Growing As Writer 3
Growing As Writer 3
Growing As Writer 3
Josie Martinez
Professor Jon
10 December 2021
Growing As Writer
During my first semester as a freshman at California State University, Northridge, I grew in many
areas, most notably as a writer in the course ENGLISH 115: Approaches to University Writing. My
professor helped me in strengthening my writing abilities so that I could write at the university level
throughout the semester while remaining virtual. They achieved this by providing a secure, entertaining,
and open-minded classroom environment, despite the fact that it was virtual. They designed activities to
assist me in improving my writing, along with making lectures more enjoyable by including me to help
me fully understand the material. My writing has improved throughout the Project Space, Project Text,
and Project Media essays. Due to this, it has given me the ability to analyze texts and write critically.
My writing has improved during the process of Project Space. In my essay "Khushi Virval vs.
Sofie G. L. Hansen," it is seen how reading critically has helped me progress as a writer. This essay
included reading and comparing two texts while applying rhetorical strategies such as logos, ethos, and
pathos to establish the author's purpose. When I was reading through the text, I used to only concentrate
on what the author was attempting to say with his words rather than how he was accomplishing it. Now,
when I read anything, such as an article, I can identify the usage of ethos, pathos, and logos and assess
what they are attempting to portray to the audience. I struggled with my body paragraphs throughout my
article. It was difficult at first to determine which rhetorical methods both authors used throughout the
article. However, with the assistance of my professor, I was able to evaluate the texts and determine what
rhetorical methods they were employing to make an effective argument. Reading critically has really
helped me in becoming a better writer by providing me with a deeper comprehension of any primary
During the Project Text Essay, I discussed Franz Kafka's novel “The Metamorphosis”. While
writing my essay titled "The Desire Within," I improved as a writer by communicating more clearly and
accurately, successfully citing several sources, and including an in-text citation for every source of
evidence obtained. However, I had some difficulty structuring my body paragraphs. Nevertheless, with
my professor's assistance and guidance, they were able to help me by offering feedback that would allow
me to organize my paragraphs in a way that would run smoothly and generally make more sense to the
reader. True, I have made many mistakes in my writing, but I've learnt from them, and they've helped
The Project Media Essay was the peak that demonstrated my growth as a writer. I have grown and
strengthened my writing by putting into practice all I have learnt from the previous essays I have written.
In my essay titled "Coraline," I had to extensively analyze and interpret the film Coraline, directed by
Henry Selick. I was able to construct my essay more smoothly, as well as efficiently recognize my
grammar mistakes and sentence-level structure. In this essay, I was able to better cite my sources and
Overall, my writing has certainly improved across the Project Space, Project Text, and Project
Media essays as I learned the ability to read critically and write more effectively over my time in the
course. In addition, I have enhanced my sentence-level structure, formatting skills, and successfully
corrected any grammatical errors. We must understand that fixing even minor errors can make a
significant impact on one's work. I can state that I evolved as a writer as a result of the writing faults I
made in previous essays and being able to fix my writing by visiting the LRC and asking for support. I
believe that acknowledging my mistakes is a significant step toward improvement since it will benefit me
Works Cited
Kafka, Franz. The Metamorphosis. Bantam Books, 1915. Assessed 1 November. 2021.