An Analysis of Metaphysical Conceits in John Donne's Poems: Jiapeng Du
An Analysis of Metaphysical Conceits in John Donne's Poems: Jiapeng Du
An Analysis of Metaphysical Conceits in John Donne's Poems: Jiapeng Du
Theory and Practice in Language Studies, Vol. 11, No. 8, pp. 962-967, August 2021
DOI: http://dx.doi.org/10.17507/tpls.1108.12
Abstract—In the seventeenth century British literary arena appears a unique school of poetry called
“metaphysical school”. The most remarkable characteristic of the metaphysical poetry is the original and
arresting conceits. John Donne is the forefather and the most representative of the school. Through analyzing
the sources of conceits in John Donne’s poems, this paper attempts to clarify the using of conceits in John
Donne’s representative poems, and then summarize the features and unique functions of conceits. It is hoped
that it can help readers to have a better understanding of the poet’s poetry, and grasp his thoughts.
In the seventeenth century British literary arena appears a unique school of poetry called “metaphysical school”. The
word “metaphysics” was first used by the critic and poet, John Dryden. He once criticized John Donne’s poems “affects
the metaphysics” in his book Discourse Concerning Satire (Jones, 1986, p.55). Later in 1779, Dr. Samuel Johnson
extended the word “metaphysical” to the group of poets in early seventeenth century, for example, John Donne, Andrew
Marvell, George Herbert and so on. From that time these poets are called metaphysical poets. Metaphysical concerns
are a common theme in their poems, exploring the world through rational discussion of world phenomena rather than
through intuition or mysticism. The Metaphysical poets were ignored in the 18th and 19th centuries by Romantic and
Victorian poets, but there was a new interest among readers and scholars in the 20th century who, from a metaphysical
perspective, sought to understand the pressing political and scientific upheavals. In his essay “The Metaphysical Poets”,
T. S. Eliot, in particular, saw in this group of poets a capacity for "devouring all kinds of experience” (Eliot, 1950,
p.241).
John Donne was the most outstanding of the English metaphysical poets, and was also considered a master of the
metaphysical conceit. In contrast to the deliberate fluidity and sweetness of tone in much of 16th century poetry, he
adopted an energetic, uneven and rigorous style. His work contains a healthy interest in life and its pleasures, while also
expressing deep emotion. The using of metaphysical conceits in his poems had an immense influence on the following
English poets (Wu, 2013, p.132).
This paper is to concentrate on the study of the outstanding characteristics of metaphysical conceits, and attempts to
clarify the using of conceits in John Donne’s representative poems, and then summarize the features and unique
functions of conceits. It is hoped that it can help readers to have a better understanding of the content of the poet’s’
poetry, and grasp his thoughts.
still haunted him. He changed his writing theme to religion. And his works were concerning “the decay of the physical
universe, the vanity of the world, and in contrast, the permanence of the god and spiritual values” (p.47). Divine Poems
and Holy Sonnets were written during this period. In his late time, Donne’s works reflected his deep emotions and
spirituality. He died in London in 1631 after preaching his own funeral sermon, Death’s Duel a few weeks ago.
B. The Concept of Metaphysical Conceits
Metaphysical conceit is a literary term that refers to a poet’s use of somewhat unorthodox language and language
construct to describe the quality of an everyday concept (p.48). This literary tool, devised in the 17th century, is often
used to describe seemingly intangible concepts like an entity’s spiritual and emotional qualities, for example, by using
verbose and sometimes paradoxical analogies to objects, like those from the earthly worlds deemed mundane,
philosophical, and alchemical in nature. The Petrarchan conceit is another type, and it is out of this conceit, famously
used in love poems of the Elizabethan era, that the concept of metaphysical conceit and metaphysical poetry as a genre
arose. Its use is seen by some as a dramatic tool by which writers relieved themselves from the established, expected,
and orthodox conceptual associations common of the era. Unlike the Petrarchan conceits, which formed clichéd
comparisons between more closely related objects (such as a rose and love), Donne’s metaphysical conceits go to a
greater depth in comparing two completely unlike objects (p.48).
temple”; then, if you kill this flea, you kill three lives, and commit three crimes; last, since killing this flea does not
make you weaker, and then accept my courtship will not reduce your reputation. The using of this conceit is a surprising
attempt, which made his argument reasonable.
B. Scientific Experiments and Geographical Discoveries
Scientific experimental thoughts are another obvious sign of the 17th century literature. People’s view of the world
experienced unprecedented changes. Heliocentric theory has begun to be widely accepted. The development of
navigation and geographical discoveries confirmed the existence of many new places. All these changes have affected
people’s thinking in many different ways. Donne was willing to know these new ideas and new finds. Supernatural
knowledge of the new science sparked his curiosity, and led him to form a variety of conceits. The mark of this era is
everywhere in Donne’s poetry. Petrarch’s metaphors, such as star-like eyes, golden hair and snow skin, which were
familiar to people, were hard to be found in Donne’s poetry. Instead, scientific terms one after another filled in. Love
seems to have nothing to do with science, but Donne has chosen many scientific vocabularies in his love poems. As in
the “A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning”:
Moving of th’ earth brings harms and fears,
Men reckon what it did, and meant,
But trepidation of the spheres,
Though greater far, is innocent.
