Adverbs
Adverbs
Adverbs
What is an adverb?
An adverb is a word that can modify a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. Lots of
adverbs end "-ly." For example:
She swims quickly.
(Here, the adverb "quickly" modifies the verb "swims.")
She is an extremely quick swimmer.
(The adverb "extremely" modifies the adjective "quick.")
She swims extremely quickly.
(The adverb "extremely" modifies the adverb "quickly.")
How: He ran quickly.
When: He ran yesterday.
Where: He ran here.
How often: He ran daily.
How much: He ran fastest.
In the examples above, every adverb is a single word, but an adverb can be made up
of more than one word. For example:
tomorrow
.
He lost his double chin
thereafter
.
Anne waited
apprehensively
.
Mark will sit
there
For example:
For example:
o fast, never, well, very, most, least, more, less, now, far, there
(Point 3) In real-life sentences, lots of adverbs are phrases or clauses (i.e., not
single words).
For example:
A Video Summary
If you examine the word "adverb," you could be forgiven for thinking adverbs
only modify verbs (i.e., "add" to "verbs"), but adverbs can also modify
adjectives and other adverbs. Here are some examples of adverbs modifying
adjectives:
o The horridly grotesque gargoyle was undamaged by the debris.
(The adverb "horridly" modifies the adjective "grotesque.")
o Peter had an extremely ashen face.
(The adverb "extremely" modifies the adjective "ashen.")
o Badly trained dogs that fail the test will become pets.
(The adverb "badly" modifies the adjective "trained.")
(Note: The adjective "trained" is an adjective formed from the verb "to
train." It is called a participle.)
o She wore a beautifully designed dress.
(The adverb "beautifully" modifies the adjective "designed.")
Types of Adverb
These are the main four categories. We'll discuss the others shortly. Don't
forget that adverbs can also modify adjectives and other adverbs.
o To expect the unexpected shows a thoroughly modern intellect.
(Playwright Oscar Wilde)
(The adverb "thoroughly" modifies the adjective "modern.")
o If a thing is worth doing, it is worth doing very slowly. (Burlesque
entertainer Gypsy Rose Lee)
(The adverb "very" modifies the adverb "slowly.")
In all the examples above, the adverbs have been single words, but multi-word
adverbs are common too. Adverbs commonly come as phrases (i.e., two or
more words) or clauses (i.e., two or more words containing a subject and a
verb). Below are some examples of multi-word adverbs. This list also includes
adverbs of condition, adverbs of concession, and adverbs of reason.
Type Examples
Professional writers (particularly fiction writers) don't like adverbs that end "-
ly." They consider them unnecessary clutter. If you were to attend a fiction-
writing course, you would be taught to craft words that render "-ly" adverbs
redundant. On that course, you would undoubtedly be shown this quote:
o The road to hell is paved with adverbs. (Author Stephen King)
As Stephen King advocates, if you choose the right verb or the right dialogue,
you don't need an adverb. Compare these two examples:
o Extremely annoyed, she stared menacingly at her rival.
(Critics on that course would trash this.)
o Infuriated, she glared at her rival.
(This is sharper. Your readers will know that parrots don't ordinarily lie
on the floor.)
Avoiding adverbs is a self-imposed restraint that many writers follow. It's like a
game. Upon completing their work, professional writers will often do a text
search for "ly " (note the space) to find adverbs and to re-justify their use before
submission. Remember though that if your adverb is part of the story, keep it.
o Your son is surprisingly handsome.
very bad atrocious
extremely hungry ravenous
really old ancient
incredibly tired exhausted
Many writers assert that intensifiers are so useless, you should delete them even
if you can't find a more descriptive word.
o Ireland is great for the spirit but very bad for the body. (Actor Hugh
Dancy)
(The deletion kills a word but no meaning.)
Writer Mark Twain shared this view:
o Substitute "damn" every time you're inclined to write "very". Your editor
will delete it, and the writing will be just as it should be.
Here's a good tip. Press "CTRL H". Put "very" in the Find box. Put nothing in
the Replace box. Click Replace All.
When an adverb modifies an adjective, don't join the two with a hyphen.
Remember that not all adverbs end "-ly."
o The beginning is the most-important part of the work. (translation of
Greek philosopher Plato)
As covered next, this no-hyphen rule applies only to adverbs that are obviously
adverbs (e.g., ones that end "-ly").
A few adverbs (e.g., "well" and "fast") look like adjectives. To make it clear
your adverb is not an adjective, you can link it to the adjective it's modifying
with a hyphen. The hyphen says "these two words are one entity," making it
clear they're not two adjectives.
o She's a well-known dog.
(The hyphen makes it clear that the dog is famous (i.e., well-known) as
opposed to well (i.e., healthy) and known (i.e., familiar).)
o He sold me six fast-growing carp.
(The hyphen makes it clear the carp are ones that grow quickly and not
growing ones that can swim quickly.)
This issue crops up occasionally with "well," and "well" is almost never used as
an adjective (meaning healthy) in a chain of other adjectives. So, in real life,
there's almost never any ambiguity caused by these adjectivey-looking adverbs.
Therefore, the following rule will cover 99% of situations: use a hyphen with
"well" when it precedes an adjective. Read about hyphens in compound
adjectives.
When the adverbial is at the front, it's not a serious crime to omit the comma,
but you should use one because it aids reading. When the adverbial is short
(one or two words), your readers won't need helping, so you're safe to scrap the
comma if you think it looks unwieldy.
o Yesterday I was a dog. Today I'm a dog. Tomorrow I'll probably still be
a dog. Sigh! There's so little hope for advancement. (Cartoonist Charles
M. Schulz via Snoopy)
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Key Points
o Try to render adverbs ending "-ly" redundant with better word choice.
o Put your adverbs close to what they're modifying and far from what
they're not.