animal native to south-central China, which also originally lives in the center and western part of China. The Giant panda is a mammal which classified into the kingdom of bear, Ursidae, the species native to Central China. It lives in a few mountain ranges in China, like Sichuan and also Tibet. Now, giant panda is specified into endangered and vulnerable species due to habitat loss and very low birth rates. The panda has some unique features that make them different from other species of bear and it makes panda will be easily recognized by the large, distinctive black patches around its eyes, over the ears, and across its round body. Male

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    The giant panda, also known as panda bear is a bear-like animal native to south-central China, which also originally lives in the center and western part of China. The Giant panda is a mammal which classified into the kingdom of bear, Ursidae, the species native to Central China. It lives in a few mountain ranges in China, like Sichuan and also Tibet. Now, giant panda is specified into endangered and vulnerable species due to habitat loss and very low birth rates. The panda has some unique features that make them different from other species of bear and it makes panda will be easily recognized by the large, distinctive black patches around its eyes, over the ears, and across its round body. Male

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    The giant panda, also known as panda bear is a bear-like animal native to south-central China, which also originally lives in the center and western part of China. The Giant panda is a mammal which classified into the kingdom of bear, Ursidae, the species native to Central China. It lives in a few mountain ranges in China, like Sichuan and also Tibet. Now, giant panda is specified into endangered and vulnerable species due to habitat loss and very low birth rates. The panda has some unique features that make them different from other species of bear and it makes panda will be easily recognized by the large, distinctive black patches around its eyes, over the ears, and across its round body. Male

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    LOOHCS DROFMAL / SSALC ECNEICS LAICOS

    C R I T I C I Z E
    E N G L I S H
    P A P E R

    VANESSA KATHLEEN

    ENGLISH INT VII

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    PARAGRAPH 1

    The giant panda, also known as panda bear is a bear-like animal native to south-central China, (punctuation) which also originally lives
    in the (grammar) center and western part of China. The (grammar) Giant panda is a mammal which classified into the kingdom of
    bear, Ursidae, the species native to Central China. It lives in a few mountain ranges in China, like Sichuan and also Tibet. The
    (grammar) Giant panda’s Chinese name is “Xiong Mao” means “cat-bear”. In the last 20th century, it became the national symbol of
    China and is now featured on the China’s gold coins. (irr) Now, giant panda is specified into endangered and vulnerable species due to

    LOOHCS DROFMAL / SSALC ECNEICS LAICOS


    NOITCUDORTNI FEIRB / CIPOT S'YADOT

    habitat loss and very low birth rates.

    Add comma (,) after "China" and before "which" at the first sentence
    Add "the" after "in" and before "center"
    Add "the" before "giant panda" at the beginning of the second sentence
    Add "the" before "giant panda's Chinese name" at the beginning of fourth sentence
    Take out the last sentence because it is irrelevant (the main idea of paragraph 1 is talking about the background of a giant panda).

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    PARAGRAPH 2

    The (grammar) Panda has some unique features that make them different from other species of bear and it makes panda will be
    easily recognized by the large, distinctive black patches around its eyes, over the ears, and across its round body. The (grammar)
    Panda has black (typo) for on its ears, eye patches, legs, arms and shoulders. The rest of the animal’s coat is white. Panda’s coat
    which very thick and wooly keeps panda to stay warm even in the cold weather. Male panda can weigh up to 160 kg,
    (punctuation) while female can weigh up to 125 kg. Even though the (grammar) panda belongs to the order carnivore, panda’s diet

    LOOHCS DROFMAL / SSALC ECNEICS LAICOS


    NOITCUDORTNI FEIRB / CIPOT S'YADOT

    is over 99% bamboo.

    Add "the" before "panda" at the beginning of the first and second sentence
    Fix the typo "for" into "fur"
    Add comma (,) before "while" at the fifth sentence
    Add "the" before panda at the last paragraph

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    PARAGRAPH 3

    As described above, we know that the (grammar) giant panda is a very unique species. Unfortunately, it can only be found in the zoo
    since it’s already endangered now. Besides, panda also has a very low birth rates (grammar). From the text paragraph above, we
    know that panda has a lot of distinguish (grammar) features, especially its fur. These features are not just for decoration, but it also
    has a benefit to support the panda itself to survive in case it’s faced with a problem or any situation.

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    NOITCUDORTNI FEIRB / CIPOT S'YADOT

    Add "the" before "giant panda" at the first sentence


    Fix the "rates" for" into "rate" (without s)
    Add -ing at the word"distinguish"

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    LOOHCS DROFMAL / SSALC ECNEICS LAICOS
    T H A N K
    Y O U
    ENGLISH INT VII

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