Dull sublunary lovers’ love
-Whose soul is sense- cannot admit
Absence, because it doth remove
The things which elemented it (Donne, 1896, p.51).
In these lines, the poet makes a comparison between earthquake and movement of celestial sphere. Earthquakes often
happen in the ground, and could cause harm, so people are frightened. The movement of celestial sphere is the source of
earthquake, but it brings no harm to humans. Unlike those former poets, Donne regards the earthquake as the movement
of celestial sphere instead of the anger of God. The poet wants to emphasize that the separation of the couple is different
from those ordinary people. He views the separation as the movement of celestial sphere, which is holy, mysterious and
magnitude, and with no harm to our love.
if they be two, they are two so
As stiff twin compasses are two ;
Thy soul, the fixed foot, makes no show
To move, but doth, if th’ other do.
And though it in the centre sit,
Yet, when the other far doth roam,
It leans, and hearkens after it,
And grows erect, as that comes home.
Such wilt thou be to me, who must,
Like th’ other foot, obliquely run ;
Thy firmness makes my circle just,
And makes me end where I begun (p.52).
In these lines, Donne makes one of his most famous conceits: the two lovers are likened to the two feet of compass.
The conceit contains three meanings: one, the feet of one compass are closely linked, so the real separation was
impossible. Two, the feet will reunite at last, so the separation was temporary. Three, the theory of circle. In the poet’s
view, circle is the symbol of perfection. The starting point is the ending point during the drawing. A compass is used to
draw standard circle. And circle stands for perfection and satisfaction, also the symbol of harmony and unity. Donne
finds the potential similarities between the compass and couples and with this analogy, poetic metaphors and themes
achieve consensus. The perfection lies in the firmness of the fixed foot. Here, the fixed foot symbolizes the faithful of
woman. The conceit expresses Donne’s thoughtfulness as well as anxiety to his wife. Donne’s image of compass comes
from Ptolemy’s geocentricism, that is, earth is the center of the circle, and the other planet rotates around the Earth. The
comparison between the movement of the universe and lover’s separation is definitely the result of development of
science and the popularization of scientific thoughts.
Take “The Sun Rising” for another example:
Thy beams so reverend, and strong
Why shouldst thou think?
could eclipse and cloud them with a wink,
But that I would not lose her sight so long.
If her eyes have not blinded thine,
Look, and to-morrow late tell me,
whether both th’ Indias of spice and mine
Be where thou left’st them, or lie here with me.
Ask for those kings whom thou saw’st yesterday,
And thou shalt hear, “All here in one bed lay” (p.7).
In this stanza, a conceit is used: the sun is compared to a servant who is neither reverend nor strong. His job is to
scout information for the poet. Donne makes this conceit to despise the dignitaries. “I” can deny the sun by a wink, the
reason why “I” do not wink is “I” can not lose the sight of my lover. And at last, the poet commands his servant-the
sun-to inspect India and all kings whom “you saw yesterday”, then reports to his master. In addition, in this section,
unfamiliar images are written which show Donne’s erudition. Ancient India is famous for the production of spices, and
the west indie islands are rich in gold and silver deposits. Eclipse is an astronomical term: the sun will appear eclipse
with a wink of an eye. The poet uses his astronomical knowledge to disdain the sun.
She’s all states, and all princes I;
Nothing else is;
Princes do but play us; compared to this,
All honour’s mimic, all wealth alchemy.
Thou, Sun, art half as happy as we,
In that the world’s contracted thus;
Thine age asks ease, and since thy duties be
To warm the world, that’s done in warming us.
Shine here to us, and thou art everywhere;
This bed thy center is, these walls thy sphere (p.8).
In this stanza, the poet uses a strange conceit, he compares his lover to “all states” and he himself to “all princes”.
The poet believes their love is the whole world, and the sun is also being fettered in the couple’s house. Here, the sun is
still a servant: since warming the world is your duty, warming us is enough.
The poet writes astronomical knowledge in this stanza once again. According to Ptolemy’s geocentric theory, since
the sun revolves round the earth, this bed, where the two lovers enjoying their sweet love, is the core of the sun’s
movement, and the walls of the bedroom draw the orbit of the sun. From the description of the sun’s movement, it
seems that Ptolemy’s geocentricism and Copernicus’s heliocentricism both affect the poet’s thought.
In the poetry of Donne, such conceits are too numerous to mention. They seem strange and donnish at first sight
because Donne often seeks images from scientific domain where the ordinary people are not familiar with. Such
conceits, on one hand, reflect Donne’s dissatisfaction with the conventional fashion of the Elizabethan love poetry, and
trying to look for other ways for creation. But more important reason is the needs of fully expressing the theme.
