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CEL2103 WRITING ACADEMIC TEXTS

WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 3 - 25%

NAME : MUHAMMAD RAIMI BIN AYOB MATRIC NO : 202455 GROUP :5

Instructions:

1. Based on your Task 2, fill in the form with the improved thesis statement, topic sentences and supporting sentences.
2. Write a supporting detail for each supporting sentence by paraphrasing the original excerpts for your supporting details. Include in-text
citation for each paraphrase.
3. Provide the reference sources in APA style. You should have at least two references for each paragraph.

THESIS STATEMENT

Both psychologists and psychiatrists have similar nature of work, but they differ in the aspect of educational background.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1
TOPIC SENTENCE TO STATE SIMILARITIES
The similarity between psychologists and psychiatrists is the nature of work.

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 1 (SIMILARITY 1)


Both professions are trained to study and understand the mechanisms of the human brain.

SUPPORTING DETAIL 1
Original excerpt Paraphrase/Summary

Psychology and Psychiatry are professions that complement one [Paraphrase]


another in the study, identification and treatment of mental health An article entitled “Psychology vs Psychiatry” (n.d) stated that
problems. They cover large areas of research in the complex web of psychology and psychiatry are professions that work together to
human behavior, both normal and abnormal. investigate, identify, and treat mental health issues. They cover a
wide range of studies in normal and abnormal human behaviour.

REFERENCE (APA STYLE):


Psychology versus Psychiatry: Similarities and Differences. (n.d.). Alleydog.Com. https://www.alleydog.com/psychology-versus-

psychiatry.php#.YdaWa2hBy00

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 2 (SIMILARITY 2)


Moreover, both professions are trained to treat similar mental conditions.
SUPPORTING DETAIL 2
Original excerpt Paraphrase/Summary

The services they both provide include the assessment and [Paraphrase]
treatment of mental disorders, including mood disorders and For example, Pipich (2020) stated that both psychologists and
depression, anxiety, psychosis, substance abuse, traumatic brain psychiatrists offer screening and treatment for mental diseases such
injury, and many other conditions. as mood disorders and depression, anxiety, psychosis, substance
misuse, traumatic brain injury, and a variety of other conditions.

REFERENCE (APA STYLE):


Pipich, M. (2020, April 28). Clinical Psychology Vs. Psychiatry: Key Differences & What Each Does. Choosing Therapy.

https://www.choosingtherapy.com/psychology-vs-psychiatry/

BODY PARAGRAPH 2

TOPIC SENTENCE TO STATE DIFFERENCES


Despite the similarity in their nature of work, psychologists and psychiatrists have a distinct educational background.

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 1 (DIFFERENCE 1)


Psychologists graduated with a degree in Psychology. On the other hand, psychiatrists have a medical degree.

SUPPORTING DETAIL 1
Original excerpt Paraphrase/Summary

The main difference between a psychologist and a psychiatrist is that [Paraphrase]


psychiatrists are medical doctors who have specialised in psychiatry Psychiatrists are medical professionals who have specialised in
whereas psychologists have studied psychology at undergraduate psychiatry, whereas psychologists have studied psychology as an
and then post-graduate level. undergraduate and subsequently as a postgraduate (Seal, 2020).

REFERENCE (APA STYLE):


Seal, D. (2020, October 15). What’s the difference between a psychologist and a psychiatrist? Share Resolve: Psychologists in KL.

https://resolve.my/psychologist-vs-psychiatrist/

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 2 (DIFFERENCE 2)


The educational pathway to become professional for psychologist and psychiatrist are also different.
SUPPORTING DETAIL 2
Original excerpt Paraphrase/Summary

[Paraphrase]
The academic paths that psychiatrists and psychologists take differ For example, psychiatry places a greater emphasis on medicine,
greatly. For example, psychiatry involves a stronger emphasis on biology, and pharmacology, whereas psychology focuses on
medicine, biology, and pharmacology; psychology generally psychotherapy and human behaviour (Psychology.org, 2021).
emphasizes psychotherapy and human behavior.

REFERENCE (APA STYLE):


How to Choose Between A Career as a Psychologist or Psychiatrist. (2021, December 10). Psychology.Org | Psychology’s Comprehensive

Online Resource. https://www.psychology.org/resources/how-to-choose-between-psychologist-or-psychiatrist-career/

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