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    The document contains a student's responses to two tasks. For task 1, the student wrote three topic sentences and a restatement of the conclusion for a given thesis statement about factors contributing to a long and healthy life. For task 2, the student wrote a 300-word cause-and-effect essay on the long-term effects of physical punishment on children. The essay discusses three main negative effects: mental health issues like depression, physical injuries from harm, and difficulties with social skills and trusting others.

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    The document contains a student's responses to two tasks. For task 1, the student wrote three topic sentences and a restatement of the conclusion for a given thesis statement about factors contributing to a long and healthy life. For task 2, the student wrote a 300-word cause-and-effect essay on the long-term effects of physical punishment on children. The essay discusses three main negative effects: mental health issues like depression, physical injuries from harm, and difficulties with social skills and trusting others.

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    Name: Võ Nguyễn Nhật Quỳnh

    ID: IELSIU22346

    TASK 1: Write THREE topic sentences and the restatement of the conclusion from the
    following thesis statement:

    According to health specialists, the three possible reasons for a long and healthy life are a diet
    rich in vitamins, an unpolluted environment and physical work.

    Topic sentence 1: Firstly, our health will benefit from a vitamin-rich diet.

    Topic sentence 2: Secondly, one of the most crucial factors in living a long and healthy life is to
    reside in an environment that is not polluted.

    Topic sentence 3:Lastly, regular physical activity increases your body's condition, strength,
    mobility, and longevity.

    Restatement of conclusion: According to health experts, three factors can contribute to a person
    having a higher quality of life: eating meals high in vitamins, staying in a clean home, and
    exercising.

    TASK 2: Write a cause-or-effect essay of about 300 words on ONE of the following topics:

    1. Physical punishment refers to causing pain or discomfort in response to undesired


    behaviour by children (American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry). What
    are some possible long-term effects of physical punishment on children? Use specific
    examples to support your response.

    Some people claim that children should receive praise or gifts for good behavior, and they
    should also be receive punishment for bad behavior. However, physical punishment refers to
    inflicting harm or discomfort as a result of child misbehavior that affects both the child's body
    and social interactions as well as their psychology health.

    First and foremost, children 's mental illness suffers when they are physically punshied by their
    parents. Many parents may use physical punishment to express their disapproval to their kids, to
    uphold their authority, or just out of habit, in order to stop children 's aggressive behavior. The
    majority of children who were physically abused suffer from either short- or long-term negative
    effects. One of the most prevalent effects is that children can have some mental problems
    including depression, personality disorders and intellectual disabilities, when they were
    physically punished in childhood.

    Second, physical punishment has serious physical effects on children's bodies. The child will
    experience discomfort, medical issues, and in severe cases, as a result of physical harm. The
    severity of the injuries or any permanent harm depends on the child's age when it is injected.
    Seizures, blindness or deafness that lasts a lifetime, paralysis, mental and developmental delays,
    and, of course, death can all result from physical abuse of children. Regardless of age, the effect
    of physical punishment on a child increases with time.

    Last but not least, physical punishment has a negative impact on children's social communication
    skills. Most of them find it challenging to strengthen a long-lasting friendship that they can
    value. Children who have experienced long-term abuse lack fundamental social skills and are
    unable to interact with others in a natural way like other kids; moreover, they may have a
    difficulty in trusting others. The social repercussions of physical abuse of children continue to
    have a negative impact on the abused child's adult life.

    In conclusion, there are three main effects that have a serious negative impact on children in
    terms of their emotions, physical influence, and social interaction. To aid in children's
    improvement, their parents must refrain from doing certain things.

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