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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the

primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that arts-related subjects are as important as other school subjects, especially for
primary school children. I totally agree with this statement because this can help children to discover
their talents from an early age and can increase their confidence.

One of the reasons I agree that creative subjects have the same importance as other school courses in
primary school is that it allows students to find out their potential talents early on. That is to say, school-
age is the most convenient time for students to learn more about their interests by trying different
activities as they are young enough to pursue their hobbies. They will probably not have any other
chance later in their lives to discover that because they will be busy with difficult exams when they get
older. For example, most famous singers were discovered by their music teachers at school from a
young age, and they claimed that they could not be that successful if their teachers did not find out their
talents when they were young.

Moreover, music, art and drama subjects help students to boost their confidence. That is because
creative lessons teach students how to perform in front of lots of people and give them a chance to
socialise with other students. As a result, students can realise their real potential and act more
confidently. For instance, many psychologists suggest to students who are struggling with social anxiety
to take drama lessons as it helps to enhance confidence.

In conclusion, this essay completely agrees that music, art and drama have the same value as other
subjects in primary school because it allows children to discover their hidden talents early on and
increases their self-confidence.

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the
primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that arts education is as significant as the study of other subjects, especially for
primary students. I completely agree with this viewpoint because some educational content could be
better illustrated in the forms of arts, and the study of arts is one key consideration which fosters all-
rounded growth of young students.

The arts could deliver information to students, especially to those attending primary schools, in a way
that words in textbooks sometimes cannot. Children may become bored and tired if they have to read or
listen to too much educational content in textbooks. A colorful painting or a catchy song, on the other
hand, can be much more appealing and thus more effective in conveying information to these children.
For example, the Ghen Covy song has been taught at most schools in Vietnam and has become one of
children’s favorite songs. This song has effectively highlighted the importance of hand washing as a
means of disease prevention, and has made it easier for many children to remember every step of hand
sanitization for its catchy melody and appealing dancing moves.

Furthermore, the study of arts is one factor that contributes to a comprehensive development of young
students. While academic subjects focus on children’s cognitive development, arts education help
children to develop their social-emotional skills. By singing a song or drawing a picture, these children
are likely to express their feelings and nurture their sense of community. For example, thousands of
Vietnamese children, who were encouraged by their teaching staff, drew pictures of sunflowers to
deliver messages of love and support for pediatric cancer patients.

In conclusion, the arts can sometimes be better at transmitting knowledge than textbooks, and the
provision of both academic and arts education is necessary for an all-rounded growth of young students.
I firmly believe that the study of arts should never be underestimated in any child educational
institution.

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