Conceits like compasses, the storms and the shock of heaven and earth are influenced by the development of sailing and
rise of science. Speaking scientific knowledge in love poems is an innovative attempt both at form and content.
C. Dualism of the Secularity and Theology
Donne was born in a Catholic family but was forced to convert to Anglicanism. At his time, the modern science
began to develop; the religious believes were shaken, old and new doctrine and faith struggled. The society was filled
with a mood of suspicion disillusionment. Donne’s poetry was full of description of the relationship between human
and the God.
As a special way of thinking, the conceits have become a vehicle to combine the secular and the sacred ideas. Most
of Donne’s poetry has the dual nature of secular and sacred, it is by means of cross thinking of conceits that Donne is
able to express this idea vividly.
The feature is embodied in “The Relic”. In this poem, the hero imagines himself lying in his grave. He hopes the
gravedigger do not destroy the hair made bracelet. The hero introduces the idea that all the dead will be awakened to
revival at the last busy day, which adds a sense of sanctity to the poetry. He might take this opportunity to take back his
own soul and the soul of his lover’s, and reunite in the tomb.
The poem begins with the secular love: a couple was buried in a grave. In a sense, it is the gravedigger opens the
prelude of the story. When the grave is open, a great treasure is showed to the world-a hair made bracelet, which is
being regarded as a sacred object later. The disturbing to the dead is like a call for the resurrection at the last day.
After awakening of the soul, the two couples begin to analyze the nature of their love, and find their love is a miracle.
Even more important, they finally realize their love is only spiritual, without sex. Their love is as holy as angels. The
“holy”, here represents both the Catholic and the Puritan’s view towards holy love. It sublimates the essence of love.
The hair made bracelet is the evidence of the couple’s love; the hero does not think people should pray to him and his
lover, because people can only pray to God. In fact, the hero has put him and his lover to the equal status with God, and
their bones and the bracelet become holy things later. Donne uses this sacred conceit to praise the hero’s noble love.
Donne has never declared how great the hero’s love is, and do not make any oath, either. But he is able to explore the
hero’s love in a rational way, and make it to the extent of worship by the later generation. In this process, the sanctity of
metaphor can always be the most powerful means to help convey profound and subtle emotions.
As Donne puts in “The Flea”, “This flea is you and I, and this/ Our marriage bed, and marriage temple is”. In
religious terminology, temple is a sacred and inviolable place designed for the worship, a place to communicate with
God. The poet used the religious image to illustrate that the flea was the bridge of our love, should not be killed. “And
in this flea our two bloods mingled be. / And pampered swells with one blood made of two, / Oh stay, three lives in one
flea spare, / And sacrilege. three sins in killing three”(p.18). The lines above remind us that the St. Panick had explained
the Trinity (the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit) to the crowd with a clover. In the eyes of the common, the Trinity
is the supreme, the incomparable God’s image, the core of the Christian faith. Destroying the trinity is equal to
desecrating the Holy Spirit. The three objects, the bloods of hero and heroine, and a new life brought by the mingling of
the bloods, unite in the body of the flea. Is it the Trinity? In this way, a small flea is sublimated as the substitute of God,
so the readers are taken to a sacred religious state by the trinity of supreme. The lust of the secular and devout faith
connects together. It is Donne that can boldly express such sacred image in a secular way, which is showing the
innovation of his poetry.
IV. CONCLUSION
As a great master in British poetic history and the leader of metaphysical poets, Donne astonishes the world by his
novel and profound conceit. His powerful and vigorous, concise and simple language, together with his colloquial and
straightforward dramatic language effect, injected fresh blood into 17th century’s British poets, which sets metaphysical
poetry as a vital phase in the process of English poetry’s development. His broad knowledge, delicate feelings, fertile
imagination and subtle words, distinguish his poems. The poet’s character and the contradiction of life forced him to
record his struggling inner world in a new way, a way characterized by conceit and contemplation. Love in Donne’s
poems is not as pure as before, it is a combination of spiritual and body pleasure. And Donne is good at using
philosophical analysis and metaphysical conceits to express his point of view. His poems often contain religious
imagery, and God is not much divine. Man can share the same status with God in some cases. The abstractness,
analyticity, complexity, and contradictoriness of his work make his poets worth reading and deliberating carefully.
There is rich culture and a vast space for imagination behind his poems. This paper makes a preliminary analysis,
clarifies the using of conceits in John Donne’s representative poems, and then summarizes the features and unique
functions of conceits. The author believes there will be more and more modern readers fascinated by Donne’s
enthusiastic and intelligent way of thinking. With its unique charm, John Donne’s poetry is beautiful scenery in the
English literature, which has an everlasting influence on later generations.
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Jiapeng Du is an English teacher and lecturer at Taishan University. His research interests are mainly British and American
literature, comparative literature and English teaching.